Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

Aashlok SS: Love With Flaws, part 5 and note post updated pg no. 16

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He along with his friends sitting on the fence, near a basket ball court. Its been two hours since he was waiting for her. Arey yar shlok how much time it takes for her to come, said one of his friend tiredly. Wait na yar its just 3:30, she said that she will reach by 4 said shlok. Yar buddy when you know that she will reach by 4 then why did you escorted all of us here and moreove its your love and you need to handle this all by your own. Ya i know but it was my first meeting with her and im feeling a little anxious. So guys please don't mind me said shlok with servility.


His friends got biggest shock of their life. Probably it was the first time shlok agnihotri has spoked serenely with his friends. Whatz the matter shlok you're becoming so gentle day/day chided one of his friend. He blushed at his friends statement. Oh you now learend to blush too, his another friend commented. He blushed even more. Seriously guys i've heard that "Love is Blind" but today i got to know that it makes people insane too, all thanks to the girl who changed this tiger into a meek cat commented his buddy. All his friends were now started teasing him. They were completely in a different zone.


He laughed whole-heartedly for the first time. He is in love. The feeling is completely different for him.  Today he is going to meet her for the first time. What he'll do when she stands in front of him. Hug her, kiss her, or... what he will do. All the feelings related to happy started engulfing him. Giving a tickling sensation all over his body.  


Finally the most awaiting moment arrived, its 4 and as she informed she came stood in front of him. She dressed in a beautiful pink anarkali suit. Wore a simple chain around her neck, a small nose stud, simple earrings, applied baby pink gloss on her lips, few pink bangles on her both hands, and a small bindi in b/w her eyebrows. She is looking like angel sent from above. She is divine beauty. She is simple but elegant. 

He was too lost in her beauty that he didn't paid any heed to her flaws. He heard his friends laughing their ass out. Arey shlok didn't you find any other girl other than this handicap said one of his friend pointing at her crutches. That is when he looked at her crutches. His expressions changed from disbelief to bombshell and then to ignominious. His friends started mocking him, laughing at him. He was too embarrassed to answer them. She can clearly see the rage in those eyes. She felt bad for him but said nothing.


He soon composed himself. Are you "AASTHA KIRLOSKAR" he catechized her as if confirm to that she is not the girl whom he loved. Yes came a simple answer. Mixed emotions started flowing in his heart like an inundation. He was frustated. Frustated with this whole love fiasco. He grabbed her by her shoulders forgetting about the resoultion for his iracund and not caring about her leg and crutches.


"How dare you to cheat me. You bladdy bitch", he roared on her face. Shlok listen to me. I've never cheated on you. I was aboout to say the truth but... Enough... He sqeezed her cheeks tightly "Just shut your bladdy mouth, you fille de joie (its a french word which means wh**e), women like you should fall for men like you only. You deserve a disabled men like you not a perfect men like me, he said and pushed her not caring about her legs.


Her crutches were already on the ground. Now she too fell on the ground as she can't stand without crutches. She looked at him, trying to hold back the tears that is treatening to fall. But he didn't spare a single glance at her. Guys come lets go he said and left without even caring about her. Her crutches were two feet away from her. She tried to get up on her own but due to the cement rod implantation in her leg she was unable to move. She looked here and there for source and found a person near the fence.


It is sid, shlok's buddy everyone left but he stayed there. He brought her crutches near her and slowly made her stand on her feet. She mumbled a thanks without glancing him and left away.


"It was the last day in her college. She happily bid good bye to all her friends after having a stomach full of pani puri for one last time with her allies. She was about to cross the road that is when she saw him for the first time. She completely forget about the surroundings, she was totally lost in him. He wore a  jeans and a blue shirt completely messed and a hanky around his neck. He has grown hair till his shoulder(new trend) and wore a ring to his left ear and at his right eyebrow. Wore a normal shoes. His complete look resembles to a street rowdy and to top of it he was altercating with one of his allies by holding his collar. His eyes filled with sheer iracund. She can figure out that even by standing at the either side of the road.


What is so captivating in him that she is constantly staring only him without even blinking her eyes. May be she is head over heels with him. Love at first sight. No decent girl in her right sense will fall for a guy with such looks. But she did. Does that mean she is not decent enough. Completely wrong, she is decent or may be beyond that and she is sober too.


