Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap


Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap
Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

Mistakes & Love Praja FF Complete 118 (Page 112)

rinall Goldie

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Garu, I've unressed my comment n pg 110 Big smile

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twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Natasha_1234

Will the update be soon??? Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Hey Natasha my updates are going to be in the evening/nights as am busy during the day thanks to my internshipTongue
twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy-for-praja

Awesome update di!ClapI have been waiting for US to be beaten up.AngryDeadSeems like it is finally there.Big smileWink
Waiting for next update..update soon.TongueWink

twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rinall

GARUUU !!!!!!!!!!!Hug You're back you're back you're back !! Yayyy !!!Dancing
and now I'm RESsing this comment ...thodi der mein will comment properlyEmbarrassedBig smile

UNRESS !!!! Big smile

Garuuu! !! Meri jaan Hug
how have you been love? ? Embarrassed  assignments, presentations and work pressure ko juggle karte karte, I'm sure you've lost 2-3 kilos D'oh

Waise how did the presentation and assignment submission go ? And how was the farewell party? ? 
And how's work going? ? 

Coming to the update. ... fabulously written, as always ClapClap
I can't tell you how much anger and hatred I'm feeling for US AngryAngry
You know, I always thought that baccha chaahe kisika bhi ho, acchi upbringing, sanskaar use ek accha insaan bana sakte hain ... initially, obviously none of us knew US ka actual background, so for me it was shocking ki itne acche parents hone ke bawajood, US itna ghatiya aadmi nikla Ouch
and now that we know what the truth is, it's still difficult to digest that someone who grew up amidst goodness, kindness, who has 2 beautiful and noble people as foster parents could turn out to be such a diabolical person Ouch
so does this mean that no matter how well you teach a child that is not your own blood , chances are that the child would turn out to be a completely different, almost unrecognisable person? ?

I know , philosophy thodi zyaada ho gayi na LOL bas raat ke time pe philosophy hi soojti hai EmbarrassedLOL

I just want a befitting death for US now ... His death will be the harbinger of all things positive. ... Big smile
waiting for Amar Singh's arrival too !! Party

It's been raining heavy here since 3 days now Day Dreaming wish I could somehow capture its essence in a bottle and send it to you EmbarrassedBig smile
I hope suraj dada reduces his intensity a bit in the days to come in the middle east Smile 

Rinal yaara HugHug

@blue: 2-3 nahi poore 5-6kg ghaata liya hoga maine and ab because we are going out everyday toh 10kgs put on bhi kar liya hogaLOL
Presentation and Assignment were good - I showed a lot of improvement as per my instructor and now have to wait 6weeks for the result
Work is hectic - Teaching is a demanding job and abhi they are giving me lower grades 1-3 sometimes 4th so it takes a lot of energy - baccche itne kya kahoon ba main - baat karna band nahi hota and here we cannot punish them zyaada (yahaan ki minstry does not believe in punishments) toh bas kisi tarah mera din kat jaata hai - seriously sometime I think I'll need the vacations just to rejuvenate from this 1 month of internship

We did not have a farewell party per say because Ramadan started and many of my peers are observing the fasts and stuff but we did have a sweet goodbye on our last class nad yeah it was really good infact we are still active on the whatsapp group

@brownish red: I was waiting for your comment because I knew you would bring up this point - am not going to say anything here because I have an entire chapter on it... Parenting and Upbringing plays a vital role in my eyes but there have been so many cases of adoptions where that has not been the case  and US is a perfect example of it. I love it when you bring in philosophy as it shows that maybe the point I'm trying to make or somehow make reaches you guys as well so thank you
US death will be a turning point for everyone  and yup AS will make his entry soon

@purple: Enjoy the rains re yahan toh suraj dada is raining fire on us...waise are you all okay in Mumbai? heard in the news about the water-logging and other difficulties that people are facing. Kab iss government ko akal aayegi I tell you- matlab theya re never prepared for monsoons and play the blame game all the time

You know how I wish I was there abhi - main toh khoob saare pakore and bhutte and maggi khaati but meri maggi ban kar di gande logon neCry


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twilightlover29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Update is here!!!

Chapter 87

JB, Ajabde and Sagar were halfway through when another contraction hit Ajabde really hard making her fall on her knees. The pain was unbearable and she was exhausted

Ajabde: I can't Maa it hurts too much

JB: You can Ajabde. You are my strong daughter and you have to do it for your baby

Ajabde nodded her head but she still clutched her abdomen trying to calm her baby- pleading with the baby: Please baby just a little while longer I promise we will be alright

Suddenly they heard noises surrounding them and as they looked up they found familiar eyes of SS and JM

JM: I told you to stay still but you never listen do you

SS and JM help them stand up and escort them outside where the ambulances and other security officers were taking their positions. Ajabde was rushed to the hospital with JB escorting. Before they departed JB asked for Sagar who was missing from their side. SS promised her to make sure that Sagar reached her safe and sound. Both JM and SS rushed back again to look for Sagar and hoped that they could get the truth out of US as well

Pratap punched US hard making him fall on RG who kicked him towards Akbar who back-handed him so hard that he fell directly onto Hakim who twisted his arm painfully hard making him scream in agony.

