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Originally posted by: Annei123When r u going to update your next ff The Demon Saga ????
The Demon Saga will start in July when I'll be on my summer break as it will allow me to post regular updates
Originally posted by: Annei123When r u going to update your next ff The Demon Saga ????
Originally posted by: coderladyThat Uday Singh is still alive. Grrr.
Originally posted by: swara98Garu jaana how are you? ? 🤗 🤗 nice to see you back missed you and your updates alot
US this man is making my blood boil 😡 hope bd and pratap get well soon ohhh so baby amar is going to make entry 😳 🥳
do update soon 😛
Originally posted by: SwarSrushti
Hey SrushtiYup the BD-Pratap scene was inspired from HPAm a HP fan so I do use dome scenes or situations as inspirations and this was one of themThanks
Originally posted by: ApekshaMres
par baad me mom dad jo daant padi woh alag.. pata nahi unhe kaise pata chal gaya?! Agar unn buddho(tutors) ne bataya hoga na.. then i'm gonna put them as fodder for my pets next time..
YOU ROCK..!!!! ab jaldi jaldi next update dedo..😛😉 Love you loads dida...!!
Originally posted by: ApekshaM
unress !!!
Finally you are back.. yo! you are back,, I'm good, fighting my life with these bloody 3 turors.. itne torture karte hai mujhe..😭 issiliye na, meine kal unn logon ko mirchi khila di,, mummy ne itne aache acche pakode bana rahi thi unn tutors ke liye... meine ussme sirf 2-3 bowl chilli powder dhal diya... bas usse jyada meine kuch nahi kiya.. sacchi..!! aur phir usse khane ke baad woh tutors aise baage na ghar se,, lagta hai 2 - 3 dino keliye apne hi ghar se bahar nahi niklenge...
anyways mera toh aisa chalta hi rahega.. aap kaisi hai?? Itne dino baad mujhe aapki darshan prapt hua hai!! I missed you soo much dida..
Arre haan dida.. woh serial ka naam "kalash" hai na..?? ussme to jalal(krip) ko kitna bhola bhala dikhaya hai.. ab dikhaye kyu nahi?? Hero jo hai!!
Now comming to the updates.. mein ek baat pakka keh sakti hu.. ab toh woh US narak ki aag me jalega.. hahahaha!!! *Evil wala laugh* (accha thik hai kuch jyada hi dramewala line boldiya😛) ohh.. toh woh yeda US bade dajiraj ka asli beta nahi.. thats why i always wondered ki aisi mahan aatma ka beta itna kamina kaise ho sakta hai??😕 mana ki US,, Bade dajiraj ka asli beta nahi hai..phir bhi, how can hi even dare to kill him..kuch bhi ho jaye par iss baar toh chodna mat usse!!! you know dida.. mera 6th sense keh raha hai ki bade dajiraj amar singh banke wapas aayenge..😆😛Jo bhi ho.. saare parts toh ek dam dhinchak tha,,
PS - yeh post to kuch jyada hi lamba hogaya.. complan piye bina 🤣tbh This is my longest comment till date..😆agar bore hogaye toh phir se ek baar padna.. time paas hojayega..🤣😛 (i'm really sorry for this lambaaa post once again..)
Originally posted by: rinallGARUUU !!!!!!!!!!!🤗 You're back you're back you're back !! Yayyy !!!
and now I'm RESsing this comment ...thodi der mein will comment properly😳😃
Chapter 86
RG and US fought while the others rushed Bade Daata to the hospital and JB tried reasoning with Ajabde who refused to leave her husband.
Ajabde: arghhh
JB: Beta please you need to leave now
Ajabde: No...I can't do it...not without Pratap
Pratap had gained consciousness and saw RG fighting with US. Sagar had hid behind a pillar when the boys took BD to the hospital- the toddler was trying his best to hide from US but he had been seen. US goaded RG to the extent that the usually calm man was raining punches on him
US: How does it feel like to have seconds? If you wish I can tell you everything Jaiwanta likes and
RG punched him hard on the nose - His (US) face was so bruised but it was like he wanted them to beat him senseless. As soon as his eyes fell on Sagar a diabolical plan formed in his mind and throwing dirt in RG's eyes and planting a punch that made him fall US ran for Sagar and caught him. Then looking at JB who held Ajabde he said
US: See what you are making me do now Jaiwanta...Sagar will die because of you. You had to come alone but no you brought everyone with you and he will pay the price
JB: No...please don't. He's your son as well
US: I don't care
Sagar was crying hysterically calling for his Maa when US slapped him hard and threw him high but before he could fall on the ground Pratap caught him in his arms
Sagar: Dadabhai (sobbing)
Pratap: It's alright buddy I got you. Now I want you to take Maa and Ajabde out of here alright. Take them to the hospital and I will meet you there
Ajabde: Pratap...
Pratap: I promise I will meet you there. Go now
JB helped Ajabde and took Sagar as they made their way outside while Pratap looked at US and said: It's time to end this
Without wasting anymore time Pratap attacked US kicking him hard in the stomach moving on to his arms and shoulders. Us tried using all his tricks but failed miserably in front of Pratap who was using all his training he had received from BD. He was fighting for all the people US had hurt including BD because he knew that today was the judgement day and the only fair judgement for US was his death
US picked a handful of dirt and threw it on Pratap's face who was ready for a coward act from him but even though he deflected most of it a little still made its way in his eyes- Pratap closed his eyes for a mere fraction of a second when US tried to make his escape but found it closed by RG - as he turned around he found Akbar, Hakim and the rest blocking his exits. He was surrounded from all sides and as he took one final turn he met Pratap standing there ready to finish him off
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