Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

India-Forums

   
Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap
Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

Mistakes & Love Praja FF Complete 118 (Page 17)

twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz
twilightlover29
twilightlover29

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Kamu...

Update 15 :-
Beautiful update again Hug
Ajabdhe gave me shock too LOL this was not honeymoon she want another Silly LOL Pratap is back he got his lesson.
Mauritius Embarrassed beautiful place Heart

Subho n chakri ROFL I thought he will talk about babies Silly but this guy Sleepy D'oh boys can't change there cricket matches Angry

Update 16:-
They r going back. Litetally it was a short one. Aww the kid Star Embarrassed
US Angry you BL***** moron Angry how dare he is saying these things. Dude see your self first then others Angry Ouch Its good that he is not living with them. Having a hubby or Father like this better not to have.

Phool  ROFLbanii fool LOL maxaa aagya. chakri JB jindabaad
.

Kamu HugHug
Thanks!!!
@red: Meri Ajab ka jhatka laga na.. badi demanding hai meri Ajab...Mauritius is a beautiful beautiful place where I wanna go (for a vacay all by myself- it should be an all expenses paid trip)
Subho-Chakri: Itna intelligent nahi hai re ChakriLOL

@blue: yup this was a short one kyunki long trip toh baad mein aati haiWink
We will see US in such a light which has never been shown beforeWink

flower Pot ko bana diya humne foolROFL

twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz
twilightlover29
twilightlover29

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ApekshaM

hmm.. the kid is none other than UdaySingh's son.. but he is so cute and Adorable u know.. Embarrassed

mujhe toh laga tha ki jab pratap met his father.. then US would behave guilty and feel sorry for his actions in past.. but no.. ek min.. kahi woh bhootni toh nahi.. Shocked Angry

loved phool's full to fool in front of everyone.. ROFL badi aayi dream sequence mein.. accha hua ki sahi time ruqqs ne pinch kar diya.. TongueROFL do continue soon



Baccha kya ho raha hai aajkal - pata nahi kab aati hai aur kab jaati hai - aise hide n seek nahi khelteOuch

@red: US ka new roop dekhne ko milega iss story mein and it has just startedWink

will do
twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz
twilightlover29
twilightlover29

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rinall

Garuuu !!!! Hug How are you dear ??
All the best for your presentation !! Thumbs UpThumbs Up

Coming to the updates, read the last 2 just now ! Big smile
Fantastic updates !! Clap

What caught my was this portion from Chapter 15---

Subho laughed out loud: Salima Kaki is just an old woman who thinks of you highly

Chakri: She eyes me like I'm a piece of meat - she is a dangerous old seductress that what she is - using her old age to cover her real intentions. Have you seen the amount of make-up she does to cover those wrinkles. Please never leave me alone with him- promise me

Subho smiling: I promise never to leave you alone with Salima Kaki. Okay


Salima Kaki !! Shocked Hey Bhagwan ! ROFLROFLROFL You've transformed her into some sort of cougar,albeit of a cheaper variety ! WinkROFL And Chakri's absolutely petrified of her ! I can totally imagine what Chakri's perplexed face looks like ! It's hilarious ROFLROFLROFLROFL


Chapter 16---

Udai Singh !! What a disgusting and boorish clod he is yar ! DeadDead What sane person would wanna keep relations with him ! I wonder how his new wife is adjusting with his abominable attitude... Poor Sagar ! My heart sinks on imagining what kind of influence US is going to have on that little boy ! OR, maybe, you'll get Ajabde to rescue him, considering how little Sagar boy has taken a shine to his Bhabhisa ... ! Wink


Chapter 17----- Happy to see Ruqaiyya enter your world of stories !! Party Phool ke pairon mein chubhe kaante,oops,glass shards ! ROFLROFLPhool ko chataayi JB-Pratap-Chakri ne milke dhool ! ROFL I hope this flower-pot breaks over Salima Kaki's head !! Or maybe, on US's head ! At least, 2 villains toh kam honge Wink Salima Kaki is harmless compared to Udai Singh LOL I'm sure ChakraWati will handle her well Wink


PS---- Thanks for the movie review !!HugI'm gonna watch  PIKU soon...Big smile



Rinal yaaraHugHug
am good. how are you??
Thanks a lot dear!!!
@red: Well ab CVs ki kripa hai ki Salima Kaki ne bhi humari story mein entry maarli...kya kare ab show mein toh uska pati Pratu ka deewana hai toh maine socha ki humari story mein usko new role de dete hain but thodi si character same rakhenge
LOL

@ purple: US will be seen in a shade that will make everyone hate him to the core...Ajab saving Sagar is a good idea - let's see if that happens

@reddish red:  ROFLROFLROFL na re teeno villains ko unki type ki punishment denge...

