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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 92)

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Posted: 23 October 2015 at 5:38am | IP Logged
it was cute and lovely updateSmile... loved the chemistry of the couples... and the ending was beautiful, they too got their feelings confessed and their beautiful journey began...Heart

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Posted: 23 October 2015 at 6:52am | IP Logged
awesome story..
though khanak-shantanu wer sweet.. i loved alekh-sadhana & ragini-ranvir more...
thnks 4 d cute pics..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 24 October 2015 at 3:32am | IP Logged
i love this jodi of dutta and nakusha... lovely writtenThumbs Up


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Posted: 24 October 2015 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Beautiful Story on  Khanak,Shantanu Salekh,and Ragvir
Thank You for writing this story and dedicating this to me

All pictures are very beautiful

Khanak and Shantanu are Awesome

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Posted: 25 October 2015 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Simply Fabulous Update
 
Every Couple held their own essence and every gesture made by them was awesome
one couple truly enjoying on Honeymoon while the other goes out dancing and the last couple
simply feels there is no need to go anywhere just be in the rain with each other
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Posted: 25 October 2015 at 11:06am | IP Logged
hi jasmine
loved the short story on my all time fav couple dutta & nakusha..thanksClap
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Posted: 26 October 2015 at 8:17am | IP Logged
thanks for writing n sharing beautiful OS
and selection of shanak pics are perfect.
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Posted: 26 October 2015 at 9:38am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 52(Viren Nivedita)



Dedicated to taahir004 n Kalpana_KaCy who love Viren Nivedita






Orchids



I'm Viren.I'm here to talk only about my love Nivedita .
Nivedita  was always possessive about me.Though we were only friends her possessive nature made me realize that i'm more than a friend for her.I was happy inside my mind as i also loved her madly.But i never showed it and flirted with girls in front of her.Because i loved watching her getting angry seeing me with other girls.Because that shows her deep love for me.I wanted her to burst out one day and confess her love to me.I waited for that moment for a long time.
Finally my wait came to an end.She lost her control and yelled at me.
"How dare you flirt with other girls in front of me?"She asked.
Though she was angry i found her sweet.
"What is the problem?I'm just having fun",i said.
"Fun?This is fun?Mr.Viren...i can't stand you with another girl".
I was becoming happier and happier as i knew the moment of confession was coming nearer.But i did'nt show it.I pretended to be angry.I held her hand tight.
"Why?Why are you so pissed off seeing me with other girl?Why you can't tolerate me with another girl",i asked her rudely.
She did not reply.I was irritated with her stubbornness not to open her heart so easily before me.So I left her hand and walked restlessly.She followed me.
Her tears flowed down.


"Because..because i love you Viren".


I was surprised.I was numb for a moment due to excitement.I turned back and smiled. at her.
She came back to her senses.She realized what she said.She realized that her inner feelings have come out,she has exposed herself to me.She was embarrassed.
"I'm sorry".She left the place since she found it difficult to face me.
I felt sad as she thinks that she did a shameless act.Because she thinks that i don't love her,i just love to be with other girls.I wanted her to know my love for her and be happy.So i entrusted her room mate Chanda to keep my diary on her table.She did so.Thanks to her.
As i expected Nivedita 's eyes struck my diary as it was an unknown diary to her.She went through the pages of the diary.

She read my heart through the diary.She read my words..
"I love Nivedita 's possessiveness as it signifies her love for me.I love being loved by her.Because i love her like crazy.She is more than a friend for me.I'm waiting for her to admit her love for me.Nivedita ...please confess your love to me.I'm dying to hear those magical words from you.Nivedita ..i love you.Nivedita ..you are my life".
She cried while reading my diary.
Tears covered her eyes for not understanding my love.
She came running towards me with his diary.
"You stupid!Why did'nt you reveal your love to me?You just made me go crazy.I love you stupid boy".
She talked like an irritated innocent naughty girl.
I took the diary from her.
"I was waiting for you to confess".
She smiled hearing me.
"I love you Nivedita .My tongue itself is to utter only your name Nivedita ",i said.
We just lost in each other.
We really felt the magic of love afterwards in it's true sense.Nivedita  was my world.

I gifted Orchid flowers to her as she loves orchids.She was very happy.She smiled while receiving orchid flowers from me.
"Did you like it?I asked.
"I love orchids.Nothing in this world is more beautiful than orchids",She said.
I opposed it,

"No,there is something which is more beautiful than orchids".
"What is that?" She askd.
I looked at her eyes deeply and replied,"You".

She blushed.

I kept looking at her blush.It was so sweet.


She walked towards her hostel with those white orchids.Unexpectedly a bus hit her and the white orchids in her hand turned into red with her blood.Her pink suit also became red.She lost her blood and she breathed her last lying on my lap without even uttering one last word to me.I cried calling out her name 'Nivedita !'But she did'nt open her eyes.

Whenever i see my Nivedita in my imagination ,she is dressed in the pink suit she wore at the time of her death.She looked sweet and cute that day.Since she was dressed in pink that day when i see the pink orchid flowers in my house I am reminded of my Nivedita .
She always appears before me in the f0rm of  beautiful orchid flowers. I miss you Nivedita ...i miss you.
The end


Edited by jasminerahul - 26 October 2015 at 9:42am

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