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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 77)

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Posted: 05 October 2015 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Hi
The os is really beautifully pen down
though i haven't seen this serial but the way you have showed the love is really nice
So vaansh and Iccha though got egoes in their life 
but the pain of going away made them break all their anger and they became one 
I love it 

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Posted: 05 October 2015 at 5:56am | IP Logged
sweet but emotional story of jai bani..
both wer alone, one being orphan, one having relatives but not family...
jai thought he was older to bani so he wanted bani to b with pushkar.. but bani's true feelings, & her words touched him...
superb... thnks 4 writing on jai-bani...
very well written..
thnks 4 d pics...
thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 05 October 2015 at 11:41am | IP Logged
.WOW!! it was lovely...U wrote each and every emotions beautifully...it was perfect...how much I wish that cvs didn't with Ichchha between veer and vansh...and later veer between tappu and ichchha...total waste...Ouch...but u justified the plot and ended it beautifully...

Edited by sanghita0000 - 05 October 2015 at 11:47am
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Posted: 06 October 2015 at 8:30am | IP Logged
lovely OS
thank god Vansh let go his pride n stopped her
otherwise both would've been miserable
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 06 October 2015 at 10:46am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 43( Kunal Nimmo,Nihaal Suhaana,Sharad Sneha)



Dedicate this to SanKsgian who asked me to write on Sharad Sneha


Happy new year

Kunal is very happy that his brother Sharad is engaged to his love Sneha.Kunal's world is His brother Sharad and sister Suhaana after his parents passed away.Kunal's sister Suhaana is married to Nihaal.Kunal liked Sharad's choice Sneha.He is a perfect bhabhi according to him.He looks at the silly snaps he took with Sneha's family in his mobile.


His eyes strikes Nimmo.Yes,Kunal has feelings towards Sneha's sister Nimmo.But he has not revealed it yet.Because of ego he hides his love in his heart.

Kunal announced:I am arranging a New year party.
Kunal's sister Suhaana:Wow Kunal..that's a good idea.
 Nihaal:Yes Kunal.We will welcome new year with our happiness.
Suhaana:We all will be there for the party.What more happiness do we need?
Sharad:Yes.I am waiting for the new year party.The party will rock for sure.What's theme of the party?
Kunal:Nothing special.But everyone would wear western clothes for the party.
Nimmo was shocked:Western clothes?No way.
Kunal stares at her:That's the only way Nimmo.
Her face becomes dull:But even jiji won't wear western dress.
Sharad:Don't worry about Sneha Nimmo.I will buy one for her.I am sure that she cannot refuse to wear it.Right Sneha.
Sneha smiles silently.
Nimmo:I can't digest the theme.
Sneha:Come on Nimmo.It's only a party.We are not asked to wear western clothes through out our life.
Sharad:Ya..

Nimmo is still in a dilemma.
Kunal goes to another room.Nimmo follows him.
NIMMO:This is too much.We are Indians.You can't force us to wear western dress.
K:It is my party and I will decide what others should wear.
N:No...you can't be so stubborn.
K: Ok,then don't come for the party.
Nimmo is shocked.
N:Why are you so stubborn Kunal?

K:I know why you are hesitating to wear western dress.Because you can't carry it off properly.
Nimmo gets angry:What did you say Mr.Kunal?I can't carry off western dress?You think only high class girls can look good in western dress?Wait and watch.You will be surprised to see my make over.
Kunal smirks:Make over?You?Never!
NIMMO:You can't underestimate me.
She challenges him and goes away.

Suhaana comes out of the bathroom after taking bath.She is wiping her hair.Water drops fell on Nihaal.He holds her by her waist.
They share a sensuous eye lock.
Suhaana:What are you doing?
Nihaal:You are so beautiful Suhaana.

She blushes.
Nih:I can't wait to see you in the western outfit at the new year party.
Suh:What if I don't wear western dress?
Nih:No problem.Because in Indian attire also you are ravishing.
He caresses her wet face sensually.She closes her eyes drowning in his passionate love.












Sharad gifts a dress to Sneha.Sneha becomes uncomfortable seeing the western dress.
Sn:Sorry Sharad.I don't wear such clothes.
Sharad:Please Sneha..for my sake?
Finally she nods her head:Ok dear.I will wear it.


 He smiles.




December 31st night...
Suhaana wears a one strap black gown with diamond earrings.
Nihaal is flattered.
Nih:I can't control anymore Suhaana.
He goes to taste her skin.She pushes him laughing.
Suh:Nihaal...you are forgetting that we have to go for the party now.So stop getting naughty and let us leave for the party.
He smiles:Ok darling.But I won't leave you after the party.
She blushes.

