Aaslok: forget about love last part updated - Page 16

Originally posted by: Sathia007

Superb your writing style !!

 Thanks Roshni for pm.

 I am eager to know -  who would be the person at her door -  Her friend Sneha ? or his   mum or her mum or his wife  ???

 Please do weekly update to maintain  our  interest at desparate level .

Originally posted by: Sathia007

 Originally posted by lively -roshani

Originally posted by Sathia007

Superb your writing style !!

 Thanks Roshni for pm.

 I am eager to know -  who would be the person at her door -  Her friend Sneha ? or his   mum or her mum or his wife  ???

 Please do weekly update to maintain  our  interest at desparate level .

his wife ????????????😕

 @roshani

 May be  unhappy married life - imposed by his  power crazy parents !! - That's why so much - hide & sick/  he is  so desparate for love, closeness & completeness  in his subconcious mind   ! - 

 Brutality in action and loss of trust in love - could be the result   of his personal  bitter experience/ bitter married life with  an extravagant woman  with a powerful father  and this has resulted   in complete loss of trust and respect in womanhood ! 

 But I prefer to see  your Shlok as an unmarried  MAN in this story .

Originally posted by: sashra

Pls update soon dear.we r waiting

Originally posted by: Sathia007

 Originally posted by lively -roshani

Originally posted by Sathia007

 Originally posted by lively -roshani

Originally posted by Sathia007

Superb your writing style !!

 Thanks Roshni for pm.

 I am eager to know -  who would be the person at her door -  Her friend Sneha ? or his   mum or her mum or his wife  ???

 Please do weekly update to maintain  our  interest at desparate level .

his wife ????????????😕

 @roshani

 May be  unhappy married life - imposed by his  power crazy parents !! - That's why so much - hide & sick/  he is  so desparate for love, closeness & completeness  in his subconcious mind   ! - 

 Brutality in action and loss of trust in love - could be the result   of his personal  bitter experience/ bitter married life with  an extravagant woman  with a powerful father  and this has resulted   in complete loss of trust and respect in womanhood ! 

 But I prefer to see  your Shlok as an unmarried  MAN in this story .

very good guessing of yours 👏

but  in my story Shlok is unmarried and why he is like this you will come to know soon 😊

   @ roshani

 

 At this moment , I am now getting more interested to know  - how are you  going to raise the dark curtain  of  SHLOK's life slowly/ aesthetically  but  at the same time sensually !!! 

  I am expecting your update to read by next wkend .