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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 81)

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Posted: 10 October 2015 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Superb os
Loved it

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Posted: 10 October 2015 at 6:18am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written
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Thanks for PM,Dear.Smile
It was Amazing Os.Smile
The Whole Os was so Interestingly explained.Smile
The Pics were so Nice.Smile
Please write like this.Smile
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
                                                                                             PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 11 October 2015 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Beautiful update dear 
Thanks for the pm dear 
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Posted: 12 October 2015 at 4:29am | IP Logged
awesome OS
so Garv and kumud were married
gotta say hes such a sweet guy
but because of kumuds insecurity of not being able to have baby n her mu she left him
now they both r miserable
im so glad kumud bumped into bhoomi n Arjun n they cleared her mu
even though kumud mu gurv he never blamed her or hated her
he just wanted his love back
loved how they got back together
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 12 October 2015 at 5:32am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 46( Ronit=Pooja,Akash-Reema )








Dedicated to

vishti4eva 
who loves Ronit Pooja

Love in college

It was  St.Martine's college's talent's show day...

Akash Reema danced together beautifully.


( Gori Gori Gori Gori, Gori Gori
Kabhi Kabhi Kahin Kahin Chori Chori )...(2)
Chhup Chhup Ke Tum Mila Karo
Pyari Pyari Baatein Vaatein Kiya Karo
Par Yun Na Milna Kisi Se Kabhi, Hamare Siva
Gore Gore Gore Gore, Gore Gore, Bhole Bhole Naye Naye Kore Kore
Dekho Dekho Hum Dono Meet Hain, Suno Suno Dil Ke Jo Geet Hain
Par Sunne Paaye Inhein Na Koii Hamare Siva
Gori Gori...Chori Chori
Gore Gore...Kore Kore(Main Hoon Na)

The teacher came and congratulated them:Akash-Reema...you guys are the best dancing couple of our college.You guys will have to take part in the inter college festival too.







Akash:Thank you so much Ma'am.
Reema:And with your support we will surely take part in the coming competition.
The teacher smiled:All the best.
Akash-Reema:Thanks Ma'am.




Pooja and Ronit dressed as Heer Ranjha and came on stage for the skit.
Seeing Pooja, Ronit ran towards her as Ranjha:My Heer...
Unexpectedly he lost his balance and fell on her.Both of them rolled over each other and finally he was on top of her.Pooja was stunned.A strange sensation passed through both of them.Their eyes locked on to each other.
Slowly they got up.
Ronit looked at her eyes passionately:Heer...I missed you...after so many days I saw you today...

Pooja could see passion in his eyes and was surprised to see sudden change in him.
Unknowingly his love touched her heart bringing tears in her eyes.
POOJA:Do you know how much I missed you?I felt that my life was nothing without you.

Ronit was stunned to hear such a romantic emotional dialogue from Pooja.He forgot that it was a skit.

Unknowingly his hands moved toward her face and caressed her face.Pooja closed her eyes in passion.
He thought:Pooja...how could you change me so soon?What changes are you bringing in me?
Pooja opened her eyes and got lost in him.
Pooja turned back emotionally.
She thought:God...what is this?
Ronit's eyes rolled on him.He thought:Did Pooja also feel the same ?

Then both of them made a conscious effort to deliver the cute romantic dialogues they had rehearsed.


Pooja as Heer had poisonous laddoo and fell down dead.Ronit as Ranjha saw it.
For a moment he forgot that he was Ranjha.He felt that Pooja fell died.
He screamed running to her:Nooo
He placed her head on his lap and cried:Open your eyes.You can't leave me and go.Please...
He embraced her.His tears fell on her face.
Pooja couldn't open her eyes as in the skit she was supposed to be dead.
She couldn't believe that Ronit actually cried and his tears had fallen on her face.
Ronit came back to his senses.He ate the laddoo which Pooja bit which was supposed to be poisonous in the story.
Ronit as Ranjha fell down dead close to his Heer ;Pooja.He lay by her side.

Everyone clapped their hands.Akash who was Ronit and Pooja's friend felt strange seeing their chemistry.

 Reema who was Ronit's sisterwas very happy to see their love story.She wiped her wet eyes.

Ronit and Pooja opened their eyes and saw each other.They kept looking at each other for some time.
Then they got up.
They went back stage and went to the changing room.

Akash:Ronit and Pooja had awesome chemistry.They looked as if they really loved each other.
Reema:Yes Akash.Bhai and Pooja love each other.
Akash was surprised:What?Did they tell you so?
Reema:No.But I know that.From their gestures I had felt so.I am just waiting for them to admit it.

Akash smiled.

Ronit and Pooja changed into normal clothes and came back.Ronit smiled at Pooja.
RONIT:How was my acting?
POOJA:Too good.It was so natural that I felt you were not acting.
Ronit said in his mind:I had really lived the character.I felt that you were my beloved Pooja.
POOJA:Ronit...did you really cry?
RONIT:No.Why?
POOJA:Why did I feel that you really cried?
RONIT:You are mad.


He tried to walk away.She held his hand.
POOJA:Tell the truth Ronit.Why did you cry?
RONIT:Leave my hand Pooja.You have gone nuts.
Pooja left his hand.
She was sad.
Pooja:Why are you like this Ronit?I know you inside also.You are soft at heart.But you put a lot of attitude and irritates me.Why can't you admit your true feelings?Why are you making me impatient?
Ronit was stunned to hear her.He was very upset seeing pain on her face.
Ronit:What are you waiting impatiently to hear Pooja?
Pooja looked at him with teary eyes:Ronit...don't act as if you don't understand me.You will know what I meant only if I say that openly?
He felt sad.

Cupping her face he looked at her eyes: I cried...because for a moment I forgot that it was only a skit.I felt you were really my beloved and I lost you forever.I couldn't bear that pain.
Unknowingly Pooja's eyes became wet.Ronit couldn't believe that she was shedding tears.
He wiped her tears.Then he came back to his senses.
He thought:Why are you crying?What did I do?
Pooja:You stupid!You admitted indirectly that you love me and these are the tears formed because of happiness.
They smiled at each other emotionally.
Akash and Reema watched this from behind and smiled.Akash saw tears in Reema's eyes.
Ak:Are your tears also formed because of happiness?
Reema smiled:Ya...actually I got emotional seeing the love of Bhai and Pooja.
Reema tried to walk away.Akash held her hand.
Reema looked at him:Akash...why did you hold my hand?
Ak:I felt like holding your hand till the end of my life.
Reema was surprised:Akash!
Ak:Reema,will you allow me to hold my hands forever?
Reema was so happy that she embraced him.They smiled.
Ronit-Pooja who turned back viewed their embrace and smiled with joy.
.

The End

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Posted: 12 October 2015 at 5:41am | IP Logged
love  n respect  for u   dear ! Hug
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Posted: 12 October 2015 at 7:26am | IP Logged
awe how lovely
loved how Ronit n pooja got lost in their play
n then how seeing ronit n pooja happy Akaash decided to confess his love
both couples confessing n getting their loves
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
 

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