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Neira FF : Forever in your Arms, New update Page 12 on 29th May. (Page 10)

Zainab_Sidd Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mothiaai

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Originally posted by mothiaai

woah i'm first!!
amazing update!
loved d kids attempt to bring neira closer...
d aankh mincholi depicts d depth of bond dat neira share..
d kids r awesome trying to bring their parents close n all..
loved d entire update..d pooja n fast part especially!

update soon!


Awwieee thanksss M Smile
M glad u liked it yaaa...thankss thanksss thanksss
much much love [:*]
yess will update soon Embarrassed


its so beautiful...its impossible to not love it!!
amazing a writer u r...plz update soon...
as much as u brighten up my day when i read d update u end up leaving me craving me for so much more of neira dat i literally end up checking every 1-2 hrs for the update!
plz update!!




Awww thats sooo sweet of you..
yes will deffo update one today...
stay glued and keep loving.
Mwaahh loads of loveee loveee :*
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Such a lovely update zainabb :-)) I really wish Nachiket does something like dis to ragini,as she loves samundar actually,instead of some party at karans hotel or dinner somewhere else!...This would be soo romantic!!! And yes the proposal wala scene is so cute,kids got dem engaged ;-) smart!

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NeiRaFreak

Zainab... WOW Girl ... Tum pe NeiRa ka kia jadoo cha gya hai Embarrassed
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It was lovely reading... beautiful update Day Dreaming  

Haan per agar aise he updates deti rahein tou I'll definitely fly to India n kill NB for only thinking about MUs and nothing more ...  Kiya ye shubh kaam karoon phir ? Wink  LOL LOL LOL

keep the sweet updates coming Embarrassed... waiting for next part Big smile

Yes plz...at least kidnap her and keep her away from IKNMP! 

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NeiRa_Love

Such a lovely update zainabb :-)) I really wish Nachiket does something like dis to ragini,as she loves samundar actually,instead of some party at karans hotel or dinner somewhere else!...This would be soo romantic!!! And yes the proposal wala scene is so cute,kids got dem engaged ;-) smart!


TejuuuEmbarrassed
Thankyou cutest pie.
M happie u like em
Plz keep aupporting dear.. SmileSmile
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NeiRa_Love

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Zainab... WOW Girl ... Tum pe NeiRa ka kia jadoo cha gya hai Embarrassed
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It was lovely reading... beautiful update Day Dreaming  

Haan per agar aise he updates deti rahein tou I'll definitely fly to India n kill NB for only thinking about MUs and nothing more ...  Kiya ye shubh kaam karoon phir ? Wink  LOL LOL LOL

keep the sweet updates coming Embarrassed... waiting for next part Big smile

Yes plz...at least kidnap her and keep her away from IKNMP! 



HAHAHAHHAAH okkay done Hug

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Notice - Hello people,
a new update coming soon. A fresh topic on current track. Hope you all will enjoy. Will be posted by simran.

Credits - Simran
My Partner in crime.

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Hello guys! I have found a partner in crime and her name is Simran. Together, we both have started a new series of FF called "Darmiyaan." This is her first try on FF so hope you all enjoy.
This FF is continuation of what happened after Aarav is sentenced to jail...

This is the first chapter in the "Darmiyaan" series... Hope you enjoy. Please give feedback

Silence... A pin drop silence filled the room...

Ragini shed a tear in the darkness...

She was all alone... Yes, all alone... Her grief was beyond words... Darker than darkness and absolutely nothing could make here heart lighter...

Her children were upset with her... And she had no one to console her... Her poor boy was suffering a long time in jail and her daughter was angry with her marriage... She was a strong woman but this time, nothing could stop her tears... She was angry with herself because she had upset her love... She had been unkind to her children and above all, she had been unkind to her Nachiket...

Another tear trickled down her cheeks...

She missed him so much... He was soon going to leave back to U.S. with his children after she had decided that they would separate...

A song broke the silence... Her phone began ringing...

 

Saathiya yeh tune kya kiya

Beliya yeh tune kya kiya

Maine kiya, tera intazaar

Itna karo na mujhe pyaar

 

Her hands shivered as she answered the call... She gathered all her strength to pick up the phone and didn't bother to look at who had called... She was undoubtedly sure that it was him...

"Hello... Kaun?" she asked... Her voice was heavy with sobbing...

"Ragini, woh main bol raha hoon..."

"Nachiket..." she just couldn't help it and broke down...

"Ragini! Sab kuch theek toh hai na?" He began to get worried...

"Nachiket... Mujhse raha nahi jaa raha hai... I need you Nachiket..." she spoke from the bottom of her heart...

"Ragini tumhe kya hua hai? Main abhi aa raha hoon..." He cut the call and left to her place immedietly...

 

He arrived at her place and saw her crying profusely in the corner of the room... It was past midnight...

She turned around to find him looking at her... Her eyes were red and she needed someone to console her...

He sat down next to her and held her hands and kissed them... Surprisingly, she didn't refuse or move away... He slowly wiped her tears...

"Jaanti ho na? Nahi dekh sakhta tumhe rote hue..." His eyes began to moisten...

She put her head on his shoulder and cried her heart out... Unknowingly, he began to cry too and his tears flowed into her hair...

"Forgive me Ragini." He said... His voice full of guilt...

"Maaf toh maine tumhe bohot pehli hi kar diya tha Nachiket... Par khudko maaf nahi kar paayi main... Main haar gayi... I have failed as a mother Nachiket..."

 

Will update soon! :) Thank you for readingSmile



Edited by ZainabSidd - 28 May 2015 at 5:32am

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This is nice, Zainab and Simran.
This is so sweet. 

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