Originally posted by: sridevihota777Super aba and hot.sexy also. Love u sush.
Originally posted by: swriterOnly one comment hot super hot plz update soon
Originally posted by: haya_gorgeousso hott..
thnks for pm
Originally posted by: ...Thendral...Awesome Os Di
THe End was the best thing i mean jalal warning surya π€£
Originally posted by: cute.manasithanx for such a fab OS umm... loved it...π³
Originally posted by: ...Shefa...hi sush ...
I read it but not able to comment π π
I just can say that you are an amazing writer ππΌ
Originally posted by: chandgothiaIt was beautifully written...loved the way jalal got over surya the ass...
The best line was ur "p.s." πWrite more often...
Originally posted by: LekhShaNice writing, Just a small suggestion, If you could increase the protagonist's age when writing there night outs it feels nice.
Means 16 yrs is much too young to be in such night outs.Its your story just a thought,
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