Someone has wisely said that love happens without any calculations. It won't check for date, time, person, qualification, status, caste, propitious moment ect...ect... It happens without any knowledge and without anyboy's concern. May be the same thing happened to her. The very same theory of love applied to her too.


Everyone loves, a boy loves a girl and proposes her and viceversa. But some people terms that as crush, infactuation and may be lust. So true, were are in  21st  century and 3G. It often happens with people especially teenage girls/boys.  But does that mean there is no true love around. Yes there is but out of 100 love cases only 10-20 are true and successful cases. Unsure abt that too. But a person who loves the other person by accepting all his/her flaws is  "UNCONDITIONAL LOVE".


A loud horn sound of a vehicle brought her out of her reverie. He was in the middle of the road still fighting with somebody. But... but the truck, seems like the breaks of the truck failed. She worriedly rushed towards him to save him. She pushed him away and in the process she fell on the road and the same truck drived on top of her leg. He was about to see her face but thankfully an ambulance which was passing by the same road stopped near the accident spot and took her to the hospital".     


She closed her eyes when she remembered that accident. She felt that her legs were giving away and she was falling into a deep chasm. "women like you should fall for men like you only.You deserve a disabled men like you not a perfect men like me", his words were constantly ringing in her ears. She left her crutches to shut her ears, inorder to stop that ringing echo reaching her ears, she broked down completely on the road. She felt so shattered cuz of his insult infront of his friends. How she wished to slap him right then and there for his insult and his accuses. How she want to spit out the whole truth infront of him and his allies that she got into this situation cuz of him, that she lost her leg cuz of him, in the process of saving him from the accident. "Its not me shlok agnihotri, its you who won't deserves anybody's love, not even a handicap like me". She said and cried bitterly on the road.  

NOTE: Guys i know nothing about love as im unexperienced of such feelingsSmile. i never used to discuss such topics with my friends as im studious and a little shy personBlushing and whenever my friends brings up such topics in class i simply used to shift my place only after scolding themCry. i always curse my frenz who always blabbers bout loveWink. i don't even have any crushes apart from mahesh babuWinkLOL. so, if you people find any mistakes in my thoughts regarding love. plz do pardon meCry. and please refrain from throwing chappals at meCry. the thing is that i've recently bought new sandalsLOL. so for now i don't need themLOL. but whenever i want them i'll let you know guys. till then keep them safe and moreover you people will get many chances to cast them on meLOL.

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Edited by VijjuShrenu_MB - 08 June 2015 at 1:27am

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Subhashiniiiii Goldie

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 3:02am | IP Logged
Omg Astha handicaped coz of Shlok and even he don't bother to know who is she Cry
Looking like sad and emotional storyConfused
Thanks for pm

Edited by Subhashiniiiii - 04 May 2015 at 3:03am

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Aww what a heartbreaking start Viji ( Am I right that's your name naah) Cry.
My poor Astha sacrifice her normal life for Shlok n his life n he insult her like that such a Censored Angry he don't deserve her. I'm feeling so sad for her Cry Cry Cry.
Don't worry u write true about love that love can't be conditional than it's not love at all if u love anyone truly than u will love him/her with all flaws n that's make it more real n strong. Thanks for PM dear n waiting for next part Smile.

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Thanks for pmBig smile and thanks for updateBig smile
Amazing updateClapClapreally niceSmile
Really felt bad for asthaCryConfusedbut shlok should v listened to herConfused
update other ss soonWinkLOL

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very nice written thanks for pm

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SushSush Senior Member

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Hey.. nice story.. pm me when u update..

Edited by SushSush - 04 May 2015 at 9:02am

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coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 7:46am | IP Logged
awesome start..
love at first sight for astha...
poor astha she lost her leg inorder to save shlok frm d accident..
shlok AngryAngryAngry he hurt astha badly...
hope he knows d truth that astha is in this condition due to him...
does sid know d truth as he helped astha get up...??
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

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Awesome one...thanks for the pm...
Plz update more...waiting eagerly...
U rocks dear..
Well done

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