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Neira FF : Forever in your Arms, New update Page 12 on 29th May.

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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Smile Hello people Zainab here,
I welcome you all to my 2nd FF.
Thanks for all the support, you guys are the best
It encouraged me to write more and more.
Here I will stop my bak bak and will start with a fresh FF.. Hope you all will like my idea. Do comment Lets start this thunder ride. Enjoy ! Stay glued.

CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 1

CHAPTER 2 - PAGE 1

CHAPTER 3 - PAGE 4



CHAPTER 4 and 5 - PAGE 7


FF name : We are a FAMILY
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Chapter 1 and Chapter 2



CHAPTER 1 --->
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Ragini is in hospital but she can't pay attention to work. She just can't. She keeps on gazing on the calender again and again. Just then Dr. Aman enters with his lovy dovy confused state of mind. He looks at her as she keeps on gazing on the calender.
Aman - Ragini kya hua. Yuhi baar baar calender kyu dekh rahi ho? Accha laga toh me jao ghar mai dusra lagvaa dunga Koi tension nai.
Ragini (with and irritated tone) - Sir mujhe calender accha nai laga.. mai calender pe date dekh rahi thi !
Aman - Kyu kya hua date ko ?
Ragini - Sir aaj 4 april hai aur parso 6 april.
Sir mai ...
And aman interrupts in between.
Aman - haan toh ragini sahi toh hai.. agar aaj 4 hai toh 2 din baad 6 he hogi naa. Isme tension ki kya baat hai. Tumbhi naa kuch bhi tension le leti ho.
Ragini finds it difficult to explain it to him. She says
Ragini - Sir aap meri baat suniye phele.
Aaj 4 april hai aur parso 6 april hai. 6th april ko nachiket ka birthday hota hai.
(She had that sad expressions on her face )
She wanted to suprise him but because she already took soo many leaves for shaadi that she had no option left and even she had no idea in her mind.
Dr aman understood why she is upset. He said
Aman - Tumhari two days ki holiday hai ragini.. 5th aur 6th holiday hai.
Ragini was shocked
Ragini - Sir maine phele he itni holidays le rakhi hai aur 2 kaise. Sab handle kaise hoga.
Aman - tum tension mat lo yaha ka.. i will manage. Tum mujhe dost maanti ho toh meri baat man lo please.
She said thanks to him. He was always there when she needed him.
Aman - aur haan yeh ek din mai kuch accha plan soch lo okkay.. all the best.
Ragini smiled as she was thankful to him.
Ragini said to herself, kuch sochna parega accha.. par kya karu kuch nai samj raha.. hum toh ek ghar mai bhi nai rehte.
She kept on thinking because she wanted it to be special very very special.
She wanted to show him how much she loved him... Although he knew that but still she wanted to convey that to him.. he was special to her.

At Patel's house :

All kids gathered at home. Nishi, aarav, agam, ranbir, suhani.
Nishi came to stay for a week after her marriage. Now kids were offically allowed to meet whenever they wished to, stay wherever they want to. Ranbir came home just to check on his brother and sis. Though he hated aarav but yes he liked nishi. She was her sister afterall.
All of them were super exicted finally they could meet each other and express their love to them. Then the actual reason behind the top secret meeting was out.
They were planning their dad's birthday. All were deciding something or the other. Ranbir chose to leave but agam and suhani and nishi said just one time. Just one time let dad be happy.. just one time let them be together. If not for mum but for dad please don't tell anyone please be a part of it please.
And he was convinced coz he loved his dad and somewhere in the corner he loved his mom too.. He was a part of the plan. He agreed not to spoil anyones mood for 2 days. They all decided to go for an outing. It was RK's idea of a farmhouse. He had a farmhouse near a beach and was awesome. They all agreed and decided that they wont tell pam.
They went to discuss it with ragini. Ranbir left for home.

