AkDha OS--"Scorching Desire (16+)"(imp Note pg 9) - Page 2

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

I read it.! *face palm*☺️

as for comment, you know me..

Res😆

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Sonali

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Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Hot nd sexy update

Thnks fr the pm sush

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sridu

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Groupbie

Posted: 8 years ago

Super aba and hot.sexy also. Love u sush.

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swriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

Only one comment hot super hot plz update soon

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Hermione Granger

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Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

so hott..
thnks for pm

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Rathi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome Os Di

THe End was the best thing i mean jalal warning surya 🤣

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

thanx for such a fab OS umm... loved it...😳

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 8 years ago

hi sush ...
I read it but not able to comment 😕 😆
I just can say that you are an amazing writer 👍🏼

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surabhi chandgothia

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Posted: 8 years ago

It was beautifully written...loved the way jalal got over surya the ass...

The best line was ur "p.s." 😆

Write more often...

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Ashwini

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice writing, Just a small suggestion, If you could increase the protagonist's age when writing there night outs it feels nice.

Means 16 yrs is much too young to be in such night outs.

Its your story just a thought,

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