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Mistakes & Love Praja FF Complete 118 (Page 27)

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Update is here and I shall meet you tomorrow now...Have a nice day and do leave me some love as well..

Also we have new writers coming on the forum so its a humble request to all the check their works out and leave them loads of love and encouragement
We have Aayu back with a new story  and Even our dear Swara began her story and we also have a newbie Rosh whi has started writing her story.. I've attached teh links for everyone here so click on them and do the follow teh steps: LIKE, COMMENT and Make sure you Urge them to begin their stories!!!
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Read on- time to see how the dinner date goes and how the men turn into spies

Chapter 27

All ear-pieces: Check

Mics: Check

Target position: Check

Soldier positions: Check

Bade Daata and Pratap were checking everything like they were on war- making strategies on which person will sit where and what is needed to be observed. Dressed in black both men looked dashing and handsome and so did the others

We are here: Hakim and Akbar announced their presence as they went on to hug the old man and his younger protg. Ajabde and Subho were sitting comfortably on the sofa taking in everything around them. Ajabde knew Subho was having troubles as her eyes when she had come in were red and puffy- Chakrapani was sombre but was still masking it as his friends joked around. So Ajabde took Subho to the wash-room to get freshened up while the guys went over the plan for the nth time

Ajabde had just closed the door when Subho's dam of tears broke

Subho (sobbing): He just doesn't want to talk. No matter what I do or try he shuts up completely and I'm a mess and Ajabde I'm scared

Ajabde calming her friend: It will be alright.

Subho: No if things continue like this then I'll probably end up divorced with nowhere to go and he'll find himself another woman

Ajabde looked at her friend: Chakrapani loves you and that is why he was ready to kidnap you to get married- remember your family is not his biggest fan as in their eyes you did not marry a guy of your worth but that is not the case -both of you are equals and love each other. You might be facing some problems today but it will work out

Subho: How? Every time I try to talk to him about babies he changes the topic and I even listened to him drone about bankruptcy and revival plan they had made in office the other day - I heard him go on and on for more than an hour and when I started to speak about babies he fell asleep and it does not help that my temper is taking the best of me - I'm either very angry or crying buckets (Cue: tears fall)

Ajabde stared at her friend and then she rummaged her handbag for a particular item. As she brought out the packet Subho stared at it as well

Subho: Ajabde?

Ajabde: you never know Subho. Go and we will see the rest later

After 3minutes the stick turned blue - a positive sign lit up the screen as well

Ajabde: looks like you are pregnant as well Subho

Subho looked at the stick: I'm pregnant (tears welling up) The girls share a hug as they both realise the significance of the news they discovered together

Pratap: Hey are you still in there? It's time

Ajabde: Coming

Subho: We need to tell them and soon

Ajabde: Yeah we will after the dinner is over then we will do it. Let's do this

Subho now cleaned up: Yeah let's do this

The girls went to their partners respectively and they all took their places when Hakim spoke

Hakim: Target has been sighted. Coming together with smiles on their faces

Akbar: Finally let's check this dude out

Pratap (in thoughts): You better be a nice man Raghvendra as I want the best for my Maa and I would gladly kick your behind if you hurt her

(Loudly): check in and let's roll out

 

Chapter 28

Raghvendra and JB were strategically seated in the middle of the private family dining area where the lights were dimmed as candles were lighted on the tables. Everyone was scattered around them in a circle and they were surrounded by other patrons. So JB could not see Pratap and Ajabde while Pratap had a clear view of his mother while his wife was going through the menu

Ajabde: What shall I have?

Pratap: Maa smiled ..Oh don't even try to hold her hand Raghvendra I swear I will...He just did not

Chakri: he just did

Akbar: He is using the oldest tricks in the book please- this guy is old school

Subho: that he is but can't deny the fact that he is good-looking...right Ajab?

Ajabde: Yup - he clearly works out and has a physique. Oh my Maa just laughed- he clearly has the right moves then

Pratap stared at his wife so did Chakri while others were snickering

Ajabde looked at her husband: Shall we order now?

Pratap: He is not that good looking and I have a better physique than him. Ask Bade Daata

BD: Jaiwanta is enjoying herself- I have never seen her smile for this much time. The man gazed at the woman lovingly while the others also saw it clearly - JB was happy and Raghvendra had made her at complete ease as they ordered their food and drinks

BD: I'm so having a drink

Everyone ordered their food and Pratap was a bit stunned

Pratap: I thought you didn't like malai kofta

Ajabde: So does that mean I cannot have it - her hormones coming out

Pratap: no just you never do things that you don't like so I

Ajabde: I'm hungry and I wanted to have it so I ordered and I cannot be like you na eating salad as dinner

Pratap: Hey it's good for health

Ajabde: You'll be hungry later on and I'm not cooking

They continued their bickering while others did theirs and suddenly Hakim spoke up

Hakim: Akbar you idiot sit down before she sees you- dammit we have been spotted

JB saw Akbar seated so she excused herself as Raghvendra paid the bill

JB: Akbar what a pleasant surprise. What brings you here?

