Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap


Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap
Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

Mistakes & Love Praja FF Complete 118 (Page 96)

twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 June 2015 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rinall

Garuuu !!! HugKaisi ho ?? 
Today's Swara's birthday Party...I have made a birthday thread for her...Wish karna mat bhoolna Embarrassed

You know, I had to read the last update twice to understand what really happened LOL I was sooo sure that US was behind the kidnapping ConfusedLOL

This Totamal to is totally useless Angry Kidnapping bhi theek se nahi kar paaya D'oh
Loved how Ajabde punched Tota ! Clap
Hope the ladies and Sagar get out of there soon ! 

Rinal my yaara HugHugHug
am so exhausted yaar iss padhai and work ne toh band baja rakha hai mera I'm so tired and kal presentation hai - yaani I will be fully dead by the time I come home reCry
I just want the weekend to begin taaki I can sleep in lateEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

US is still behind the kidnapping yaara but uska role thoda cover mein hai abhi ke liye
Totamal is TotaMal - I'm not sure if you noticed but maine Tota ka name change kar diya - show mein he was Toran but in my story I chose to go with TotaLOL

Will wish Swara and ek surprise gift bhi aa raha haiWink

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twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 June 2015 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sita_rama

Awesome update .update soon

sam622 Groupbie

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Posted: 09 June 2015 at 11:20am | IP Logged
wah u have justified ajabs character truely awsome...

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Annei123 Senior Member

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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 2:09am | IP Logged
plzzz update Big smile

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twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 4:45am | IP Logged
here's the update...gotta go as am running for my class now. Will see you all later

Chapter 78

Sagar looked at his two companions who were giving each other incredulous looks. He had stayed back long enough to remove Tota's mobile from his pocket and as he showed it the ladies had showered kisses and praises on him except that now both of them were looking at the mobile like it was an alien device

Subho: what do you mean you don't remember?

Ajabde: It means that I don't recall the number

Subho: You don't recall your husband's mobile number

Ajabde shook her head while Subho added

Subho: That is bad because even I don't remember Chakri's number - he got a new one because he detested the old mobile network he was using. There data plans are expensive and not at all good he said

Ajabde: What do we do now?

Subho: looks like we are stuck in this construction building for the time being

Sagar walked up taking the phone he dialled a number and handed it back to Ajabde who gave him a smile as she heard the bell ring on the other side

At the hotel Kalyan Singh had managed to intercept Phool before she went and Pratap was interrogating her at the moment when they all heard a cell go off but no one paid attention as they were busy looking at the interrogation




In a separate room

Pratap: I'm not going to ask politely again Phool so tell me where have they taken her?

Phool: I'm telling you that I don't know (she sobbed)

Chakrapani: We have video evidence that puts you in the same place of abduction at the time it took place Phool so I would consider the possibility that if you don't co-operate then you are looking at a good amount of time in the prison cell

Phool: all I was asked to do was to take a white pouch to TotaMal and hand it over. Once I did that they would tell me the place where Gauhar is being kept

Pratap: I don't care about Gauhar. His anger takes the best of him and he pushes the glass of water kept on the table with such force that it hits the wall and shatters scaring the already scared receptionist

Chakri: Baujiraj!!!

Chakri: Phool we don't have the patience so start speaking

Phool: I only wanted to get Gauhar out of Uday Singh's house when I found him along with Uma Devi and TotaMal. They promised that if I sneaked into the party and gave them all the details for the upcoming contracts then they would tell me where Gauhar was being kept. So I went to the office and got everything in a USB drive. The white pouch hat was given to me contains the details and in return Tota sent me a message with the address for Gauhar's whereabouts

Pratap walked out without a word while Kalyan Singh went inside - Rawatji placed his hand on his shoulder and gave him some strength. When the cell rang again and Pratap picked it up

Pratap: Hello?

Ajabde: How much time do you take to answer your cell?

Pratap: Ajab!!!! Where are you? Are you okay? Is everyone fine? Just tell me the place I'm coming for you

He turns the speaker phone on as everyone had gathered around him as soon as they heard Ajab

Ajabde: We are fine stuck in some sort of construction building. You know there is a secret gateway from the ladies washroom to this place.

Pratap: Just stay there and we are coming

Ajab: As if I have the energy to move. I'm exhausted

Sagar: Because you hit the bad guy

Ajab: That I did

Akbar: Bhabijaan?