At hospital :

Mai cabin mai he hongi chale.. everyone said. They went to the cabin. Ragini was shocked seeing them there. She hot worried.
Ragini - Is everthing alright ?
Agam - yes mom.. sab thike. Baithye na hume aapse baat karni hai.
Nishi - aapko pata hai maa 2 din baad pap a ka birthday hai.
Ragini - accha. (She acted as if she was unaware of it) toh ?
Suhani - mom humne unke liye suprise plan kia hai.
Agam - hum sab saath mai unka birthday celebrate karenge. Mazaa aayega na maa.
Ragini felt soo happpie after all her kids did what she wanted. She was very happy. Still she acted normal.
Ragini - haan thike. Mai ready hu. Karna kya hai ?
Nishi - RK uncle ne apna farmhouse ka idea dia hai woh beach side wala. Wahi plan kia hai..
Agam - Papa ko pasnd hai paani.
She knew nachiket liked it cos she liked it.
Aur suprise kaise hoga ?? ragini said
Aarav - wahi soch rahe hai dad ko laaye kaise.
Ragini knew what she could do. She gave them the idea.
Dekho i have a plan
All the kids after hearing this were supa exicted.
Haan boliye mom.
Ragini - tum sab nachiket se kaho ki tumhe kahi janaa hai ghumne. RK ki help lo. convince karo usse.
Agam - great aur aap ?
Ragini - mai aaungi toh nachiket ko shakk hoga.. mai bahana bana dungi ki hospital mai kaam hai. Mai phele pohoch k sav arrangements dekh lungi.
Ragini knew she could not miss it anyway. She was damn exicted.
Kids - great mom...yeeayyy
LOL

Edited by ZainabSidd - 29 May 2015 at 5:11am

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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
CHAPTER 2 --->

Hum sab saath honge mom...love you mom great idea. Itni jaldi socha apne woww..
Chalo tayyari kare kids said to eachother.
Ragini - yaad rakho Nachiket ko shakk mat hone dena okay.
They said yes and left. She was happy happy happy. Very exicted just then suhani entered.
Suhani - mom
Ragini - haan bolo beta
Suhani - aapko yaad tha na ki dad ka bday hai ? Aap plan kar rahi thi naa..
She knew she was caught by her daughter. Had no ways to escape .. she smiled and said
Ragini - yaad tha nachiket ka bday kaise bhul sakti hu. Bass sun liya khushi mili. Ab jao tayyari karo.
Suhani hugged and kissed her on her cheeks and said byee mom.. she was happy..

They convinced him to take them for an outing saying that mon have no time for us. He said yes. He wanted ragini ko join but as according to plan she made an excuse of imp meeting and involved dr aman. Nachiket had no choice but to take them along .. all were happy. It would take 10 hrs for them to reach the stop so they left at that time when they could reach farmhouse at 11pm nite on 5th.. they all left. Nachiket forgot it was his bday next day. He wanted ragini to accompany and when she said no he became sad. They all left and ragini left too. Kids had no idea what ragini had planned for nachiket as they were with their dad.
Ragini was happy that ranbir joined in too.
Ragini reached the spot before them and started preprations.
All of them reached there by 11 and ragini went inside so that nachiket could not see her. She explained them what to do. They took him inside the bunglow.
It was 11.55 and they demanded to go out to beach, though he did not wanted to join
Nachiket - Tum log jao na baccho .. mai thak gaya hu drive karke I will sleep now.
They did not wantd this to happen.
Suhani and nishi - Dad please chaliye na. Yaha hum aapke saath tome spend karne aaye hai. Please
Listening to his pretty daugters he said chalo.
It was 11.59 and all lights were off as was planned. He said its dark lets get in and suddenly at 12 boom those glittery lights and decorations was just wowww... those lights were beautiful. Even kids were suprised looking at it. It was fab. He was confused and suddenly a sweet medelious voice signing Happy birthday came into light. It was ragini wearing a cute pink saree with open hair, pink.lipstick and with nachiket's fav perfume. He looked gorgeous. She did it for him. Then all kids started tuning the birthday song and then he realised its his bday today. He was soo happy his heart jumped with joy. Those decorations and song he knew she planned it.. he was soo very happy.. they all wished him happy birthday and at the end she wished. He did not care about anyone and hugged her. All kids started giggling and she asked him to leave. she was blusing. He said this is the best suprise ever thankyou ragini thanks baccho.
Abhi imp chiz baaaki hai ragini said
Nachiket was confused what else she has to give me...
She bought a cake with his name " HAPPY BIRTHDAY NACHIKET" she baked it for him...only for him ...his fav flavour dutch.
He had stars in his eyes seeing all that. He was happy. All sang birthday song and before blowing the candle they asked him to make a wish
he closed his eyes and said "Bless ragini with all the happiness" and blew the candles.
He took the first piece of cake and took it near ragini.
Nachiket - shaadi k baad har saal bday ka cake tumhe phele khialay hai aur aaj bhi yeh hak sirf tumhara hai.
Ragini - happy birthday nachiket. Bhagwan tumhe har khushi de.
Nachiket - unhone tumhe de diya .. mujhe meri saari khushiyaa mil gayi.
Kids were waiting .. they knew they had no chance as their parents were too much into each other soo they attacked on the cake and had great fun.
They all were mature enough to know where their parents happiness was. Soo they left them there and went inside.
She said close your eyes
Nachiket - kyu
Ragini - band toh karo please
Nachiket - he did that
Ragini - (she kept something infront of his eyes and said) ab kholo aakh
Nachiket - Yeh kyaa hai. Gift
Ragini - haan dekh lo.
Nachiket - it was a scrap book made by her and had all pics .. those memories with them, frnds , kids. He turned and found the ending pages blank.
Nachiket - yeh kyu khaali hai ?
Ragini - yaha hum nayi yaadein dalenge.. apne saath aur baccho k saath.
Nachiket - isi baat pe ek photo toh banta hai. Selfie it was .. they were ready for the click and just then he kissed her cheeks..
That kiss wala selfie made her blush.
They forgot that even kids came to farmhouse. After the selfie they realised that.
She said
Ragini - chale bacche kya sochenge.
Nachiket - ragini ruko.. bacche yaha hume khud chodd k chale gaye. Woh log samajhdaar hai.
And she was still into shock how she forgot about them.
He tickled her to make her laugh and they sat there taking to each other about each other.

