MaNan New FF -Just Married UPDT (part21 pg144)) - Page 64

it's a cute lovey dovey update :)

aww dats so sweet dis slow process of knwing each oder making dere relationship strong is written by u so beautifully .. great job 

every time i read ur story 
m just smiling through out 
its just so simple 
yet so pure n 
magical 
i just loved it 
cont soon 

Outstanding superb marvellous update

He needs to control his anger as he dint realise he hurted her but she felt bad and wanted to cry out loud and make him understand what he did but she soon forget all as he with all his love ask for forgiveness

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Wow what an amazing update
U described each and every part so beautifully
Manan scene was superb
Slowly they r falling for eachother
U have shown the growth of their relation so beautifully
I loved it
Thanks for pm
Please update the next part soon

Amazing one...
Manik is such a caring husband...
Night sweet talk was very beautifully penned...
Muklya bond with nandini is quite good...
Button part was very fully... " shirt ke place par t-shirt... hehehe..."
Overall its superbly awesome...
Cont soon..

Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

awesome update 

Wow.. Lovely caring hubby..nice update

Awesome update
Loved it in ur each update ur making manan relationship stronger and stronger

Awesome update cant wait gor next update thank u for the pm and plzz pm me also