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Originally posted by: silk12very cute update
so cute sagar😊please try to write your next story in 15th century background. After the seige.
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Originally posted by: silk12very cute update
so cute sagar😊please try to write your next story in 15th century background. After the seige.
unres *Originally posted by: ApekshaMhey dida... 🤗🤗
congrats for becoming dazzler.. 🥳🥳 & abt the updates.. will comment later ,, as I'm in a rush.. bahar jaarahi hu.. & will be back after in late evenung.. aane ke baad pakka review dungi.. 😉till then res,, 😛
Originally posted by: ApekshaMunres *
finally ghar pohonch gayi.. itne saare shopping ki meri mom ne.. Par saare bags mujhe uthane pade.. ab sochiye mere komal haathon ka kya haal huwa hoga.. 😔 😛
Khair... abt ur update.. by god kya halat hogayi saare boys ki.. but good for them atleast from now own they won't dare to make their wives cry.. 😛
Bade dajiraj - He is a mastermind 🥳
Sagar - He is such a darling.. 😳❤️
hmm.. toh chundawat mama ji & Kalla ki bhi entry hogayi.. woh bhi ekdam dabang wali... 👏
this update was ekdam jakhaas.. 🥳
now I'm eagerly waiting for next part..
well I hope u r feeling gud now.. but phir bhi take lil extra care 🤗🤗 waise only few days..then may be I might quit I/F due to my studies..😔 well till then I'll try to comment regularly..😊
Chapter 57
Raghvendra is here on your Bade Daata's invitation Pratap she answered handing him his bar as she sat down beside him. He looked at his mother who smiled and gave him an envelope
JB: Today we took the girls to the doctor you know and so I thought you might like to have these- I gave Chakrapani his images as well - pointing to a sombre Chakrapani who was surrounded by the rest of the gang as they looked at the baby when Bade Daata came and one look had all of them running for the obstacle course again
Later in the evening all the boys returned to the farmhouse all bruised with body aches groaning and moaning. The living room had been turned into a play area for Sagar who was playing with Ajabde and Subho- as the boys entered they saw the three of them having fun playing catch -as Subho threw the ball a little farther Sagar ran without noticing the newcomers and ran straight into Pratap's legs. The toddler landed on his behind as he looked up to see who had obstructed him while caressing his tiny bum he froze - it was like a switch went on in him and he started crying and saying
I'm sowwy...don't hurt me...pwease...I not gain...pwease
He was having a full blown tantrum when JB came along with BD - Ajabde and Subho were shocked along with the others but it was Pratap's look that was haunting BD
BD: Pratap
Pratap saw his mother and so did Sagar who dashed to JB and stood in front of her with arms stretched -no hurt her...my...no hurt...pwease...be good boy
Pratap's haunted look came back again as realisation hit him hard without saying a word he just turned around and left
Ajabde: Pratap she called out but BD stopped her
BD: Not now and then JB cradled a sobbing Sagar trying to calm him down
Raghvendra had witnessed everything so he shared a knowing look with BD who just went back to the study to read the files he had on Sagar because if his sources were right then Sagar was his grand-child and RG's nephew.
Ajabde went out with a steaming cup of hot chocolate for her husband who was punching the hell out of the punching bag. Pratap was surrounded by his past demons who had clearly come alive after Sagar's tantrum - he recalled the manner he would plead to his father to not to hurt him and stand in front of his mother to protect her and failed miserable for when he was young and today he saw the same in Sagar. There was no doubt that they had the same monster who was troubling them the only difference was that Sagar was a kid and with proper guidance could forget the harsh reality whereas he had to live with his demonic past
A soft hand came on his rough one as he punched the bag again making him stop. His wife stood there with a cup of hot chocolate. Only she would dare to be near him when he was in one of his moods everyone else left him alone but not his wife. She tenderly pulled him to her -made him sit and then offered him the drink while she tended to his wounds. She didn't say a word instead quietly cleaned the torn skin and bandaged his hands while he kept staring at her
Pratap: So how did the doctor's visit go?
Ajabde: It was fine. Nothing much
Pratap: I'm sorry for last night about flower pot
Ajabde: You shouldn't be after all my pregnancy riddled brain was at its peak and I'm sure you have justifiable reasons for keeping her under your scrutiny - but she stays away from you
Pratap finally cracked a smile
Ajabde: How are you holding up?
