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Destined Together - Part 11 on Page 10 (Page 8)

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Helo people. I am really happy on how this FF is being received,In spite of my blunders in grammar and horrible writing skills. Here is my next update. Let me warn you well in advance. This is 18+ update. I wrote it much spicier but edited it to keep myself safe from being banned on the forum.LOL

Hope you'll like it.

Part 8

The sun came up yawning. He signaled the moon to rest for the day. His warm light disturbed Pratigya in her sleep. Her motion has awakened Krishna who was sleeping with her in his arms to one of the corners in the room. He saw her fast asleep. He cuddled her gently in his arms comforting her. Krishna didn't want to disturb her from her sleep. He watched her like he always did when she was asleep. He brushed away her strands resting on her forehead. He gently started to brush her hair with his fingertips. His act awoke her. Pratigya smiled at him and remembered the moments they had shared last night. Krishna took her hand in his and kissed it. "Good Morning", he wished her. Pratigya smiled and blushed. Krishna endearingly pulled her closer. He held her chin and moved forward to reach her lips with his. Pratigya pushed him back playfully and ran away from him. He ran behind her and finally got hold of her hand in the corridors. He framed her between his arms to the wall and hardly gave her any room to move.

Krishna - "Don't you know? When someone wishes good morning, you have to revert back."

Pratigya - "Good morning." She said looking into his eyes.

Krishna - "I just didn't say good morning." He teased her.

Pratigya opened her eyes wide when she understood what he was expecting. Pratigya nodded her head in a no. Krishna came closer ignoring her nod. He investigated her tender and hesitant lips. They were naturally red and had been shivering expecting at their first foreign encounter. Pratigya held his shirt at his waist. Krishna circled his hand around her waist and pulled her closer towards him. He switched positions and leaned back to the wall and pulled her closer allowing her to lean on him completely. There was hardly any air in-between them. Feeling her to his body, Krishna rubbed his thumb gently on her lip. Pratigya felt a shiver all through her body. She started to feel chills on what he just did. Krishna embraced her tighter passing on his warmth to her. Pratigya felt she will melt like butter any minute now. Krishna pushed her black free flowing hair behind her shoulder. He bent down to kiss her neck and. He planted another peck on her jaw bone. Pratigya started to breath heavy. She pushed him and freed herself from his grip. He was about to leave but he still had her hand in his. Pratigya tried to free it but his hold was very strong. Pratigya sighed to release her. Krishna laughed at her and left her hand.

Krishna - "I leave for now" he said playfully while Pratigya ran away from there blushing.

Pratigya went back to her room and shut the door. She couldn't believe what just happened. She opened up her heart for him. She doesn't even know him more than his name but she fell for him. All her worries and hardship vanished in a day. It felt like a roller coaster to her. She got her freedom from her dark world, her sister was free too. His insult tore her from within and his confession made her forget everything.

"What is happening? Everything happened so sudden. I will go mad with such happiness around me." Pratigya thought to herself. "He trusts me. He knows why I hated him and still he likes me." Pratigya cried in happiness. Why wouldn't she. She loved him and he loved her too in spite of all the odds in her life. Pratigya remembered their conversation and his promise to her. "He was heartbroken too. I will have to take care never to hurt him or do anything that reminds him of his past." She told herself.

Pratigya got hold of Komal still asleep in one of the rooms. Pratigya smiled and let her sleep. She got back to her room to get ready for the day. Pratigya stepped out of the room. She found a red suit lying on the bed. She knew who could have done that. She smiled and went back into the restroom with the suit. She looked at herself in her plum red plain anarkali suit freely flowing from her waist to her feet in the mirror. Pratigya's complexion illuminated in her bright red dress; she walked outside and her eyes searched for him.

Komal - "Wow didi, you look like a million bucks." She voiced her from behind. Pratigya smiled and saw Komal was also ready in new pair of clothes. "I found a set of clothes in the wardrobe and I picked up this dress. All thanks to Krishna." Komal explained. "I hope everything got better between both of you. I was the root cause of all the mess that happened yesterday. Am sorry Didi." She apologized. Pratigya couldn't wish for more. Both the ladies reached the dining area, but they found no one. The table had breakfast ready.

Komal - "I am thinking I will start. My stomach is grumbling. I didn't have anything from yesterday." She said eyeing the food. Pratigya signaled her to eat. But she waited for him. She looked upstairs and there was no sign of him. A servant walked in bringing more bread to the breakfast table.

Pratigya - "Is Krishna Sir not home?" she asked.