Ajabde: I told you I saw that doctor in the room na it was him. So he was irritating me and I was so tired plus this dress is now irritating me as I can't move properly, my shoes also hurt and he called me fat and ugly!!! So I punched him and he fell like a log I tell you

Everyone let out smiles when she exclaimed: Look there's a door there maybe we should check it out. We might find some help there

Pratap: Ajabde (he had a warning in his voice)

Ajabde: Accha when you come bring me something to eat. You know I want jalebi with rabri and those gulab jamuns too

Subho: get me samosa Chakri

They opened the door and suddenly a new voice floated in through the speakers

Hello Ajabde looks like you found your way to me and you brought company as well

Ajabde: Uday Singh

Everyone gets tensed as Uday Singh voice comes on the phone

US: If you wish to see them alive then send Jaiwanta here - she comes alone or I will make sure that your wife and unborn child die the most painful death anyone can ever receive

Ajabde: Maa don't do it

A slap resounded followed by a kick - Subho screamed Ajabde!!! Sagar!!!

US: I told you I don't like people who interfere in my business. Jaiwanta you know what to do. I'll be here waiting.

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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 5:05am | IP Logged
yeppie...!! i'm first this time..!!!PartyParty

hey bhagwan.. as i read the 1st part i recalled chenai express dialogue.. where he says " jab mobile phone nahi hota tha toh sab logon ki no. yaad rehti thi aur ab mobile phone aagya hai toh kisi ki phone no. yaad hi nahi rehta.."ROFLROFL these two girls cant even remmeber their husband cell no. ShockedLOL Atleast our honey drip sagar is far better from them.. kuch no. dabaya toh pratu ko call lag gaya..Tongue

yeh log kya kar rahe hai.. yaar?,, waha bechara pratu itna tension mein hai.. and these two girls !!uff i tell u.. i was rofling while reading these lines - "Ajabde: Accha when you come bring me something to eat. You know I want jalebi with rabri and those gulab jamuns too
Subho: get me samosa Chakri"ROFLROFL

this UDAY SINGH..!! Censored
Dida..aap na ek kaam karo..aapke paas jo bhi detergents hai,, sabko le aao,, aaj toh mein iski aisi dhulayi karungi na... ki usse uski pardaadi yaad aajayegi.. saala..Angry
Plzzz. yaar dida, atleast agli chapter mein toh uski pitaai dikhado..Unhappy
do continue soon..

Edited by ApekshaM - 10 June 2015 at 5:08am

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Natasha_1234 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Awesome update! Phone number bhool gayi ROFL and sagar is so cutee!! Samosa and gulab jamun and rabri! Wow Tongue
I just hate udai singh...a slap and kick! What does he think of himself Angry
Threatening pratap of harming his mom or wife is gonna make him pay badly... Evil Smile
Ab aur pittaai karvana uski... Angry
I'm looking forward to next update...update soon Smile

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rinall Goldie

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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Garuuu !!!!! HugHugHow are you dear ??
You have your presentation today na ?? all the best sweety pie ! Thumbs Up
I know you're completely immersed in studies and job and story updates D'ohBut here's the bright side, your classes are gonna get over next week...ab sirf 1 aur presentation and few assignments are remaining  (hopefully Confused)...Uske baad classes se you'll be free DancingDancing
So just hold it together jaana HugHugHug Hum sab hain na tumhaare saath Embarrassed

Coming to the story... What a fabulous update yar ! Clap
Call it the tragedy of technological advancement Ouch pehle sab ko sab kuch yaad rehta tha,dates-phone numbers...par ab we have all become completely dependent on our phones and tablets and what not Ouch Technology may have brought the world closer yet everyone seems torn apart from one another OuchOuch Okay, enough of my patronizing bhaashan LOLLOL
Loved that scene where the ladies claim to not remember the phone no.s of their respective husbandsLOL and when I read how smartly Sagar took that idiot Tota's phone and dialled Pratap's no. , I was like - Aaj kal ke bacche, baap re baap ShockedLOLLOL

And more than anything, I absolutely loved how Ajab's acting so cool and taking the whole situation so casually...Ajab-Pratap convo was so endearing ! Day Dreaming and I was laughing when Subho said "Samosa leke aana" ROFLROFL

US !! AngryAngry Garuu, tell me you're gonna make him suffer...torture him in the worst way possible ! Angry Jee to karta hai ki apne haath se uska gala daba du AngryAngry

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