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SaHil OS - Where You Go, I Go - Complete on Pg 2! (Page 4)

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Thank you so much for the incredible response! EmbarrassedDay Dreaming 

I'm so happy that you all enjoyed the story. This is what I imagined how things would play out. Aahil would be smart and know how to play his cards in order to get his Sanam back. WinkDay Dreaming  I know he'll do the same on the show. Wink


Thanks to each and every one of you! Hug It really warms the heart when you read such heartfelt feedback from my favorite guys.  Heart


Also, I would soon be starting to continue my other story which is a supernatural based on vampires SaHil; "Marked as His." 
I promise I will get back to it as soon as my exams are over. Thumbs Up Heart

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simran_singh_24

Good one!
I liked the way you wrote abt Sanam dashing off to Ahil's room. 
will be nice to see this happen in the show.

Thank you so much for reading! <3 I would love to see her running toward his room. We already saw her getting attracted toward him, so let's see how things will play out. Wink 
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskaan17rocks

Amazing update
loved reading it and it was just flawless
it was definitely worth the wait
thankyou for such a beautiful storySmile

Thank you so much for reading! I'm so glad that you liked it. Embarrassed I just couldn't stop myself from writing the plot. I seriously have tons of ideas in my head lately.. LOL

But thanks a ton for liking it Heart
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SONU2408

its amaizing,mindblowing favulous.sahil's every emotion Hug
ahil's imagination in lift HOTEmbarrassed,whn sanam bk 2 ahil.Dancing..
i love the song wht u used 4m dhadkan-i also imagined ths song on sahil.Thumbs Up..
&thnk u as ahil gv punch 2 tht shady...Angry
how i wish sanam atleast remembr half truth tht she is ahil's wife baki to IM jate hi yaad ajayega..Approve.
i lllooovvveee ths os..Heart
SAHIL...Day Dreaming

Awww! Thanks you so much! I'm always have these ongoing smiles whenever I read your feedback. Embarrassed Yesss... I so needed a scene where Aahil would just turn her around and remind her who he is.. I mean come on.. Aahil would totally do that! LOL

"Dil Ne Yeh Kaha Hai Dil Se" is a evergreen song for me! I absolutely love it. And the only couple I can actually see this song to play on, is SaHil. It's just so full of emotions and love. Just like our SaHil Day Dreaming

Once again, thank you for the awesome feedback. So happy that you enjoyed the emotional ride Wink
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TIA.Tia

Mahwash.. What can I say, It's heavenly.. I absolutely loved it. Wish these scenes would play out in Qubool Hai.

Thank you so much! Hug I'm so happy to know that you enjoyed it. <3 I'm already crossing my fingers that these kind of scenes will play out on QH. It would be totally awesome Wink

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Junoon-e-SaHil

Oh my Mahhu darling! You always come up with such perfect scenarios for your stories and even perfect the climax WinkHeart
This was JUST the way I thought should have been. 

*Hides away because of blushing..*  and *Blush a little more* 

Don't praise me so much, Prags, you know how I get all red.. LOL

But seriously, Prags! I'm just so overly happy right now. I mean really.. I'm sitting with the biggest grin on my face - which by the way, I have been doing ever since I read your awesome response! Big smileHug Seriously, your words are warming my heart like fire LOL I just know that I've written something good. Embarrassed

I mean her running to him, him punching and kicking him up, his threats and glares to him, those smirks, his anger and rage while seeing HER with someone else and not HIM. Amazing! Just like my thoughts got a better way to be portrayed. 

This! Is what I imagined how things would play out. Our Nawab is one smart man and he knows how to play his cards. Wink I'm convinced that our Sanam would soon know who that Handsome Stranger is. 

Loved this one like HELL! I can read this over and over and over...

So damn happy! Day Dreaming

The way he started reminding her, and was intelligent enough to know the reason WHY was she like that. That elevator dream though...my FAVORITE part TongueLOL

No actually, the one where Shaad found them out in rather INTIMATE moment Tongue Then Aahil beating him up, follows too.