Servant - "He must be in his room. I will call him for breakfast." The servant replied and left to invite his master for breakfast.

Pratigya waited for him at the table. Komal was done and went to explore around the house and the garden. Pratigya blushed remembering the events of that morning. Krishna hugged her from behind and whispered in her ear - "Missing me."

Pratigya turned around capturing his face in her heart. She smiled at him. "I was waiting to have breakfast together."

Krishna sat next to her while Pratigya served some bread and fruits into his plate. Krishna tried to eat but his wounded hand hurt him. Pratigya pulled his hand into hers and saw it was not bandaged properly. She quickly got hold of the first aid box and started to dress up his wound again.

Krishna - "It's OK. That doesn't hurt much." Pratigya paid no heed to him. Krishna looked over while she carefully dressed his wound. She fed him the breakfast while Krishna watched her concern for him. He was clouded with memories from his past. He raised his hand stopping Pratigya from feeding him further. He had to speak to her before he moved close to her any further. He had to speak to her of his past.

Pratigya unaware of his inner thoughts looked at him clueless. Krishna got up from his chair and started to leave. "Get ready Pratigya I need to take you to some place." He told her without facing her. Pratigya was confused at his mood swings.

Pratigya sat silent along him in the car unaware where they were going. In the hurry she didn't even tell Komal that she was going out.

Pratigya - "Where are we going?" she asked

Krishna didn't care to answer her. He silently drove the car fearing on how would Pratigya react to her past. He glanced at her and could figure out that she was mad at him for not answering her questions.

"I Wish i could tell you Pratigya" he thought to himself.

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what a sweet update Day Dreaming
what is Krishna's past i'm sure he will tell her in due course. 

by the way here we have a mature audience so don't worry about the content you don't have to hold back, if you go on other forums and here they have written mature stuff too and no one has ever been banned i hope you get what i mean, Pratigya itself was a 10:30pm slot show it was mature audience compared to the other shows and here everyone is respectful to each and everyone's ff so if you want to write mature stuff don't feel like its forbidden. 

i look forward to next part. 


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Nice update ... So romance starting ... n K wants to reveal his self to P ... update soon 

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Originally posted by Khushi96

what a sweet update Day Dreaming
what is Krishna's past i'm sure he will tell her in due course. 

by the way here we have a mature audience so don't worry about the content you don't have to hold back, if you go on other forums and here they have written mature stuff too and no one has ever been banned i hope you get what i mean, Pratigya itself was a 10:30pm slot show it was mature audience compared to the other shows and here everyone is respectful to each and everyone's ff so if you want to write mature stuff don't feel like its forbidden. 

i look forward to next part. 


Thanks for the info Khushi. I will get into my writing mode and put down the best romantic scenes now.Big smileHeart

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Originally posted by dhakarn

Nice update ... So romance starting ... n K wants to reveal his self to P ... update soon 

Yeah dear, the update is coming up shortly. And thanks for being such a loyal reader. Every time i update i know you would comment and tell me how my work was. Big smile

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I am literately blushing reading back what i wroteEmbarrassed. Sometimes romance gets the best effects on you. I started missing my husband now Cry. He is miles away working in another state. Anyways here in this update i kind of united and Krishna's past is still a suspense for now. This again is a tiny-miny update as i am sick today Dead 

Enjoy reading Folks. Do leave back some comments and let me know how it was.

Part 9

Krishna took Pratigya to an abandoned park. It had a huge picturesque lake. The park looked quite beautiful and serene apart from its poor maintenance. The weather started to turn dark. There were clouds all through the sky ready for a good shower. Krishna faced away Pratigya. Pratigya was confused at his attitude. She herself was in the process of digesting the facts of her present.

Pratigya - "Krishna, I think we need to break this silence."

Krishna turned around and faced her. "YES, I have to tell you something." He said. Pratigya signaled him to go ahead.

Krishna - "I like you Pratigya. I want to start my life all afresh with you." He paused.  The tension in the air cooled down for a while. Pratigya smiled to his revelation. "I was unnecessarily worrying. May be he wants to propose." She thought to herself. "I don't know how to tell you this, I am running short of words. Pratigya ever since I saw you at the mall I kind of developed a liking for you. I found it weird at the first but I know what it is now. Pratigya every time I take your name, my heart skips a beat. Pratigya you understand me right."

Pratigya awaited him to complete and make her moments special. She nodded.

