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Posted: 07 June 2015 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
As always really awsum
Nice idea of rose day
Niti and Charlie scene was awww..!!!
Sidyali scene was cute as always
Thanks for the PM..!!!   Embarrassed

Edited by Sugarbabe14 - 07 June 2015 at 10:10pm

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Posted: 07 June 2015 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
angela nd uttu part sooo sad
Angela finally realised she loved uttu
sid siyali part awesome
finally charlie dad accepted niti
vibharth part was good
precap rose day
excited
update next part soon
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Posted: 07 June 2015 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
Is it that u inspired by swaron charity event for uttu Angela part..
Vibharth part was not that great, comparing the expectation u had created in 11 th part... And it was short too for vibharth ..
One suggestion.. It appears to me that vibha is likely off the track as teacher since being n love... Esp that last dialogue hook or crook.. Before she seems hesitant and not willing to accept her feelings.. But it is fast.. But it is lovely to read their parts.. Still u can make it part fighting for their love and being possessive and she can make little efforts n explaination but not be desparate to get back to him...
This is my point of view...Jus giving opinion inspired by yr ff...

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:22am | IP Logged

Uttu and angela.. They made me remember of swayam and Sharon scene.. 
BTW if u r trying put that spice in this story then I m really looking forward for angela character..

Vibhart part was not that great plus it was too short.. 

N niti and Charlie's dad convo was heart touching..!!

Looking forward for roseday..

Tc
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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Nice job..
Felt bad fr charlie...
It ws short updre on veebharth..
Bt i liked it..
Thanks fr pm n updation..
Waiting fr nxt part
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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 1:18am | IP Logged
awow.. lovly one!!
its was perfect!! waiting 4 the nxt one!!
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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 2:18am | IP Logged
All d part's was awesome dearEmbarrassed bt iss part my vibharth was quite short one bt simple with cuteness...m back babesEmbarrassed
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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 2:41am | IP Logged
Cute update 
Waiting for rose day Embarrassed
Sidyali 
Do make it really special Wink


Edited by v_sidyali - 08 June 2015 at 2:50am

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