Pratap: It was dj vu all over again like I was Sagar and facing Uday Singh. I'm sure Ajabde that Sagar has a connection to that man and if he does then that makes him my half-brother. All these years I thought I had a control on my past demons but as I saw him standing in front of Maa with arms outstretched it was like the old times again and I felt so helpless so alone
Ajabde: Shhh... you are not alone. She pulled him into her embrace his face in the crook of her neck. She rubbed her hands soothingly all over his head and back whispering I love you and I'm here, we're here for you, giving him pecks on the head when it happened making both of them look at each other
Ajabde: Did you just
Pratap: you too
And again it happened like the butterflies fluttering its wings their baby let them know of its presence. Ajabde took Pratap's hand and placed them on her belly where they embraced the miracle of life she carried within her as a family.
Chapter 58
Sagar stood behind JB as they came to meet Pratap. Sagar now knew that no one would hurt him his Mamma said it to him (looking at JB) so now they were going to meet Pratap Mamma said he was Dada Bhai that he would never hurt him and love him like she did. JB took in her son who looked relatively calm after the fiasco. Pratap remained quiet but he saw Sagar who was trying his best to hide behind JB but as the toddler was pushed forward by the woman in question he looked at Pratap thoroughly who was studying him as well. Sagar took the first step and then there was no stopping him he stood in front of Pratap looking up at him: Sowwy
Pratap smiled when the young one continued: Me Sagar...my mamma -my mamma - me baby - me baby you- dada bhai - mumma -dada bhai - baby - my family. She my too (looks at Ajabde who winked at him making him blush) Pratap raised his hand which scared the kid but then as he ruffled his hair Sagar held onto his arm - owwies (looking at the bandaged hands) and slowly he kissed them and rubbed his tiny fingers -owwies okay - right mumma. JB nodded as tears welled in her eyes as well Ajabde's who took in the bonding between the two brothers
Bade Daata sat in his study looking at all the files also the blood test he had rushed earlier had come in positive - Sagar was RG's nephew but what did it mean? JB was clearly attached to Sagar so were Ajabde and Subho while the boys didn't show it they took had taken a liking to the young one. He saw across the huge ornate glass windows as the grown-ups played a game of ball with the young one who was doing much better after his nap. Sagar was holding Pratap's hands like he used to hold his when he (Pratap) was a child and if RG was Sagar's uncle that would mean that Sagar was Uday's child. Everything was getting complicated by the minute but he knew Sagar was the key of recovery and healing for all of them. RG entered his office and said: We need to talk
Everyone was enjoying the break they had received after getting their egos bruised in the obstacle course. After Sagar fell asleep Bade Daata came in and took them all for the obstacle course - he made them repeat it until they all cleared it in one go but he was harshest on Pratap and Chakri who were made to do it all military style and had to do extra laps for taking extra time to clear the climbing obstacle. Everyone thought that Ajabde would say something but she enjoyed her snacks as she saw a comedy movie inside along with JB. And now they were taking a break before the ring fights - BD was waiting for someone and then they were going to pair up and fight. One thing everyone was sure of was that BD would fight Pratap but they were all in for a shock
BD: I'm the judge so I will be seating out with my girls and monkey man here
Som: Wait what?
Maan and Veeni: You're the judge! (Shocked)
Pratap, Chakri and Hakim looked at him incredulously while Akbar blurted
This is some trick BD you are the judge but you will jump in if you feel the fight is not up to your expectations and stuff and then we will be doomed
BD: No I'm not fighting and only 3 of you will enter the ring today - all 3 might get a chance to fight or only one fights - who knows just be prepared - the names will come on the projector
Everyone looked at the projector when the fight pairs came
Pratap VS Raghvendra
Chakrapani VS Rawat Chundawat
Akbar VS Bairam Khan
Akbar looked at BD and shouted: Khan Baba is back (happily)
At the door stood two gentlemen all ready for their fights- Bairam Khan and Rawat Chundawat - all allies with Bade Daata and now gathered to tackle the situation standing at their doorstep
BK: Don't shout like a 3year old and be prepared to get your behind thoroughly punished
Akbar: I can take you on Baba - he hugged the old man who was his father figure since his own parents were too busy socialising with the others on trips. BK had raised him and was his everything while Rawat Chundawat brought a smile on Ajabde's face
Ajabde: Mamasa
Rawatji: Let me look at you my child. You look so pretty and gorgeous
Ajabde: Mamasa I'm fat
Rawat: Nope you are carrying our heir - who's going to learn all the fun things from us. Come now take a seat.
They greeted JB and the others - boys took their blessings. Rawatji hugged Pratap while his wife avoided eye contact clearly her hormonal brain was still angry
BD declared: Let the fight begin
RG had already taken his place while Pratap joined in the ring as well
Rawatji whispered: Does he know?
BD: No but he will now
BK: It's going to be an epic fight
Originally posted by: crazy-for-prajaEmotional update! Poor sagar and pratap.😭That devil US should just get what he deserves.Nothing less and nothing more.😡😡And wow AS has started kicking😆.
And bairam khan has entered too.😊
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