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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 75)

sanghita0000 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2015 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Oh I am sorry...Actually I open all the links of a pm and then first complete likings and then starts reading and comment one by one at a minimum time lag of 15 sec to avoid "Ur comment cannot be posted" warning...

Never mind , I am commenting again afresh...Smile

Jai and Bani are epic couple for me...I remember the time when I was hooked to this show until the cvs reintroduced leaps after leaps...

Coming to ur os , Jai-Bani are complete loner...bani was waiting for her true love and Jai was waiting for that too...One snowy evening , they found love in each other and from that time there was no stopping...I loved Pia-Pushkar , although Pia was a selfish one in the show...still for Pushkar and epic Jai-Bani  , I can bear her in this os

Jayeeta_06 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2015 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
sweet os...StarStarStar...Jai and Bani got their true love with each other...ClapClapClap...Bani choose Jai instead of Pushkar...Cool...Pushkar got Pia...Wink...happy ending...Dancing...thank u 4 pm...Big smile...
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2015 at 3:01am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 41(Amrit Bebo)

Dedicating it to Sydell who wants Amrit Bebo OS

Special  Birthday

Bebo is shattered after the sudden death of her favourite teacher.Her death  left Bebo in a devastated state.Unexpectedly she keeps visiting Bebo  in dreams,still she forgets to smile.She is estranged from the happy world where all her loved ones get together.The mental agony dominates her.Her husband Amrit feels her pain,but he keeps silent.He longs to bring the smile back on her face.
"Bebo..get ready.We will go out",Amrit decides to take her out to freshen up her mind.
"No..i have no mood to go out",Bebo refuses to go on a date.
"Don't say like that Bebo.Please come with me.You need to go out to be fresh".
"Nothing can change my mind.I lost my dearest one.I feel lonely".

 "When i'm with you you don't have to feel lonely",Amrit comforts her.
They share an emotional eyelock.
"Get ready Bebo",he says softly.
Without saying anything Bebo goes and wears a salwar kameez.
Amrit gets disappointed by her dress.
"What a useless dress you have worn?Wear something nice".
"We are just going out.An ordinary salwar kameez is enough no?Why should we dress well?"
"You have to be well dressed as I love seeing you in pretty clothes".
Bebo looks at him curiously,
"Where are we going?"
"It's a suspense.Wear a beautuful dress and come".
Bebo feels lazy to change her dress again,but he does it only for Amrit.
She wears a lovely white and red anarkali.
"Beautiful.You look cute in this ".
She smiles.
Amrit takes her to a place which is beautifull decorated with lights and flowers.
Bebo can't believe it,
" did this?"
He smiles,"Yes.Did you like it?"
"Yes.But how could you..?I mean till now you never did something so romantic".
"I realized that i have to be romantic to bring back smile to your face.There is one more surprise for you".
Amrit takes her to the small room there.There she sees a chocolate cake.
"Wow!Chocolate cake.My favourite".
Bebo is excited.
"Happy birthday Bebo",Amrit wishes her.
She is surprised.
"Because of the recent incident you forgot your dearest day..your birthday".
She smiles painfully.

He wipes her tiny tears and
smiles,"Let us cut the cake".
She smiles.
He sings the Birthday song and she cuts the cake.She puts the cake piece into his mouth.He cuts the cake and puts a small piece into her mouth.
"Bebo..let us dance".
Amrit surprises her again.
"You never danced with me before as you were not confident to dance. But now..i just can't believe this",Bebo looks at him unbelievingly.
Amrit smiles,"I will go to any extent to make you happy.Because I want my Bebo to be happy always".
She smiles emotionally.She thinks,
"How lucky am I to get a loving husband like Amrit".
"Let us dance Bebo".
"But no music",she says.
"Let us sing and dance",he suggests.
"What?But we both can't sing properly",she feels awkward.
"That's ok.Let us sing for ourselves".
Amrit and Bebo hold hands together and dance.

They sing

Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada Tum Pe Marne Laga Hoon...

Main Mera Dil Aur Tum Ho Yahaan...
Fir Kyun Ho Palkein Jhukaye Waha...
Tum Saahasee Pehle Dekha Nahin...
Tum Isse Pehle The Jane Kahaan...

Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada.
Pehle Se Zyada Tum Pe Marne Laga...

(Ramaiya Vastavaiya )

Though they sing horribly it sounds good for them as it has the taste of their love and romance.
Bebo said,
"Thanks Amrit for making my birthday special".

 Amrit feels happy seeing Bebo cheerful after a long time.

The end

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Heatsha8176 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 March 2015
Posts: 5159

Posted: 03 October 2015 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Yaaah im first
lovely OS
Amrit cant see Bebo so depressed
so he was willing to go out of his comfort zone for her
to make her smile again
so sweet
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
newmoon18 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 14 July 2014
Posts: 14384

Posted: 03 October 2015 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Superb os
Loved it to the core

So well written
Very entertaining
Keep smiling
PriyaSweety-Anu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11041

Posted: 03 October 2015 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Thanks for PM.Smile
Both OS were Very Interesting Os.Smile
The Pics were so Nice.Smile
Both Os was so Nicely explained.Smile
Please write like this.Smile

Edited by PriyaCherry - 03 October 2015 at 7:45am
heemasomani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2015 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Mindblowing os 
khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posts: 59058

Posted: 03 October 2015 at 11:04am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb OS! Well written!

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