Of course the elevator scene is THE BEST because of obvious reasons LOLWink They cannot get away from the burning attraction toward each other. I mean, Sanam has already taken the first step, when she held his hand. Day Dreaming Soon the kiss will follow. Wink ... And everything else... WinkLOL

And ofcourse the end of the story Day Dreaming It was amazing! Loved how you ended it with that KISS which he had promised and she made him remember..

Amazing this was!! Your awesome! Star

Prags! You are damn awesome! Thank you so much for the feedback. I can read it over and over and over..  Heart HugAll we need is a kiss of passion and she'll remember all these other marks of love her rightful husband has placed.Day Dreaming

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by darkice7_12

beautifully done! Clap 

I really liked this sensitive Aahil, who cared about Sanam's state of mind and not going all macho to get his wifey back immediately. He softly inserted himself into her sphere, used his charm to make her pay attention to him, was there when she came running and tried to get rid of the bad memories with his kisses. Day Dreaming

Beautiful, Mahwash22. Hug

Thank you! I always enjoy reading your awesome feedback Hug They are always so warm and really makes me keep writing. <3 Really!

I really wanted him to make his own space in her life again... by his charm and being rather collective. Embarrassed 

I personally, really enjoyed writing this. WinkDay Dreaming Thank you for enjoying this, Heart
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahil333

First off.. I love the title so much Thumbs Up.
 
What a brilliant OS this is...YES!

Aww.. Thank you for this warm feedback. You just know what makes me blush and smile for days - even weeks, trust me! Wink Your awesome! You're always there whenever I post a story and I love it. Heart 
 

My heart went out for Aahil when he saw her for the first time and thereafter saw Shaad with her Cry. But our hero is so classy and very patient.
 
I lolled when he deliberately bumped into that liar, that was clever of him LOL.

ARI is all about being classy, determined and patient. He will get his love back soon. Embarrassed 

"Tell me, Jannat. Do you love your husband?"  She didn't expect that Smile.

Love that he was so straightforward.
 
The intimate moment in the elevator...so beautiful...and out of nowhere she called out his name "Aahil"...I was like...so happyDancing Embarrassed.

I would be lying if I said that I did not enjoy the elevator scene myself! I mean this is how Our SaHil roll; Blushing Wink  They would be doing much more than that in part two.. LOL. 

 
Oh...I was so proud of Sanam that she stopped  him and prevented to being lied again by her fake husband. I was like...YES, you tell him girl!!!!LOL


Sanam has always been determined and knew what she wanted. This is what I wanted to express teh minute she "came back." - She has values and knows who she belongs to! I was totally smirking when I wrote that scene. LOL
 
And when she remembered everything, I was so happy for her. Especially when she questioned Shaad and told him "how dare you"!!!! Clap
 
I love this line where Sanam made it very clear to him, haha!

"I'm Aahil's! I'm only his - I belong to him. He has the only right to touch me and not you!"


You know, I was smirking so damn much, while writing that scene. I was like; I'm so sure that every one on the Forum is going to looove this. 
LOL

And then the face off...ufff...OMG! how dare you Shaad! Angry. He continues to lie!!! AngryLOL

For a moment I thought Aahil was not going to punch him. I got the feeling that he would just let him go, but then shaad did something unforgivable. He reached out for her and that's where Aahil snapped and gave him a punch and he fell on the floor LOL. Thank God for that  ClapLOL.

It was not my idea to let him punch Shaad, but when I heard people were expressing for me to do that in the story, then I thought; Hmm.. Why not... LOL

Love the ending...SaHil forever Heart Hug

Awesome story.

Thanks for the pm!

Thank you so much! Personally, my favorite part is the ending! How he asked Sanam weather Shaad had touched her. The way he responded to it, and kissed her. It was so magical for me to write that scene. I'm really touched that you loved that part. Heart

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