Whoa .. @ZainabSidd.. That was so amazing .. Such a sweet Birthday Surprise Ragini and the kids planned for Nachiket..
The expressions you described, looked so genuine .. true to the characters and scene ..
The best thing which deserves most appreciation is the way you handled all the characters .. Firstly, you introduced all the characters - Aman + all the children + RK .. for once, I thought, it would end up in some sort of 'khicdi' .. But the way you took the story forward.. with every character playing a proper role .. you did justice to all the characters.. that was a very tough job at hand .. and you did it perfectly...
Suhani-Ragini's short conversation was so cute .. It was only Suhani who could understand her mother properly ..
Liked it very much .. You imagined it too nicely ..
Waiting for the next part now .. Take your time ..
Keep Writing ..