Sneha wears the red gown which Sharad gifted her.Nimmo is surprised.
Nimmo:My God!Jiji in a western dress?I can't believe my eyes.Sharad jeeju will faint.
Sneha is shy.
Sneha:Stop it Nimmo.
They smile.
Nimmo:Ok jeeji.You go to jeeju.
Sneha:What about you?
Nimmo:Don't wait for me.If you wait for me you will get delayed.You will be late for the party.
Sneha:But Nimmo...
Nimmo:Go...Jeeju will be waiting for you.
Sharad comes to pick up Sneha.
Sharad is stunned to see Sneha in gown.
Sharad:Wa..Sneha..i did'nt expect this much.You look so pretty.
She is shy.He holds her closer.Nimmo smiles.
Shara:Please Nimmo...

Nimmo:I understand that you guys need privacy.I am going.
Sharad pulls Sneha closer.
A romantic eye lock.
He takes out a necklace from his pocket and places it around her neck.She is surprised:Beautiful!
He smiles.
Sharad:Now I need to change.
Sneh:Means you are not dressed yet?
Sharad:No...I thought we both will dress up together.
Sne:You naughty.
Sharad:Close your eyes.Let me dress up.
Sneha pushes him to a room and closes the door.
Sneh:Don't change in front of me.Change there.
Sharad:Why?If I change in front of you will you lose your control?
Sneha giggles:Stop your stupid jokes.
He smiles.
He comes out dressed up.
Sneha smiles:Very handsome.
He goes closer to her:Really?
She smiles nodding her head.
He holds her hand.
Sharad:Shall we go for the party?
She nods her head.
They both go for the party.

Kunal is still at the house.
Kunal:Where is this Nimmo?Why is she not coming?I think she decided not to come for the party as she is not confident to wear western dress.
Suddenly he hears a voice:Nimmo is never diffident.She is always confident.
He turns back.
He can't believe his eyes.
Nimmo is sitting on the sofa like a Queen.She looks hot in her black gown.

Kunal:Nimmo!

Nimmo:Kunal...am i looking hot?

Kunal can't admit it openly.
Nimmo:Ya...ok...
She goes towards him:Just ok?
Kunal is becoming weak by her killing look.
She dances in a seductive manner to the sensuous song
"Raat Ka Nasha Abhi
Aankh Se Gaya Nahin...
Tera Nashila Badan
Baahon Ne Chhoda Nahin
Aankhen To Kholi Magar
Sapna Woh Toda Nahin
Haan Wohi Woh Wohi
Saason Pe Rakha Hua Tere Hoton Ka
Sapna Abhi Hai Wahi
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi
Aankh Se Gaya Nahin..."
Kunal loses his control and pulls her towards him.
She is shocked as she never expected him to do so.She danced only to tease him.
Kunal:I accept failure.You won.You look extremely beautiful.

They share a romantic eye lock.
Nimmo becomes shy and breaks the eye lock.
Kunal leans towards her lips.


The shy Nimmo moves away from him.
Nimmo:What are you doing Kunal?
Kunal:I am sorry Nimmo if you did'nt like it.But I don't regret doing it.Because I love you.
Nimmo is very happy.
Kunal:It's just that my manly ego did'nt allow me to confess my love to you.But I can't hide my feelings anymore.
Kunal is tensed about Nimmo's reaction.Nimmo goes near him and embraces him.Kunal smiles happily holding her closer.
Nimmo:Kunal...I think we should leave for the party.
Kunal:Yes.We will go for the party.

They both reach the destination.
Sharad and Sneha are busy dancing to the soft violin music.

Kunal holds her hand to dance.She does'nt resist.They start dancing intimately.

Sneha thinks:Nimmo?Has she reached?





Sharad:Chill Sneha.Look back.
She looks back and gets surprised to see Kunal Nimmo dancing together.
Sharad:Another love story in the making.
Sharad-Sneha smile.
Suddenly they hear a loud noise..a burst...
Glittering powder is thrown on them.
They hear the voice of the anchor:Happy new year.
Kunal and Nimmo look at each other and wish:Happy new year!
 Nihaal Suhaana come towards them.

Nihaal:Don't worry Kunal.We are  not here to disturb you.We just came to wish 'Happy new year'.
Nimmo smiles:Happy New year jeejaji and Suhaana di.
Suhaana smiles:Happy new year my dear bhai Kunal and Nimmo.Ok carry on..
Kunal:What?
Suhaana:Your romance.
Nihaal smiles in a naughty way.
They are embarrassed as Suhaana and Nihaal caught them red handed.
They go  away and continue their dance.
Slowly Kunal and Nimmo look at each other and smile.

The end

 


Edited by jasminerahul - 08 October 2015 at 1:11am

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Posted: 06 October 2015 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Omg you remember this request on sharad and sneha
Even I forgot
N u dedicate it to me
Eeeopppooo
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Posted: 06 October 2015 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Love this one
Love it to bits
Even the pics are amazing
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Posted: 06 October 2015 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb fab OS! awesome pics! Wonderfully written

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