Aashlok SS: Love With Flaws, part 5 and note post updated pg no. 16 - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

195

Views

13040

Users

26

Likes

247

Frequent Posters

VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Part 2:

Another awesome update dear...

what wrong with shlok ...not only with shlok but the whole society...

why they have to tried her like that...

she only meet with accident and not a broken handicapped...

instead of encouraging her why the society have to discourage her...

poor girl is so broken down...

hope shlok will realise his mistake soon...

waiting to read hw avdhoot is going to relieve the truth to shlok...

thanks for the wonderful treat dear... 


Thanks again for your long and sweet comment akka...and yes the so 

called society is blind...won't recognise the true talent of the 

people...can't do any thing...
VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Part 3...

another awesome update...

like mom like son...shlok is also stubborn like anjali...

well written abt middle class and the caste...

when it come to love...all this thing comes into picture...

when she knew sid and jyo in love she disapproved it and made jyothi house arrest...

but when it come to his son...she takes the help of the same sid...

what a selfish lady she is...

loved sid character a lot...

thanks for the wonderful treat dear...

VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks again for your lovely comment akka...yeah caste is the major 

problem...not only in love...but in many other things too...
sireesha76 thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
just read 4chapters
simply superb
beautifully written
VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Part 4:

another beautiful update...

u have brought out the struggling of the middle class family very well...

and rich spoiler mother character...

rich people think that middle class people can do anything for money...

really hate those people..

so what happened to kalindi...

she sacrifices  her life for astha's studies...

anjali and adhvoot had meet earlier...what happened in between them...

waiting for the next update...


Thanks for your precious comments akka...and thanks for your appreciation akka...

will update soon...
VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
shlok's mom so rude insulting avdoot...
but wait is there sum past...
waiting 4 d next part..
thnks 4 d pm...


Thank you hiya...

yup there is past...you'll get to know soon...

you welcome buds...

will update soon...
coolhi1988 thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
wen wil u update d next part???
waiting
VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: archanarajan96

Awesme update dr..so much cnfusin on the relatn bw anji n avdoot..hw r they both cnctd?..any way nce update dr.cntinue writng,n thnks 4 pm me 😃


Your confusion will be cleared in the next update dear...

Thanks a lot buddy for your appreciation...will update soon...

you welcome buds...
VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maitydeblina

Thanks for pm:) You welcome di...😃
Viji:) that was a ausum update:) thanks alot di😃...
So true temple is only place u can get peace:) for me it works:) same pinch...its works for me too😃...
Come to updatee i hate anjali:( but i think she has its own side of story????
So avdhoot and annjali know each other   ...yeah di...they both know each other😊...
What kkalindi didd for astha's happiness???little bit scared of ur this revelation
waiting for ur next update:) update soon:) will update soon di😊...

Thanks for update:) pleasure is mine😉...
A big hug:)    accepted and returned your hug with much warmness😆


Thanks a lot di...for your sweet and sacchirine comment🤗... 
VijjuShrenu_MB thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: archanarajan96

Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update


AWWW...im touched by your enthusiasm buddy...😃

will update soon...