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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 73)

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Posted: 30 September 2015 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jasminerahul

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4369939&TPN=36
 
I have already written on them.check out
 
 
Originally posted by heemasomani

Can u please write on manyata and udayveer of Dekha Ek Khwaab 

k ty 

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Posted: 30 September 2015 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Read maanveer story again 
beautifully written 
thanks u changed it into happy ending
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Posted: 30 September 2015 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Nice story dear.
Saloni and nihar nice couple.
Pix r awesome.
Lovely and cute.
End was great.
Tf pm.
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Posted: 30 September 2015 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Its really nice and beautiful. Naina is a dying patient, she has cancer .Huda loves her a lot.But he doesn't wanna leave her.He was forced to get married to someone else.On the other hand Naina was busy enjoying Raj's peoms.She narrates her story to Raj.Raj feels emotional and expresses his love to her .He even tells her that he also is gonna die.He made her relaxed by bring a smile on to her face .
There are deceased lovers.Beautifully written

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Posted: 30 September 2015 at 6:25am | IP Logged
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This was so awesome 
Nahar is fair person and Salon is dark.Nahar had proposed Saloni but she rejected it as she was dark and what would the locality think.She got married to the person who was like her but he made her sad by killing her baby inside her.She should be put behind bars for aborting a baby .its a crime .Just for a simple issue killing a baby. Nahar understood and gave her the happiness which she deserved .He put a diamond ring on her finger ,which he had proposed her before.they both got married 
And their baby is also dark and they both don't have a prob with that.
Nice to see Nahar chosed Sererat(ones inner beauty) that their khuboosurat face(fairness) .Beautifully penned down.
I just love your works jazz.you are.improving a lot 
Your writing is just amazing me a lot.
Keep up the good work.Embarrassed


Edited by -Dellz- - 30 September 2015 at 8:03am
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Posted: 30 September 2015 at 7:43am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome OS! well written! Nahar really loves her! She rejected him n gt married 2 someone else! her husband didn't want the baby as it wld have wld dark skinned! her baby was killed! She left her husband! Nahar was there 4 her! he proposed! she accepted after he assured her!
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Posted: 01 October 2015 at 4:18am | IP Logged
lovely OS
so Saloni rejected Nahar because of her skin colour n couldn't see a future with him
but look how fate took a hand n made her realize love is all that counts
cant believe that first husband of hers forced her to kill their baby ...disgusting man
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 01 October 2015 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 40(Jai Bani,Sahil Rano,Pushkar Pia,Ranveer Rashi).


Dedicated to  coolhi1988 and
newmoon18 
who want me to write on Jai Bani.

Snowy Evenings



She is a lonely bird who is sometimes a vagabond to kill time.She does'nt have the tale of any brittle relationship to share with.She is born with loneliness.She is an orphan.Luck brought her to New York where she achieved everything except a company to share her joy and sorrow.
She loves the snowy evenings in New York.No matter how cold they are.She just covers herself with a sweater and goes out to see the beautiful sight of snowfall.Her soft fair skin makes her appear like a cute snowy girl.
She loves the sight of lovers romancing in snowy evenings at the lovers' park inspite of coldness.She loves the fact that lovers do not care about coldness or hotness when they are in love.
She loves sunny days also.Sunlight brings freshness to her face.She loves to swim in reverie.A loner like her can have pals only in daydreams.
But nothing can beat the snowy evenings in New York.Sipping hot chocolate in the cold evenings makes her happy.
Among the lovers she saw in the snowy evenings she found Sahil-Rano and Ranveer-Rashi the cutest couples.They were her collegues too.In evenings on the show Sahil and Rano romance forgetting all their tensions and worries.
Rashi prepares hot snacks and feeds Ranveer like a dutiful wife 
and Ranveer feeds her those hot snacks with all his love.
She envied them.
"Wish I could find my Prince charming.So that I can make my beautiful snowy evenings romantic too".

During a snowy evening,there was someone who sat near her.He was not the fair tall young handsome Prince of her dreams.He was a middle aged man.
He did not hesitate to talk to her.
"Sitting here alone at this time?"

