MaNan New FF -Just Married UPDT (part21 pg144)) - Page 18

Dat was amazing...I can actually visualize their expressions, emotions and feelings dat u pen down...N plz can I request u 2 give more frequent updates...u know I just wait for this update...

Fantabulous...👏👏👏 Edited by Roselind - 8 years ago

Awesome update...love the convo b/w manan and manbir..and the ring is a beautiful surprise waiting to read more...please continue soon and thanks for the pm

7days for maariage.. I'm excited.. Lovely update

beautifully written..
loved it..
loved manan n manbir talk..

Loved it. Thanks for pm update asap will be waiting

Yaar its bloody lovable yaar its so cute to c diffrnt manan and der new love and care and respect...
God u nailed it yaar...
Plz upload one part daily plzzz...
I dont knw abt others bt m to always eagerly w8ng for ur updates ...
Plzzz... Hme jada satya mat kra kro...

awsum update yaa!!it really nice..lovd it..update faaas!!waitin...

loved it
within seven days their marriage aww

hey there..!
read ur ff nd mst say u r amazing writer..
beautiful concept nd wld love to read hw there relationship wld proceed ...
update soon nd pm me if u can...