Next update will have Neira's secret talks and Children bonding with parents..Stay glued .
Do comment if you like...
Lot more to cum



Edited by ZainabSidd - 10 May 2015 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Whoa .. @ZainabSidd.. That was so amazing .. 
Such a sweet Birthday Surprise Ragini and the kids planned for Nachiket.. 

The expressions you described, looked so genuine .. true to the characters and scene ..

The best thing which deserves most appreciation is the way you handled all the characters .. Firstly, you introduced all the characters - Aman + all the children + RK .. for once, I thought, it would end up in some sort of 'khicdi' .. But the way you took the story forward.. with every character playing a proper role  .. you did justice to all the characters.. that was a very tough job at hand .. and you did it perfectly...

Suhani-Ragini's short conversation was so cute .. It was only Suhani who could understand her mother properly ..

Liked it very much .. You imagined it too nicely ..

Waiting for the next part now .. Take your time ..

Keep Writing ..


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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
Zainab I must say Nachiket-Ragini's CHUP CHUP KE PYAAR promo has brought a beautiful talent out of U Thumbs Up
Ur pen down ur cute imaginations so beautifully dat every moment look real... Luved Suhani's part d most Smile

Keep it up girl

waiting for next update Smile 

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BlueMoon8

Whoa .. @ZainabSidd.. That was so amazing .. 
Such a sweet Birthday Surprise Ragini and the kids planned for Nachiket.. 

The expressions you described, looked so genuine .. true to the characters and scene ..

The best thing which deserves most appreciation is the way you handled all the characters .. Firstly, you introduced all the characters - Aman + all the children + RK .. for once, I thought, it would end up in some sort of 'khicdi' .. But the way you took the story forward.. with every character playing a proper role  .. you did justice to all the characters.. that was a very tough job at hand .. and you did it perfectly...

Suhani-Ragini's short conversation was so cute .. It was only Suhani who could understand her mother properly ..

Liked it very much .. You imagined it too nicely ..

Waiting for the next part now .. Take your time ..

Keep Writing ..



BM ... Thanksss alott...
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Thanksss alottt for the kind wordss.. means alottt...
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Will update next part soon..
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Originally posted by sampa79

Wow, awesome 

 
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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NeiRaFreak

Zainab I must say Nachiket-Ragini's CHUP CHUP KE PYAAR promo has brought a beautiful talent out of U Thumbs Up
Ur pen down ur cute imaginations so beautifully dat every moment look real... Luved Suhani's part d most Smile

Keep it up girl

waiting for next update Smile 


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Thanks for the support
Glad u liked it Smile
Will update soon Star

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
WOW!!! 
That was so so so sweet.. 
really want to see one of them celebrating their birthdays now.. Nachiket more than Ragini because I think Ragini loves him more and we really have not seen her confess in the show :) 

Lovely writing - do continue soon.. 
really enjoyed reading it :D

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