Akbar: It's so good to see you too. I got dumped so thought of eating out. After all food is the medicine for broken hearts like mine

Raghvendra had joined them as well (introductions' done) - Nice to meet. Please don't stop us from you having a nice time and besides it's getting late as well.

They all wished each other and left but Raghvendra stayed behind and before Akbar could go back he said: I hope I cleared the first round you all did and please tell Pratap to hide better as I saw him throughout the meal. Maan, Veeni and Som need to learn to disguise themselves better and Chakrapani needs to work on his accent if he is trying to go for undercover and for you well learn the art of subtlety and also pass on to the girls to try the kulfi here it's a delicacy not to be missed

He moved away leaving behind dumbstruck men, smiling girls and a rather very proud and satisfied old man

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Omg garima dii you actually did mention the name and limks for others to see!!!!!! You are such a sweet heart and sooo good ab toh I respect you even more Star Clap
LOVE YOU LOADS Big smile Big smile
Coming to the update, very cute to see pratap being posssive for his mother and this raghvendra is truly a smart guy Wink
Bichare akbar ka aur baaki paltan ka lol ho gaya LOL
Arey waah dono pregnant mera toh dil garden garden ho gaya Big smile [:D/]
Looking forward for the next update Smile
Once again thank you sooo much for the mention Tongue
Btw I'm first after a long time LOL

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Hi Garima! Great updateClap. everyone has turned into spies to unite JB and GRLOL, GR is so smart, I think Pratap was starting to get jealous of him. I love your choice of clothes for Ajab, she looks stunning as far as I can imagine and now even Subho is pregnant! Wow! 
 
it is soo good to see you encouraging every new comer to write stories... you've got such a big heartHug.
 
BTW, is your AC working yet? I am so sorry for you, it must be soo hot in UAE as I've been there before. Bina AC ke inti garmi me toh aasu bhi sookh jaayengeCry


Edited by poeple1234 - 13 May 2015 at 4:49am

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Garuuu !!!! HugHugHugHow are you dear ??
AC repair hua ya nahi ?? Ouch Complaint ka koi response mila ya nahi ?? 

Coming to the story...Sizzling updates man !! DancingMy dil has become garden garden after reading Chapter 26 !! DancingDancing

Pratap and his group of friends are crazy !! ROFLIn a fun sort of way, of course EmbarrassedLOL Especially loved how the gang's cover got blown and how Raghavendra doled out tips to all of them on becoming better spies ROFL
Really looking forward to JB and Raghu getting together Embarrassed I have a song for this jodi Embarrassed

Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa

Jeevan Dagar Mein Prem Nagar Mein 
Aaya Nazar Mein Jab Se Koi Hain
Tu Sochta Hain Tu Puchata Hain
Jiski Kami Thi Kya Yeh Wohi Hain
 Haa Yeh Wohi Hain... Haa Yeh Wohi Hain
Tu Ek Pyasa Aur Yeh Nadi Hain
Kaahe Nahi Isko Tu Khulke Bataye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa

Teri Nigaahen
pa gayi rahe Par Tu Yeh Soche Jaaun Na Jaaun
Yeh Zindagi Jo Hai Naachti Toh
Kyon Bediyon Mein Hai Tere Paanv
Preet Ki Dhun Par Naach Le Paagal
Udta Agar Hai Udne De Aanchal
Kaahe Koi Apne Ko Aaise Tarsaaye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa Day DreamingEmbarrassed

Hmmm...So Subho is pregnant, too...wonder how Chakri's going to react when he learns of it... Ermm Use toh baccho ke baare mein discuss bhi karna pasand nahi hai Ouch Maybe, he's scared of all the additional responsibilities after the arrival of a baby...Confused

Loved the little tu tu - main main between Ajabde and Pratap WinkLOL

Oh man ! ShockedInitially, I thought Jagmal was behind the leak as he works for the Mughal Enterprises... But Gauhar Jan !! Shocked Kya twist pe twist aa rahe hain story mein !! Clap
And Gauhar is sleeping with US ! ShockedDead Damn ! This man keeps hitting a new low with every new  update Ouch
But I'm happy 'cause Phool apne poore gamle ke saath, phootne waali hai Dancing

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Originally posted by poeple1234

Hi Garima! Great updateClap. everyone has turned into spies to unite JB and GRLOL, GR is so smart, I think Pratap was starting to get jealous of him. I love your choice of clothes for Ajab, she looks stunning as far as I can imagine and now even Subho is pregnant! Wow! 
 
it is soo good to see you encouraging every new comer to write stories... you've got such a big heartHug.
 
