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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 82)

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thank u so much for  the dedication.lovely os.pooja ronithnwas my first favourite onscreen couple.

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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb OS! Well written
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Superb os
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Vansh and Iccha I haven't watched their show, but it's nice that I am getting a treat of reading all the couples stories.It was really amazing. I just love the song included. 
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Vansh and Iccha I haven't watched their show, but it's nice that I am getting a treat of reading all the couples stories.It was really amazing. I just love the song included. 
Vansh is into drugs, he didnt love Icha before. But now he loves her. The holi track was beautifully explained. Iccha was happy by him expressing his I love you to her. But she was sad that she needs to go out from his life as he doesn't need her. But actually she needs him and so does him. They both then express their love for each other. It's beautifully explained. Thanks for the pm
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episode 38 awesome...
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 47 Abhay-Kkusum

 Dedicating this to Nisha Kankaraj Preetha who likes Abhay Kkusum.





My Kkusums

Kkusum considered herself a lucky wife.Life with her husband Abhay was beautiful.Their son Sushanth made their relationship stronger.
Seeing Kkusum caring for Sushanth,Abhay was very happy.
He thanked Kkusum:Thank you very much for looking after my son.

har taraf rawa aapka hi nasha
chu gayi dil ko aapki har ada
ban jaaiye is dil ke mehmaan

She laughed:I care for Sushanth...because he is my son.If he was your girlfriend's son i would not have looked after him like this.But if it's a baby girl i will accept her as my daughter as i always wanted a baby girl.
He just smiled.

She did'nt know that her joke would  become serious one day.

Kkusum wore a beautiful saree and accessories for a party.Abhay came.
Abh:You look so beautiful Kkusum.
She blushed.

ban jaaiye is dil ke mehmaan, mehmaan ban jaiye
ban jaaiye in saanson ke armaan,armaan ban jaiye) - 2
ban jaaiye is dil ke mehmaan, mehmaan ban jaiye

Very soon she realized that it was only her imagination.
During the party,Abhay and Kkusum danced together.But she was'nt happy like she used to be before while dancing with Abhay as there was no emotion in Abhay.

bheeni bheeni pyaasi rawani rehti hain
palkon main teri kahani rehti hain
qaid nazron main teri tasveer hain
tere lafso ka fasana padhta hu
bas tera hi chehra rozana padhta hu
padhta hu padhta hu

Though she looked ravishing in her purple saree he did not give her any compliment.His eyes were not placed on her.

For the first time she got scared whether his love for her decreased and he is going away from her.
But she did'nt express her real thoughts with him.
Kku:What happened abhay?Why do I find you emotionless?You mind was somewhere else while you were with me physically.
Abhay  seemed to be wet with sweat.
He went away replying which increased Kkusum's tension.

After a week...
Finally Abhay decided to open up his mind.
Kku:Tell me what yoou want to tell me Abhay.Your silence is killing me.
Abh:Kkusum,do you remember our first meeting?I mean when  I came to your house to see you,,
Kku:Of course Abhay.
Abh:Do you remember what I told you that day?
Kku:Yes.You told me about your craze for cricket,your addiction to coffee,your love for music...and...
Suddenly she remembered one more thing and stared at Abhay.
Abh:I told you how much I loved Kkusum,but that Kkusum was not you.
Kkusum was numb.
Abh:I told you that I liked you because of your name.Because your name belonged to the person I loved a lot...my Kkusum.
Kkusum's eyes became wet.
Abhay's tears rolled down.
Abh:But Kkusum...it's true that after marriage I fell in love with you.Your love made me love you.
Kkusum wiped her tears.
Kku:Abhay...now tell me what are you planning to say?
Abhay continued:Last week I met Kkusum.
Kkusum was shocked.
Kku:So that's why you are indifferent with me since last week.You guys refreshed the beautiful memories.
Abh:No Kkusum.Though I loved Kkusum due to ego clashes we had got separated in a way that even God can't reunite us.Our meeting was different.Last week I went to hospital for the regular check up.there I met Kkusum.I was shocked.Because she was a patient there.A dying patient.
Kkusum was shocked.
Flash back...
Abhay asked the nurse:That lady...?
Nurse:She is in the last stage of brain tumour.
He was shocked:But her hair...
Nurse:That is a wig.
Abhay felt very upset.He went towards Kkusum.Kkusum was shocked to see him.
Abhay-Kkusum were very emotional.They shared a deep eyelock.

