Aashlok SS: Love With Flaws, part 5 and note post updated pg no. 16 - Page 16

This content was originally posted by: Subhashiniii

I am So happy Dear For U

Congratulations 👏

This content was originally posted by: quirky_senorita

Awesome update.

And hearty congratulations too.

This content was originally posted by: charanyaaj

Beautiful part.
Congrats viji and best of luck 🤗

Firstly...Advance Congrats to u

Secondly...I love yr "stupid brain" giving u more ideas...so that I can get more chapter 😆

Loved the chapter 2..
You showed the difficulties of a handicap in this society..it is a sad reality that companies choose the physical looks than what your skills are..thankgod her father called before she commit suicide..her baba is very encouraging just like every parent..
I love the line you wrote about smile, it truly can make wonders..
Shlok should just go to hell and find himself a devil girl like him who ruin his life..
I wish astha got a very gentle and loving husband..

I am loving this story now buds..its not only about love but also includes social issues especially the major issue of rich and poor..
Poor sid he got beaten for loving her daughter, a rich girl..what kind of friend shlok is? He didn't help him?
What can I say about this Anjali, her head is so high in the air, wish to see her fall straight on her face..
I hope astha don't take shit from her..
Again, those lines on self respect were beautiful, money can be earned again but not self respect..
Lovely update

Very beautiful update..
Again you emerged the struggles of poor, their desires in very beautiful way..
What kalindi did for her daughter takes guts, my assumption is she really became a prostitute for her sake, you hanged us there..
Oh my, so avdhoot and anjali know each other..there's past involved, would love to know how and what relation they had..

Avdhoot and anjali are siblings..
Then astha and shlok would be cousins right? Or someone willbe adopted..who could it be?
More mysteries..by the way where is our niru baba, isn't he included in the story?
Anjali must hve left the family to marry rich guy..
Still what kalindi did is not yet revealed, will be waiting for that..
Shlok love her but felt betrayed for not telling him that she was handicaped..at least shlok still human..
You know I have watched a episode in pyar tune kya kiya..the girl was dwarf and the boy was perfect, was a gangster too and then they chat in fb and when they met he insulted her and his friends too mocked her, then after his sister break up, his sister told him that yhere is no perfect relaotionship he realized how wrong he was to think there is perfect relationship and asked forgiveness from her..she didn't easily forgave him but after his struggle she did..
Your story resembles that epi but your story is much more beautiful and interesting as it involves mysterious and other social issues..
Waiting for next update..

This content was originally posted by: vj3072

Firstly...Advance Congrats to u

Secondly...I love yr "stupid brain" giving u more ideas...so that I can get more chapter 😆

This content was originally posted by: fiza1995

This is heart breaking. How can he say something like this to her. And love do not come with terms and conditions. I just hate shlok and thats it. He is cheap and disgusting. He didn't even helped her. So inhuman. Want to kick his butt. 

Please reveal the whole truth to shlok soon. And make him suffer for his deeds. 

And u write beautifully. Just loved it. 

Thanks for the pm and keep updating :)