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Mistakes & Love Praja FF Complete 118 (Page 2)

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 10:46am | IP Logged
oh dear God Pratap has not only forgotten his anniversary but also his promise to a honeymoon.. ROFLhmmm well i would say even if he comes to Maldives now that is not a honeymoonTongue
bechara is in huge huge trouble 

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pari0706

oh dear God Pratap has not only forgotten his anniversary but also his promise to a honeymoon.. ROFLhmmm well i would say even if he comes to Maldives now that is not a honeymoonTongue
bechara is in huge huge trouble 


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Second update for the day - next one will be tomorrow as am off to have dinner and then I'll be in my dreamland dreaming of plots for other stories

Chapter 3

IV: Remember the promise you broke to her

He stayed silent as he took in the empty room again and then saw a piece of paper sitting neatly on his study desk. He picked up the paper and read his wife's neat cursive writing

I'm going to Maldives for the trip we planned don't worry about me as I intend on having some fun and this way at least for a fraction of minute I will try to forget that you broke your promise to me again. I know your business means a lot to you and that it is your life but I want to know where I stand in your life as well because from where I stand all I see is you surrounded by your work day in and day out while I'm left behind alone by myself so I'm going and I will try to figure out what I did so wrong that you don't want to be with me anymore. I hope your meeting went well

Love

Ajabde

Why does she think that I don't want her? I need her more than life itself she knows it so why the doubt about my love for her? He thought but then slowly his anger rose I was stuck in a meeting it's not like I planned on breaking my promise

IV: here we go again the fact is that you made a promise you could not keep again- the last 5yrs of marriage has felt like 10 to her - it's like the only thing you can think of is your work and you forgot that you had a wife - a wife whom you desperately wanted to marry and start a life with

So I'm securing a future

IV: Your future got secured the moment you turned your business into one of the highest turn-overs. You are basically a money maker- they call you the Unstoppable in the social circles but look at you - you completely stopped your personal life- in your personal life you are the Invisible man

As he was thinking the doorbell rang and he opened it to find his mother standing on the doorstep

Are you not going to invite me in Pratap?

Pratap stared at his mother and then like a toddler who had just had his favourite toy broken he hugged his mother tight

Jaiwanta knew her son was worried when she received her daughter-in-law's message about her travel plans - she had left for Maldives alone with her best friend Subhagyawati who was a doctor by profession and was married to her son Pratap's best friend Chakrapani. Both the boys had broken their promises so the girls decided to take the trip together which ended in her(JB) at her son's doorstep

JB: What's wrong Pratap?

Pratap: Everything

JB: Everything?

Pratap: I broke my promise to Ajabde so she left for a trip by herself to an unknown country Maa. I mean what if she got into some trouble? What if there was an accident?

JB: Was this trip important to her?

Pratap: It was supposed to be our honeymoon the one I couldn't take her on earlier as I was just starting out with the business and then got busy in expanding it and securing our future. I got so engrossed that I forgot about her- no not forgot but rather placed her a bit low on the priority list

JB: Bit low? By that you mean you totally did not place her on the priority list did you now

Pratap: Maa I had to secure our future- I was not going to do what that man did to you- to us. I would never do that

JB: That man happens to be your father

 

Chapter 4

JB: That man happens to be your father

Pratap: He was never my father- all he did was abuse you and me for money- and when he got that he would throw it both on women, drugs or drinks and sometimes on all three. He left us like beggars if grandfather had not stepped in the time he did then we would not be here

JB heard her son and knew his father had left a pretty big scar on him and her as well - her marriage was an arranged one and she did her best to work it but her husband well ex-husband was not a man whom she ever wanted to meet again. He had completely destroyed her and her son- there was a time when she felt like ending her life but her father-in-law was a just man who came through and protected her and Pratap. He was the man Pratap looked up to and learned everything from so when the time for the business successor came to be announced and Pratap was choses- Pratap declined the position and promised his grandfather that he would have his own business and he would make him proud which he was doing very well. She remembered the wedding so well - His grandfather was the happiest man on earth when Pratap married Ajabde and brought her home- he attended the wedding despite the strained relations between Pratap and his father who last she heard had was as usual on a downward spiral and had fathered a child with some escort named Dheer so he was thrown out of the family

JB took a deep breath: Pratap you are not your father because he had no hand in raising you- I did that part and I raised you well and good- your grandfather raised you as a man to take charge to achieve your dreams and desires that led you to Ajabde- remember she was betrothed to another man but you went to her engagement ceremony and declared her as yours and then you married her as well which I think was a great decision which even your grandfather was so proud of that he never tired of telling the story to all his friends, colleagues and the people he met but Pratap you neglected your wife - the last 5 years all you did was try not be your father but you also forgot to be you- missing out on dinners, no time for Ajabde, drowning yourself in work that is not my son because my son made time for his family

Pratap: Maa I did try but even she can call me at work it's not like I won't take her calls (he sulked a little)

JB: What if her calls were never being directed at you?

Pratap: Maa?

JB: Phool

Pratap: But Phool is just a receptionist

JB: Exactly and when your cell is silent or not reachable who does Ajabde call to reach you?

Pratap: Why would she do that?

JB: because Phool has been eyeing you since the day she joined the office- she wants you and knows that you won't leave your wife so she is creating unnecessary troubles for both of you and before you ask how I know that- well once I was here with Ajabde who was trying to get in touch with you so she called the office and Phool told her, "I'm sorry but he is busy in an important meeting and told me not to disturb him"

Pratap was stunned: I did but Ajabde is an exception everyone knows that is the question

JB: I know but does Phool realise that... now tell me son of mine do you know what you are going to do next..

Pratap smiled at his mother: Maa kindly take charge of the office for the next few days as I'm going to be out of town

JB smiled: Alright. Go straight to the airport- Chakri is waiting with tickets for both of you and bring my daughter-in-law back happy and sparkling

Pratap: Yes Ma'am

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
OMG he still does not get her point ShockedLOL
but so gad for JB that he now gets it Clap

can't wait to see how this play out... but i will still say that this trip should not be counted as HoneymoonWink


Edited by pari0706 - 04 May 2015 at 12:21pm

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
really nice story . and plzzz pm me whenever u write becoz till 4th june i maybe not read ur story as my final exams r going on and i want that u pm me so that i could read them whenever i am free

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
This is going to be a cute story. Both boys are in trouble already.

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
Wow amazing start.
thanks for the pm.

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Wow pratap s going to maldives to bring ajab back. 
Awesome update. Update soon.

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