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asya ts: shayad yeh ishq hai

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Posted: 8 years ago
Asya ss: shayad yeh ishq hai


part 1


it was midnightwhen zoya woke up screaming
"AMMIII"

Dilshad asad and najma came in zoya's room 

dilshad- zoya koi buraa khwab dekha kya

asad- ms farooqui yeh lijiye paani

zoya took the glass of water 

zoya- phupi najma mr khan m sorry meien aapko disturb kiya but i am fine

dilshad- koi baat nahi zoya u take care kisi bhi chhez ki zaroorat ho toh plz bata dena

asad- are u sure u r fine

zoya - ye mr khan m fine


next morning zoya was in the store room
searching for a empty file because she needed it

but there was short circuit in fuse box

n in minutes the store was on fire zoya started coughing and screaming her haunted dreams were chasing her again

dilshad n every one were in hall when najma noticed smoke cuming out of the store room
 
najma- dekhiye bhaijaan store roommei se dhuyan aa raha hai or shayad zoya andar
hai
 asad ran and broke the door the whole room was destroyed by the fire n he saw zoya  screaming n coughing due to the fire n slowly she lose consiousness

asad- zoyaaa 

he jumped n rescued her took her in his arms n was takin her to hospital in his car

asad- driver jaldi chalao...zoya please utho plz zoya

asad was scared of losing zoya as she was not even moving 

he reached hospital with zoya in his arms 

asad- doctor ...doctor dekhiye zoya ko kya hau plz doctor

he laid her on the stretcher n she was taken in operation theater n the bulb turned red





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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello dear...
A very nice part...
But you know sirf Smoke aur screaming ke liye OT mai le jaana weird nahi hai..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Cute start!!
Update soon
And thnx for d pm!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Asya ts: shayad yeh ishq hai





part 2


n the bulb turned red

asad broke down in front of his ammi

asad- ammi agar zoya kuchh bhi hua na toh mei mar jaunga plz ammi zoya ko bacha lo plz ammi mei unhe aise nahi dekh sakta amm i plz

dilshad- asad  kuchh nahi hoga zoya ko or i know tum usse bohot pyaar karte ho lekin iska matlab yeh nahi tum kuchh bhi galat socho ge woh ek dum theek ho jayegi plz tum rona band karo

the doctor came out

doctor- woh khtre se bhahr hai meine unke lungs se dhuyaan nikal dia hai u can meet her but plz one at a time

asad luked at his  mother n she nodded in a yes 

asad entered her room n saw her sleeping peacefully on her bed with her oxygen mask on

asad sat beside her n held her hand n she opened her eyes

zoya- m...mr ...khan..

asad- shh zoya aap araam kijiye

after some time zoya was discharged from the hospital and was sitting in the car next to asad

zoya started coughing

asad- zoya aap theek hai na
he patted her back

zoya- jee...huh theek hun

the reached home asad held zoyas hand n took her  inside n laid her on bed

asad- zoya aapko kuch bhi chiye toh mujhe bata dijiyega

asad came out and saw dilshad standing there

dilshad- bataya kya

asad- kya bataya

dilshad yahi ki tum usse pyaar karte ho

asad- abhi toh woh ghar aayi hai baad mei bata dunga

dilshad- abhi jao or bata ke ao

dilshad pushed asad into her room

asad- ammiii

zoya- mr khan what... kya hua aap aise andar kyun

asad- voh actually ms farooqui mei aapko kuchh batana chata hun...

zoya- jee

asad-...woh mei...vo i...I LOVE YOU

zoya- whhat? mr khan aap aise mujhse kai...matlab i mean I LOVE YOU TOO

n they hugged eachother



THE END
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello dear...
A very nice part...
But you know sirf Smoke aur screaming ke liye OT mai le jaana weird nahi hai..






THANKSπŸ˜›, N YES ITS  NOT ACTUALLY WEIRD COZ IF SMOKE ENTERS YOUR LUNGS IT CAN BE DANGEROUS N HAVE TO BE TREATED IN OT ...BUT FIR BHI ITS A FICTION KUCHH BHI HO SATA HAI πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww...
Short and sweet
I love how u write it short and sweet
Something I can never do!
Cho chweet!
Write more!
And thnx for d pm!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Asyalover2905




THANKSπŸ˜›, N YES ITS NOT ACTUALLY WEIRD COZ IF SMOKE ENTERS YOUR LUNGS IT CAN BE DANGEROUS N HAVE TO BE TREATED IN OT ...BUT FIR BHI ITS A FICTION<font size="4"> KUCHH BHI HO SATA HAIπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰</font>


Ok. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice end to this story..
Kya super fast confession hai..
Liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely one...
thanks for sharing