Ek Mutthi Aasmaan

Twist in Love Ragna new ss 10 updated on 45 - Page 8

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thank u so much for liking my work.. here is next partbhope u like it...

part 2


raghav pulled her to other side
as soon as he left her hand she hold his coller n says

girli:how dare u mr.??
the media. peoples r seeing this so raghav holding herhand made it to encircled around his neck n says

raghav:darling I knw u missed me but its nt place to kiss..lets go from here..

all the while she thinking how could someone besharam like this.

she trying to freee herself.

he took her to place wr noone see them there.
raghav lefr her hand n feels happy for bachaving from all.

chahhht " a sound eched in his ears .. its ntvany air crush or something its the sound of tappad that the girl given. on his sweet face (feeling bad)

raghav:ouchhh ahhj only sound came out of his mouth..

she looked angryly at himmm .

raghav:it pains dheere maro na..

she thinks how can someone be so careless I beat him he is saying it wil pain..

raghav:k start ...

girl:wt.??

raghav:I knw ur going to give a big speech about wt I did now. so u start I will be listening..

he folds his handds infront of her n stod there.
girl:how dare u.. how dare u aftrr doing all these ur behaving as if nothing happened. ??

was that ha.. I am seeing u for the first time and u said me as ur girl friend.?? and that to in live in relationship. ??? ab bolo mai kab thumhare saath live in thi .mm. ...

girl:mai abhi jaakar unsabko sach sach bathathi hu...

she triea to move but he holds her hand.

girl:remove ur hand... I said remove ur hand... u dnt knw abt me... I am kalpana jadhav dont mesh with me mr.

raghav:whatever. . I dont bother abt ur name...
kalpana:wt u mean u leastvbothere abt it... do u knw wt u said infront of those people...??

raghav:come on miss.mesh with me (new name for her) its called self defence ... aajkal ladkonki izzath kathreme pad gaya hai..

u knw I needed help so I took it from u. vo alag bath hai ki maine thumse poocha nahi.. but thanks for ur help.. now stop ur speech I have other work to do...

kalpana:I will not leave u .u will have to pay for it.. just wait and wait..

she was abot to slap him again but raghav is raghav escaped from her n runs from there..

raghav after going a little distance.

raghav:"hello mis.mesh with me... ... thanks again.. my name is raghav singania..
he left from there..

kalpi :wt kind of man he is.. he did all thease and acting like nothing happened... kamina kahika... fir milnedo use bathathi hu ki kalpana se ulazneka anjaam kya hoga...

kalpo:oh god ye sab karthe karthe mai jo kaam ke liye ayi tho vahi bhul gayi..????archu... ... she sees a girl coming from there n says.

kalpi:archu... and hugs her...

(archana or archu best friend of kalpana coming india after 2 years kalpi came to pick her)

archu:u came to pick me and ur standing here...

kalpi:ye sab us kamine ke vajaha se huva hai... chodungi nahi use mai...

archu:which kamina... no dont say me I fight with any boy now.. I am tiered of seeing it..

kalpi:no this time its nt my fault its his fault...

arch:really.. wt he did.

kalpi:hey leave it y we talking abt that idiot... say how r u..m I missed u so much... chalo ghar chalthe hai...




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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: swara2504


Ha mai busy this
Par tune pukara aur mai chalo aai
Raghav smart kui nahi hoga ishu ka raghav Jo haiπŸ˜†

so sweet... next update padle.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful update ishu
Raghav is really besharam...
he doesn't feel pain of slap..
And WO sorry keh raha hai ya ehsaan kar raha hai sorry kehke
But our kalpi is tough girl to handle him
Now waiting to watch how they meet again...
And the story proceed
Update soon😳

Edited by swara2504 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: swara2504

Wonderful update ishu

Raghav is really besharam...
he doesn't feel pain of slap..
And WO sorry keh raha hai ya ehsaan kar raha hai sorry kehke
But our kalpi is tough girl to handle him
Now waiting to watch how they meet again...
And the story proceed
Update soon😳

thank u shona.. I was sending pm to u.. but u already read...
ha he is like that..
even kalpi is tough girl in thismmm
u will be surprised n shocked.to see next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very  interesting story. Both parts are awesome.
To save himself from Kria Raghav used Kalpi?
OMG! Kalpi slapped him? Bachke rahena Raghav baba is larki sey.
Raghav you choose the wrong girl, LOL!
Eagerly waiting to know how they will meet again and create another tamasha.πŸ˜†
Very entertaining update dear.
Edited by farhana04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read both parts very interesting start and new concept. Rags bachi nay liya kalpi ka Sahara kria se Bach ne kay liye. Kalpi nay diya chamat rags bay kaha do pal ka tha saath media se Bach ne kay liye. Abh kya hoga re ishaani kaise mile gay yeh dobaara πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
πŸ˜† kalpi sai tapad mila phir bi ye rags πŸ˜† πŸ˜† shameless I love this shameless rags or kalpi ki naya nam ms.mess with me πŸ˜† πŸ˜† kalpi ki best friend bi usai dosh dereheho ki ladko sai ulajna kalpi ki adath hai πŸ˜† fantastic update πŸ‘ ⭐️ ishu mwah 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am at work Gurdhiya ...
Will read both parts ...and then comment...πŸ˜‰
Agar...feedback...nahi...kiya...to...Tenu..mein...saag...banaongi...aur khaa..jauongi... πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update dear. Raghav is too much πŸ˜†.
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This content was originally posted by: Vsapras

I am at work Gurdhiya ...

Will read both parts ...and then comment...πŸ˜‰
Agar...feedback...nahi...kiya...to...Tenu..mein...saag...banaongi...aur khaa..jauongi...πŸ˜†

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