MaNan New FF -Just Married UPDT (part21 pg144)) - Page 92

Loved it... Written beautifully. Maniks emotions, nandinis emotion u have penned everthing so nicely.

amazing...
beautifully penned emotions... loved it

Amazing update with lots of emotions ... Manik is in such a Vulnerable condition and the kiss it was so passionate plzz end dis thing that nandani cannot become pregnant for some years its very hurting plz update soon lovely update

Emotional update

That was a very dukhi update .
Oh god ab kitna suffer karenge mere bache ?
But in sab ke bich koi misunderstanding na aaye in between them .
Take care buddy and continue soon.

Nice update
I know it's a very sensitive matter and u wrote it beautifully
But at the end we all will love to see our happy MaNan
Hope u will not take me wrong
Thanks for pm
Please update soon

Awsme update. Feeling bad after manik condition. If manik is broken what will be nandani's condition. Waiting for the next update. Thanks for the pm.

i was eagerely waiting for ur post 

Read all updates ... awesome story

very nice update after a long..
liked reading it thoroughly..
thanks so much for updating