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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jessicarh

Aww..it was soo adorable n cute(aliya-veer)Heart
Loved it again..keep writingHeart
You know what..this veer thing is getting more n more interesting day by day Evil Smile
aur waise bhi ab cleaning ki responsibility veer ki hai..so now he must be only knowing where all her stuff areLOL


Awe
Thanks for the comment
I see you caught the cleaning part ..
I almost forgot that bit but subconsciously remembered it
Thanks

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humzy

lovely updates
cont soon


Thanks
Will update soon
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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessSonia

amazing update...
do cont soon
loved d veer aliya scene



Thank you
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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aash2302

Very nice update...


Thank you
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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Part 3

At life beat

Aliya was walking with veer to the reception desk, when from the other side ishan and malivika come and spot the two coming. Ishan again gets a wired feeling of seeing them both together. Where as malivika is happy think that aliya has finally left her ishan alone and no one will break them.

When aliya spots them

Aliya - morning dr malivika, ishan

Malivika - good morning dr aktar (sorry can't spell her surname) , good morning dr veer

Ishan - morning

Dr veer - morning, sorry I need to go, aliya report to later on the progress of the patient

With that veer left the three. After veer exit malivika also left as she was called. Only ishan and aliya where left standing there. Aliya was still feeling uncomfortable with ishan standing next to her. So she...

Aliya - okay ishan I have to go as well, I need to get ready and go check on my patients... Bye

Ishan - hey hold a min, I need to talk to you about something important

Aliya thinking - oh god is he going to give more details on his and malivika relationship... Please god save me I don't want to hear this please.

Whiles aliya was busy talk with herself and god and was thinking what wrong with her, why has she not replied. With this he snaps his figures in front of her face. Aliya come back.

Aliya - uuummm ishan, actually I am a bit busy right now, can we talk later, please

Ishan thought for a min and said okay we will chat later and he let aliya leave. Aliya took a sigh of relief.

Both of them were unaware that somebody was watching there interaction.



Okay I am going to leave it here
Don't kill me because of the cliff hanger
I had time to write the update since it takes me an hour and half to get to work each way so i thought instead of sleeping on the train I might as well write the update
So hope you guys like
Looking forward to reading who you guys think it is

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by don girls

Originally posted by pd786

Originally posted by don girls

Originally posted by pd786

Originally posted by don girls

Originally posted by pd786

hey pretty
veer is positive character or not?
do update soon
pm me when you update


Hey
I am not sure yet whether to make veer a positive character or not
still thinking about it
i will update soon when i have time to write it down
and will definitely pm/or scrape you


Thank you so much sweetheart
BTW new in this forum
Praneeta here


Hey praneeta,
i have been on the forum for a couple of years but never felt like posting anything till now
btw i am kirti


Hey Kirti
I have been a part of this forum for 3-4years
I meant part of ZW forums


I found the zw forum about 2 or 3 weeks back
When I started watching the episodes , I think it was when there was like 4 episode released by then

i found it like a week ago

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by don girls

Originally posted by pd786

Nice part
Hope to see more of veer aliya
I like this aliya veer bond
Veer is stalking her right?
I wanna know veer's motive of coming to life beat
Update soon
Waiting for your scrap


Thanks for liking the part
Yeah veer is a bit like a stalker but there will be a bit of twist once I figure it out
About his reason, that will come in time
I will definitely make it a bit interesting

you're most welcome
veer needs to be a positive character yaar
wanna see kushal punjabi as a positive character coz most of the time he is a negative character
waiting
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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
omg veer is pakka stalking aaliya
is he like a crazy mad lover?
ishaan doesn't like veer close to aaliya, why so?
anyways nice update
it takes you one and a half hour in train? oh god
so update soonest
waiting okay?

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