BTW, is your AC working yet? I am so sorry for you, it must be soo hot in UAE as I've been there before. Bina AC ke inti garmi me toh aasu bhi sookh jaayengeCry


Hi!!! (I'm sorry i forgot your name is it Binaka?)
Hug
Thanks...I know I try to get my characters new and trendy stuff and not recycled versions like on the showLOL

We'll we have to welcome them and its good to encourage people to write as it means we get more stories to read

My AC is still not functioning well so am sleeping in a different room.. Have lodged complaints  and the guy has checked it already like 3 times but there is no cooling at all so let's see what happens next... I just want it to work during May-June and July as those are the hottest and unbearable months
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Originally posted by rinall

Garuuu !!!! HugHugHugHow are you dear ??
AC repair hua ya nahi ?? Ouch Complaint ka koi response mila ya nahi ?? 

Coming to the story...Sizzling updates man !! DancingMy dil has become garden garden after reading Chapter 26 !! DancingDancing

Pratap and his group of friends are crazy !! ROFLIn a fun sort of way, of course EmbarrassedLOL Especially loved how the gang's cover got blown and how Raghavendra doled out tips to all of them on becoming better spies ROFL
Really looking forward to JB and Raghu getting together Embarrassed I have a song for this jodi Embarrassed

Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa

Jeevan Dagar Mein Prem Nagar Mein 
Aaya Nazar Mein Jab Se Koi Hain
Tu Sochta Hain Tu Puchata Hain
Jiski Kami Thi Kya Yeh Wohi Hain
 Haa Yeh Wohi Hain... Haa Yeh Wohi Hain
Tu Ek Pyasa Aur Yeh Nadi Hain
Kaahe Nahi Isko Tu Khulke Bataye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa

Teri Nigaahen
pa gayi rahe Par Tu Yeh Soche Jaaun Na Jaaun
Yeh Zindagi Jo Hai Naachti Toh
Kyon Bediyon Mein Hai Tere Paanv
Preet Ki Dhun Par Naach Le Paagal
Udta Agar Hai Udne De Aanchal
Kaahe Koi Apne Ko Aaise Tarsaaye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa Day DreamingEmbarrassed

Hmmm...So Subho is pregnant, too...wonder how Chakri's going to react when he learns of it... Ermm Use toh baccho ke baare mein discuss bhi karna pasand nahi hai Ouch Maybe, he's scared of all the additional responsibilities after the arrival of a baby...Confused

Loved the little tu tu - main main between Ajabde and Pratap WinkLOL

Oh man !Shocked Initially, I thought Jagmal was behind the leak as he works for the Mughal Enterprises... But Gauhar Jan !! Shocked Kya twist pe twist aa rahe hain story mein !! Clap
And Gauhar is sleeping with USShockedDead Damn ! This man keeps hitting a new low with every new  update Ouch
But I'm happy 'cause i Phool apne poore gamle ke saath, phootne waali haDancing


Rinal yaara am good re HugHug
@pink: yaar 3 baar check kar chuka hai but no cooling...complaint bhi kiya supervisor ko and they keep on saying tomorrow-tomorrow...main sacchi mein murder karungi in sab ka I'm telling you abhi se...

@shade of red: Am so happy you enjoyed it...Pratap and gang are crazy and GR toh teacher hain toh tips denge hiLOL
Love the song!!!

@red: Chakri and his no baby talk - we'll see the reason in the coming updates

@blue: did you like the twist???

@green: yup tabhi toh US is getting all the info na

Phool ka toh ab band bajega just wait and watch

Big smile

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aayu_26

Omg garima dii you actually did mention the name and limks for others to see!!!!!! You are such a sweet heart and sooo good ab toh I respect you even more Star Clap
LOVE YOU LOADS Big smile Big smile
Coming to the update, very cute to see pratap being posssive for his mother and this raghvendra is truly a smart guy Wink
Bichare akbar ka aur baaki paltan ka lol ho gaya LOL
Arey waah dono pregnant mera toh dil garden garden ho gaya Big smile [:D/]
Looking forward for the next update Smile
Once again thank you sooo much for the mention Tongue
Btw I'm first after a long time LOL



Yup Aayu baby your first!!!!
No need for thanks baby we all need to encourage everyone on this forum to come out with their creations tabho toh sab mil kar enjoy karenge na

Akbar ne toh band bajwa diya sabkaLOL

Yup two pregnant friends ek saath- aage aayega mazaaWink

Big smile

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