ipl vs white shirt..sandhir ff - Page 4

Its on cricket  Edited by Sagl - 8 years ago

ohh...

omg
superb start
continue asap :)

awesome start dear. story looks quite interesting.    do update soon.

Ha ha
Pragya me in ur inspiration list?? 😲
aww so swt of u.
Vaise prologue was lil ahem ahem.
I Hope itz romantic one not more than that 😆
If u write something lke that then do tell me b4
i will skip those parts🤣..
All the bst.
Update soon :)Edited by -Glitz- - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Ha ha
Pragya me in ur inspiration list?? 😲
aww so swt of u.
Vaise prologue was lil ahem ahem.
I Hope itz romantic one not more than that 😆
If u write something lke that then do tell me b4
i will skip those parts🤣..
All the bst.
Update soon :)

don't worry koi ahem ahem bohot nhi hone wala😆..bas thoda sa hoga😳

You have to continue...update soon

Originally posted by: thundercute

don't worry koi ahem ahem bohot nhi hone wala😆..bas thoda sa hoga😳

If then ok :) :*

continue for sure di !!

it is intresting continue soon