Hakim: Scream louder Uday Singh after all you love to hear screams don't you

Akbar: let's see how much you enjoy being the one screaming in pain

Chakri: Guys do give me a chance as well and as US came to him he kicked him hard making him fall in front of Pratap's feet

US looked up only to see the intense gaze of his son who was looking at him with rage- US trembled as he recognised his own shadow crippled and scared in Pratap's eyes after all it was payback time.

Bade Daata was rushed into emergency surgery as the bullet had lodged itself in his chest breaking two upper ribs and was pretty close to his lungs and had caused internal haemorrhage. Doctors knew that the patient's age would play a vital role in recovery and also that they needed to be extra careful as one mistake could cause the patient to lose his life

Ajabde was in a private room where she was being monitored by Sajja Bai. JB was worried about everyone but she needed to focus on her daughter-in-law as SB told her about the complications

SB: Jaiwanta Jija I'm giving her the medicine that will delay the contraction but she needs to relax otherwise the baby will go into further distress and I will have no other option but to have the delivery now

JB: Will it be safe?

SB: Ajabde is in the last week of her 8 month so the baby will be a bit premature but we will monitor him closely and I'm sure the baby will be fine

JB: alright and how is Subhagyawati and her baby?

SB: She was brought in early so I administered the medicine before the baby could go into distress. She's resting right now

Ajabde groans in pain and calls out for her husband

JB goes to her and runs her hand on her head and whispers soothing words while tears make their way out of the corner of her eyes


Chapter 88

All the boys took one of the torture tools of US and made sure to give him a full view of it- from the belt to the whip and the punching band everything was chosen by the boys except Pratap and RG who refused to touch them as they wanted him to feel their rage by their hands. First Akbar began with the belt one strong hit on the back sent US flying  to Chakri who used the punching band with pointed end and punched him hard on the shoulder dislocating it and sent US to Hakim who used the whip to capture the dislocated shoulder and stretched it further

HK: This hand was raised on our Maa and today this hand will pay for its crime

Akbar: Not only Maa but you raised this on our brother as well and the only punishment for that crime is...

Hakim twisted the shoulder hard completely detaching the shoulder from the arm and in one hard pull the hand lay limp and the shirt was stained from the blood. All the while US screamed in agony.

Pratap froze seeing the man who hurt him and his mother for so long lying all bloodied in front of him screaming- his screams transported him back to the time when he was a kid begging for mercy-trying to stop him from hurting Maa but had failed. A voice called him out

Pratap...where are you baba?  We have to go shopping... Pratap I'm waiting

It was Ajabde somehow she had managed to bring him back to the reality and Pratap knew that for a safe future US had to die

Sagar walked back towards the room where his Dada Bhai was fighting the bad man. His Bade Daata had taught him to never let go off his Dada Bhai's hand so he was going back and then they would together go to Mumma and his pretty(he called Ajabde Pretty)

US grabbed Pratap's leg with his other hand only to be kicked back on the ground

Pratap: How does it feel to be on the receiving end?

US: You are enjoying this aren't you...You are like me and one day you will do the same to your family

Pratap: I would never hurt my family like you did

US: You have my blood running in your veins and blood is thicker than water

Pratap had enough so he rained down more punched on him making him fall unconscious to the ground. As he lay there unconscious Pratap took a decision and called for his friends to leave shocking them all

RG: Do you think that is the right decision?

Pratap: No but I refuse to taint my hands with his blood. Rawatji can arrest him and there should be a fair trial so that all the people who he has hurt till now get the justice they deserve

HK: I don't think that is a good decision but I trust you Pratap

Akbar: So do I but can I get in a few more punches...please

Chakri: me too and I'm sure the others want it as well

RG: How about we shift him to the prison cell and there you all can take turns

They all smile and turn around to leave when the sound of a gun being locked is heard

US: Your biggest mistake was leaving me alive Pratap

The gunshot ran out the sound echoing in the room...

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Nonie12345 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter GarimaSmile

Edited by Nonie12345 - 21 June 2015 at 1:41pm

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sita_rama IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. Waiting for the next update.

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Suranya_Titli Senior Member

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Posted: 21 June 2015 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Omg this has become an action thriller film I am loving it lets see what happens next...

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