She passed a cute smile.
"This is not India where girls are frightened to go out in the evenings".
He smiled:Oh!I did'nt think about that.Here women are so free.You can't find shy girls here.
She smiles again.
"Now a days women can't be weak.They have to fight for themselves for protection.Especially those who stay alone as they have no one to look after them".
He could read her hidden thoughts.
"You spoke for yourself now.You are alone here.right?"
She was surprised.
"You are great.You could understand that.I'm an orphan".
"Some people have everybody in their life,but they are orphans.I'm one among them.I'm also alone."
She viewed the hidden pain on his face.
"I had only a sister.I lost her 2 years back.I have a nephew who just came here from India one year back".
She thirsted for hot chocolate which she forgot to take it along with her for the first time.
He took out a flask from his bag.
"Would you like to have some hot chocolate?"
She was surprised.
"I can't survive without hot chocolate in snowy evenings".
She nodded,
"Wow!I love it.Our tastes are same i guess".
They smiled at each other sweetly.



Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha
 Aakar mujhe tum tham lo
Manzil teri

While sipping hot chocolate he felt for the first time that he has someone to share things with.That was a moment of ecstasy for both of them.




dekhe rasta
Mud ke zara ab dekh lo

He extended her a rose saying,
"In remembrance of our first meeting".
She accepted it whole heartedly.
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
 






Soona soona lamha lamha Meri rahein tanha tanha Aakar mujhe tum tham lo Manzil teri dekhe rasta Mud ke zara ab dekh lo Aisa milan phir ho na ho Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho



"I really enjoyed your company.Thanks for spending time with me.Your name?"
She said.
He replied,
"Jai Walia".
She smiled,
"I am Bani".




Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
 O bapanah pyaar hai aaja tera intezaar hai aaja
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha (Krishna cottage).



They spent many snowy evenings with each other.They felt that they are not orphans anymore.

He looked out from the gazebo.He witnessed snow fall.He felt that his love for her is falling down in the form of snow.But his age pulled him back from confessing his love.

She realised that the moments with him always kindled her face like the sunset kindled the skies.Her heart beat for the next snowy evening.
The next evening...
He was not alone.A handsome young man accompanied him.
He could not understand the meaning of his smile.
He assured her,
"Bani...you are not an orphan anymore.I found the Prince of your dreams.Pushkar.My nephew".
She looked at him.She did not find the young man attractive.
But she saw love flowing from the middle aged man's eyes.
Her heart reminded her,
"He will always make you happy".
He sees her trembling.That was not what he expected from her.
She spoke clearly,
"Mr.Walia...you don't need to show any mercy to me.Because i'm not an orphan.Until i met you i considered myself as an orphan.But not anymore.I have you with me.So I'm not an orphan.The snowy evenings which we spent together cannot be erased from my heart even if i die.You proved that love has nothing to do with age.Handsome young men will come and go.But a man like you is seen once in a life time.I don't want to lose you".

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna


His ears are honest,his ears can't lie to him.Still he doubted whether what he heard was true or not.Because she said what his subconscious mind wanted to hear from her.
Her tears seemed to be the beautiful snow drops;the the rare lovely flowers.

Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitaani
Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai

She does not know what his reaction would be.Slowly he moved his fingers to wipe her tears.Her eyes are filled up with tears.She looked into his eyes deeply.She could read his answer from his lusterous eyes.He began to caress her silky dancing hair.Slowly a smile appeared upon her pinkish white face.He smiled when the love he stored for her in his heart flowed down and held her closer to his bosom.

Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak(Kalyug).

The young man left them alone to sink in the ocean of love. A beautiful girl held his hand.
Her eyes were teary.He wiped her tears.
"No need of crying sweet heart.Finally Mamaji realized that I am not fit for the girl he loves".
Her eyes glittered realizing that she has not lost him.
"That means you are only mine Pushkar".
"Yes,I am only yours Pia.Love you".

While Jai and Bani accepted each other with love Pushkar and Pia also started their journey together.

The end


Edited by jasminerahul - 03 October 2015 at 5:16am

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