AkDha OS--"Scorching Desire (16+)"(imp Note pg 9) - Page 5

This content was originally posted by: 1357raksha

Hot os 

nice one 

tq for pm...

This content was originally posted by: sonali96

Hot nd sexy update

Thnks fr the pm sush

This content was originally posted by: sridevihota777

Super aba and hot.sexy also. Love u sush.

This content was originally posted by: swriter

Only one comment hot super hot plz update soon

This content was originally posted by: haya_gorgeous

so hott..
thnks for pm

This content was originally posted by: ...Thendral...

Awesome Os Di 

THe End was the best thing i mean jalal warning surya 🤣

This content was originally posted by: cute.manasi

thanx for such a fab OS umm... loved it...😳

This content was originally posted by: ...Shefa...

hi sush ...
I read it but not able to comment 😕 😆
I just can say that you are an amazing writer 👍🏼

This content was originally posted by: chandgothia

It was beautifully written...loved the way jalal got over surya the ass...

The best line was ur "p.s." 😆

Write more often...

This content was originally posted by: LekhSha

Nice writing, Just a small suggestion, If you could increase the protagonist's age  when writing there night outs it feels nice.

Means 16 yrs is  much too young to be in such night outs.

Its your story just a thought,