|firefliesHaven|MaNan AT#108| Of Intentional Goofups n Moon Eyes... - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: .Kiran.

Okay here they are. THIS SCENE WAS SO PRECIOUS. For a guy who has had a physical relationship for so long, her one touch, not even a touch and he's putty in her hands. Just look at the way he melts the minute she puts her hand over his and hes speechless for a moment. His eyes full of love. And then he tries to protest but her finger on his lips and he's disarmed again. He doesn't stand a chance in front of her. He gives in because he has no choice. Its her asking. And that smile on his face to just know that she has planned a surprise for him. Her loving voice, those doe eyes staring at him, full of love and he's undone. And I AM DEAD!




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Kiran!!!! I love your feels.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: CooChi

Bachchi is ignoring me..!



who are you 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: CooChi


Genie you know the thing is that people's views matter to me a lot.In such situation I feel as if I m the writer of this show and people are not liking it or complaining about it. This really upsets me.
Do not take me wrong but I feel sad when I see people not enjoying the track as I want it to happen.
More than anything this AT affects me.
I get too disturbed when I see people unhappy about something.I get a feeling of someone poking my heart.


Listen , blame Boxter , she was the sadist that poked me all the time for months , took away the happiness .

Also sorry cannot give loving to Lalsa , she ruined FC. 


Suha ðŸ¤—


@Boxter - RIght, are you doing the same thing? Show up, woman, tart or not, you don't leave me like this!!😡  I cannot believe I fall for the old tricks still. Screw you. ðŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: charminggenie

@TFQ - Actuallyu Soha time still MaNik and Nandini were better placed. Other characters had stuff to do but we never really cared coz of bad acting.

Manik-Nandu as relationship were stable, that friendship was the most normal thing they can do . Worked as team.

Mukti had lel track with Abhi but they gave her that opportunity but Charlie cannot act.


Dhruv-Alya had legit potential relationship troubles, bad acting.

Cabir , Ayaz f**ked up the angst with lel sucide.

Navya had a whole week of track around her pregnancy ,but Veebhas's ghost eyes

So I don't really understand the cribbing that core characters never got focused , they had track but it never could be executed because limitations as actors and we never cared.

Soha's delusions actually didn't affect much but we were annoyed coz idea of anyone romancing Manik or Nandu is repulsive.


Abhi was nice sounding board to Nandu, you could actually for once hear Nandu's thoughts. That scene where she shares her fears about toxic relationship with manik was such love. 


Exactly , they have always left Nandu's tracks without taking them forward- consistent from day 1. like the job to Veena, they tried giving her something through Pandit but then lalsa f**ked itup. 

If you want Nandini to be anything beyond Manik then you would have to give her someone new , as a link outside SPace. Otherwise it si difficult to cut Manik.

The glaring lack of build up for Nandu's thing with family then , her music, Amms ( 100 episodes and no phone call to her Granny)- that shortchanged her. 




Genie I think it didn't work not only because of acting but because there were problems in working also. I used to feel it then too but then I guess better late than never ðŸ˜ƒ. 

Cabir story they didn't write dil se. Same actor had sold his story in initial 70 episodes so we can't say that here actor was not capable. Writing and execution failed.

Abhi's character with Mukti failed, there also not only because of acting. 

Abhi was sounding board but that sounding board could have a random guy also..he never needed that much screen space. And definitely a new entry was NOT required for that. Unnecessary over crowding the screen space--Kyun?

Navya's track would have worked if there was any practical angle to it. They have stretched it so much and made it into a nonsense right now..

All these that happened to other characters would have worked better if Soha wasn't around. Of atlas her stay should have short and crisp. She overstayed for a LOOONNNGGG time. 




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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo



who are you 😳



I am Harshad.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: charminggenie

Suha🤗



Err that's it? You're probably in a bad mood so I'm going to pretend like that's enough.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Can everyone take a moment and fangirl over the scene I posted? IT DESERVES A SPECIAL DEDICATION. Its such an adorably beautiful scene. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
@M16 - Thats the thing , Merger mess and Mukti's f**king week ruined the whole FC build-up . How do you relate to anything when Nandini and Manik had nothing to do, 2 weeks of lag in their story line because Mukti wanted to dance with Sunny Leone. 
Gah cannot stand Mukti. Useless character . 

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Posted: 8 years ago
There is a difference between criticising the overall story and criticising a particular track. The FC track was a big BORE, dragged beyond belief, and made Nandini look like a five year-old who needed constant pacifying from Manik. Solid lochha in writing. I'd found the same problem with Manik towards the end of the Soha track too- the guy who was ALWAYS so alert about everything Nandini, who was the ONLY one who could make her talk- he couldn't figure out why she was packing her bags. Such lazy writing for the sake of dragging the plot. THAT is something which did not happen in the first 70-odd episodes. 
But problem is, because Manik is the 'hero', you can always make Nandini the damsel-in-distress, make him rescue her and give him his glory back. how do you do that with Nandini? Make her punch all the villains? The only real one left in the show is Noyonika- and she does get to say smart things to her. Apart from that, Nandini has practically nothing and nowhere to show her heroism and strength in, and that is a problem that is rooted in the first 70 episodes as well. WE just didn't notice it becuase the conflicts with Manik were too big. Abhi MaNan are together, things have been resolved, toh storywise Nandini ka sar-payr kissi ko nahi dikh raha. 
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