Pyaar humko bhi hai, pyaar tumko bhi hai
To yeh kya silsile ho gaye
Bewafa hum nahin, bewafa tum nahin
To kyoon itne gile ho gaye

 
Abh:Kkusum...I came to know everything.
She wept.
Abhay stammered:Kkusum...you broke up with me because you came to know that you have tumour?
Kkusum shed tears.Abhay's eyes became wet.
Abh:You did a big sacrifice for me.But I misunderstood you.I thought you left me for your career.I thought you were selfish.But you are so selfless Kkusum,Sorry Kkusum.
He cried holding her hand.

Chalte chalte kaise yeh faasle ho gaye
Kya pata kahan hum chale (Chalte Chalte)


Kku:Please don't cry Abhay.I can't bear your tears.That's why I hid my disease from you and break up with you.
Abhay wiped his tears.
Kku:I am not scared of death.But I am worried for my daughter Kumud.After my death who will look after her?
Abh:Daughter?Did you marry? Your husband?
Kku:I am not married Abhay.
Abhay was shocked:Then your daughter?
Kku:After our break up I realized that I was pregnant.But I hid it from you.Later thinking of our child's future I decided to inform you of my pregnancy.But I came to know that you got married.
Abh:That means she is our daughter?
Kku:Yes.Kumud is our daughter Abhay.
Abhay wept.
Kku:I know that you are married.My daughter and I will never come to your life.
Abh:But Kumud...what will she do?
Kkusum wept:It may be her fate to be an orphan.
Kkusum went away leaving Abhay in pain.
 
Present...
Abhay:Yesterday morning Kkusum died.I did her cremation.
Kkusum was shocked.
Kku:Kumud?
Abhay wept:I don't know what will be her fate.That little girl does'nt even know that she has become an orphan.
Kkusum's tears started rolling over her cheeks.
Kku:Abhay...don't worry about Kumud.You remember...I had told you that if it's a girl I am willing to accept even your girl friend's daughter.Though I said it as a joke I am very serious about that now.We will bring up Kumud.I will look after Kumud.Now onwards Kumud is our daughter.
Abhay could'nt believe it.
Abh:Kkusum!
Kkusum smiled emotionally.
Abh:Thank you so much.You are great.No other wife would do what you are doing.

ban jaaiye meri chahat ka nagma, nagma ban jaiye
ban jaaiye is dil ke mehmaan, mehmaan ban jaiye(SILSILAY)
Kku:Abhay...take me to Kumud soon.I want her.
Abhay took Kkusum to Kumud who was in the orphanage.The three year old Kumud was so sweet that Kkusum could not hide her maternal feelings.She took Kumud  in her arms and looked at Abhay:God heard my prayers and gave me a daughter.
Abhay did not know how to express his emotion when he saw Kkusum with his daughter,because it was such a sweet emotional sight.
 
Years passed...
Kumud grew up into a beautiful girl with her brother Sushanth.She knows that Kkusum is not her mother Kkusum.But for her,her real mother is Kkusum who brought her up with the love which anyone desires for.
The End



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Posted: 14 October 2015 at 3:31am | IP Logged
hi congrats on the OS! thanks 4 da pm n beautiful emotional OS! Well written! Abhay n Kkusum happily married with a son! She tells him she will never accept his girlfriend's son bt will accept a daughter! Wt she sed comes true! Kkusum senses Abhay's distance! She confronts him! he reveals everything! he loved Kkusum whi was his gf! he married this Kkusum as her name was the same! bt fell 4 her after marriage! he went his ex Kkusum! she had brain tumour! tht the reason she left him! Abhay stunned!  She was pregnant! bt it was 2 late as he was married! they have a daughter Kumud! Kkusum died! Kkusum agrees 2 bring up Kumud! she did sya she wld! Abhay awed! lovely end! Kkusum has a big heart! Kumud knows Kumud id nt her mom bt she is her real mom! lovely end!

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