AkDha OS--"Scorching Desire (16+)"(imp Note pg 9) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
Super hot n sensual sushi
Thanks for the pm 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Cut n hot...the way jalal cant help but give in to his desire toward jodha but still asking jodha first for the ultimate love making :) ..please write more...tfs..Edited by lovejodhaakbar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
sush it's so much hot ☺️
thanks to pm me 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ahem ahem nice os sush
loved the ending where surya comes to jo's house and catches them red handed
but jalal was smart enough to handle the situation .
thanks for the pm
update ur ffs too pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sush ur harmones r on overdrive 🤣
Ufff such an hot, passionate os ☺️
Loved it 😉
Jallu was v rough how he came to jo' s house n closed her main door n her room's door & how he banged his lips to her v fast😆 hehe poor Jo he won't let her even complete her words. 
How he askd her r u on Ur days I was like whattt?😲😆 Jo se phle my mouth was wide open.  
Aise bhi poochte h while dng☺️. I didn't knw. Now I knw lol 😆
He tore her p**** 😆
When he made love to her isshhh I was smiling n blushing. while reading. Too hawwtt ☺️
Wth subah subah surya n he knw what dis love birds did.  I was worried for a second den I tot I dnt need to as soon as u r der.😛😛 . Mast fasaya surya ko jallu ne or surya ki hawa nikalgai. 😆😆. Hats off to u sush for writing amazingly.👏👏👏 Thnxx sushi I Really loved it 
N lastly they r on bed again for session 2. . 😉
Wow sush pls give me session 2 asap as I told u awredy.🤣 . M waiting for session 2 now it's jodha' s  turn to go wild n crazy.😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
sush it was just soo hot ❤️
Hayee ☺️
I'm blushing
Both wild , wild teenage love ❤️
And the way jalal threated surya was amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
wildness overloaded  ☺️
jalal is dangerously wild n very protective for jodha😉.❤️
sush ye OS nahi tabahi hai..🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sush jaan🤗
Sorry for commenting so late😳

Anyway, this OS was soo hot...I can't describe its hotness☺️

Especially loved the part how Jalal just entered her house and then the passion just flowed☺️

Jodha was no less either; she uprightly said that she wanted him to make love to her☺️

I again will say that I loved the lingerie tearing part☺️ It was hotness overloaded😉

Loved when Jalal showed so much concern before he went on further, was it his first time or...?☺️

Obviously the jackpot scene was when Surya walked in on them and Jalal threatened to reveal his secrets 😆 That idiot got what he deserved😡

And they both slept in each other's embrace the entire night

Best was the ending; Round 2😉

Loved this one🤗 I am ever ready to give you titles and ideas😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb Spicy Sizzling Hot😆 & Sorry for late comment😆
Loved the ending of the story Sush👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
...Edited by --Sush116-- - 8 years ago