@blue: Do watch and no need for thanks yaara

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

rinall

twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz
twilightlover29
twilightlover29

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aayu_26

Waah di what an update maan gaye apkoWink
Yeh flower pot ko toh aur jalana badi aayi humare pratap ke baare mein fantasize karneAngry
So this sagar is sb's son ya db? Aur agaar db ka hae toh how come she became so sweet?Shocked
But he is so adorableDay Dreaming
Waiting for the next part aur apka epilogue aaj pakkaSmile


Aayu baby!!!
Thank youEmbarrassed
@red: upcoming updates mein sab clear hoga re...some patience

@blue: Maine toh nahi dekha epilogue ab tak...please soon update na am waitingSmile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

aayu_26

aayu_26 Senior Member
aayu_26
aayu_26

Joined: 25 March 2015
Posts: 677

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twilightlover29

Originally posted by aayu_26

Waah di what an update maan gaye apkoWink
Yeh flower pot ko toh aur jalana badi aayi humare pratap ke baare mein fantasize karneAngry
<font color="#FF0000">So this sagar is sb's son ya db?</font> Aur agaar db ka hae toh how come she became so sweet?Shocked
But he is so adorableDay Dreaming
Waiting for the next part <font color="#0000FF">aur apka epilogue aaj pakka</font>Smile


Aayu baby!!!
Thank youEmbarrassed
@red: upcoming updates mein sab clear hoga re...some patience

@blue: Maine toh nahi dekha epilogue ab tak...please soon update na am waitingSmile

Arey di my lappy is not happy with me kya karu Cry
Ab unko thoda maska lagana padega fir jaake update hoga LOL
Will try my best to update soon Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

twilightlover29

twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz
twilightlover29
twilightlover29

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swara98

Seems I m really late for comments so sorry was a little busy you know even on holiday my company work is not leaving me meetings and meetings Angry Cry

coming to the update it really good omg you made salima a kaki Shocked well I thought chakri would speak about babies but no what to do he is little crack D'oh but sweet one
so sagar singh also their in the story but who's his mother she must be sb because db can't be that nice

I thought us would be guilty of what he did but nolook at the way he is behaving   Angry grrr

so ruqqs has marked her entry thats nice and that flower pot havimg a dream of pratap how dare she Angry loved how phool became a fool LOL

chalo have to go as have to catch a flight for london grr Google can't you let me enjoy holiday there also thay have to come cut short my holiday for work Angry

I wish I could throw our flower pot on that CEO'S head



No worries Swara
Glad you enjoyed the updates!!!

Off to London-enjoy there and have a drink for meWink
You work for google that's nice to hear - work does come first...throw the pot in your dreams so that you don't get firedLOL

@green: yup salima is a kaki and Chakri well he's like that only
@purple: everyone seems happy to see Ruqqaiya in the story
@brownish red: US well he will be getting a lot worse  response in the comments than that in the coming updates
twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz
twilightlover29
twilightlover29

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nonie12345

Excellent chapters GarimaClap
loved the praja and subho-chakri romanceHeart
phool deserves that punishmentLOL


Thanks NonieSmile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Nonie12345

twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz
twilightlover29
twilightlover29

Joined: 29 August 2014
Posts: 15783

Posted: 10 May 2015 at 1:32am | IP Logged

[/QUOTE]
Arey di my lappy is not happy with me kya karu Cry
Ab unko thoda maska lagana padega fir jaake update hoga LOL
Will try my best to update soon Smile

[/QUOTE]

Aww lappy problems - no worries I'll wait you look after lappy after all saara worka nd upcoming stories ke liye lappy ka health maintain karna zaroori hai baba

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
The Gangster's Bride PrajaFF Special Update Pg 71-72

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 71 72

Author: twilightlover29   Replies: 575   Views: 58127

twilightlover29 575 58127 26 December 2016 at 11:26pm by ilayas
Love blooms: PrAja in island. A praja os

2 3

Author: faishar02   Replies: 19   Views: 2794

faishar02 19 2794 25 December 2015 at 4:32am by faishar02
Time of my Life: OutTake of Mistakes and Love Complete

2 3

Author: twilightlover29   Replies: 20   Views: 1808

twilightlover29 20 1808 15 August 2015 at 12:11pm by twilightlover29
PrAja VM - THE PRAJA STORY VM

2 3

Author: shrutijest.   Replies: 20   Views: 3404

shrutijest. 20 3404 05 November 2014 at 5:35am by ApekshaM
PrAja! PrAja! PrAja!

2

Author: Chitra89   Replies: 15   Views: 7478

Chitra89 15 7478 03 September 2014 at 4:41pm by arakshi_16

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index