Krishna - "Ever since I knew what life is, I have been betrayed by it. I haven't seen any happiness. I am unable to tell you Pratigya." He felt uncomforted and turned away to face the lake again. Pratigya walked to him and put her hand on his shoulder. Krishna turned around to her.

Pratigya - "Krishna, your past doesn't matter to me. I know you're having a tough time and battling your inner consciousness to tell me. But Krishna I want your present and I also want to live with your present. What happened can never be changed and we have no control on what can happen tomorrow. Today is what I always believe in."

Krishna listened to her while she took looked away facing the lake. The gentle breeze pushed the little waves in the lake. They made a soothing sound.

Pratigya had tears in her eyes - "I saw how bad life can turn into. I trusted a man but he pushed us into the dark and left. When I saw no hope in life and admitted my fate, you came in. You changed my life overnight and gave me new reason to live."

Krishna - "Pratigya", before he could complete Pratigya put her fingers on his lips. "Krishna, I don't know why in spite of all the lessons life taught me, I trust you. I trusted you that day when you took me away in your car at the mall. I trust you even today and will do so forever from now."

Krishna was moved by her emotions. He slowly pulled her towards him and hugged her. Pratigya hugged him back and cried out her sorrow. "Someone was true Pratigya; LOVE can happen anytime, to anyone." Krishna hugged her tight not letting her to move an inch from his grasp. "I will not let my past bother us and will keep you happy always" he thought.

Krishna - "Pratigya"

Pratigya - "Did I mention I like my name in your voice?"

Krishna held her tight and in no time it started to rain. Rain has drenched both of them. Krishna and Pratigya didn't bother. Krishna moved back breaking the hug. He sat down on his knee holding her hand.

Krishna - "Marry me Pratigya." He asked her hand in marriage.

Pratigya looked worried. Krishna got back on his feet "You can take your time if you don't want to tell me know. I will wait."

Pratigya paused for a minute and looked back at Krishna - "What do you know about me Krishna. I like you but I can't change the fact that i lived in a creepy place." This time Krishna put a finger on her wet lips.

Krishna - "I trust you too Pratigya. I don't need you to explain yourself to me. In fact we won't talk about our pasts from this minute anymore. And about Komal, I already have made arrangements for her to get educated in the best MBA business school. I found out from her school records she discontinued her studies." Pratigya looked at him surprised. What was he? HE came into her life like a blessing; she thought.

Krishna - "With me around I don't want you to worry Pratigya. All your sorrow is mine and all my happiness yours. "

Pratigya was surprised. A feeling of guilt flooded her. He always was a savior to her- "Is this possible Krishna? How could someone love so much. How could someone be so kind? You don't even know me Krishna. It's scaring me now as all the happiness I am seeing now is like a dream. I am not sure Krishna. Do I deserve this happiness? Do I Deserve you. You should get a better girl Krishna not me."

Krishna looked at her expressionless. Pratigya faced away and looked at the lake. She stood by the railings holding them. Krishna hugged her from behind and whispered in her ear - "So you think, you're unworthy of me. I don't know how to tell you, but I LOVE YOU PRATIGYA. I want to live with you. I want to laugh with you. I want to throw away all your sorrow and give you all the happiness of the world. You are more than a normal girl to me. You're special. Even I don't know why. I want to share my breakfasts and lunch with you. I want to make love to you. Every morning when I wake up I want to have you in my arms peacefully sleeping. I want to see you first thing in the morning and want to sleep in your arms every night. All that matters to me know is you. You're strong my girl. You stood for all the tough times in your life in spite of the odds. That had made your value multiply. Pratigya I find a piece of myself in you. I know everything happened fast and don't you think a second is enough for finding your soulmate.  I LOVE YOU PRATIGYA."

Pratigya cried in his arms. He turned her around and wiped of her tears. "Don't cry. It tears me down to see you cry." She let herself free from his hug and got down on one knee.

Pratigya - "Will you marry me Krishna?" She asked.

Krishna held her shoulders and got her back on her feet. He endearingly kissed her lips with his. "YES." He said. Pratigya openly kissed him back. The two stood united drenching in the rain kissing each other to their hearts content. Krishna had Pratigya in his arms and his long lost happiness had found him back.

Krishna - "I wish this moment never ends Pratigya." 

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wonderful update suhana...i read both the parts ..Embarrassedpratigya confess her love and love starts ...bt i m worried is krishna 's past afftect pratigya or not.? i know she loves him bt it just my question.

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lovely update Tongue
very intriguing ff, i look forward to what happens next with kriya, as you said kst past won't come up yet, so i wonder what will happen next its, a mystery  


 


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