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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 7)

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 9:32am | IP Logged
WOW!! nice dear...loved it...

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:59am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid OS! Well written
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Amazing i hv no words to describe u r a amazing writer
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:36am | IP Logged
lovely os
liked how both Armaan n Samrat notice the girls inner beauty
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 10:20am | IP Logged
amazing story
nice couples
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 11:20am | IP Logged
OMG!! What a beautiful OS Jasmine!
It's been ages that I've not read any single OS on Armaan and Jassi.So thanks a ton!! I really loved the fact that Armaan and Samrat are not even the typical guys who always care about the outer beauties..inner beauty and self-confidence is extremely important. So I loved with the fact that Jassi has changed herself for Armaan. And lovely dance sequence of JandA and SaJan. Keep writing more and send me a pm whenever you canBig smile
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 4 (Angad Kripa)
It is inspired by the movie 'Saawaria'.

I dedicate this OS to v.p.joshi,Jayeeta_06,Sanjana4Rajeev,rima4ever,sanghita0000,bluesky10 who expressed their love for Angad-Kripa.






Doves










Angad is a handsome lovely boy who lives to fall in love.He waited to fall in love.And finally he falls in love.One moon lit night brings his dream girl to him.
He sees a ravishing beauty standing .Moon and stars do not reach his eyes.Only she is seen. Her face which shines like a moon, ,her smooth skin and the tiny petal like lips make her look like a sweet doll.
Angad used to love dolls and he wanted to have a pretty girl who is as cute as a doll to be with him.Now he finds the cute doll like girl he was waiting for.
"Are you not scared to stand here at night?"
He asks.
She raises her eye brows and look at him.
"I'm not scared.Only my love is inside my mind.No fear.I will wait for my love at any time.Whether it's day or night..i don't care".
"Love?"
She blushes,
"Yes.My love.I'm waiting for him.For the last one year i have been waiting for my lover Prithvi".

He sees her eyes glowing when she talks about her love.But he was heart broken when he heard about her love.Because he has already fallen for her.He can't imagine losing her.Tears dwell in his eyes.

Angad sees Kripa waiting for her man every night.The nights they spent together make them closer to each other.A beautiful friendship grows between them.Love blooms more and more in Angad's heart.He tries hard to control his emotions in front of Kripa.
He offers her snacks and juice.They both have them together.
"For how long will you wait for your lover?"
Angad asks her.
"He will come very soon.You know..last year i met him here.Here only he proposed to me.He promised me that he will be back after his sister's wedding".
Still she has hopes.
"If he does'nt come now?"
"I will till my death".


He feels sad.
After a few nights...
Angad feels pity seeing Kripa's eyes searching for Prithvi.
"I pity you for waiting for a man who has'nt contacted you ever since he left this place.You are doing something foolish.You are wasting your precious time.Forget him".
Kripa's anger makes her face red.
"What nonsense are you saying?I told you..he will come soon".
Angad goes closer to her.
"Kripa".He utters her name softly.
She sees a different Angad.She feels that in his voice there was musical romance.
"I will tell you a truth.I have been loving you ever since i saw you".
She is in a big shock.
"Angad...what are you saying?"
"Please try to see my heart.I love you.Forget him.Come with me.I will give you a lot of love and happiness".

"No Angad.I can't.."
She runs away.
Angad is depressed.


The next night Kripa's arrival gives a lot of tensions to Angad.He is nervous to face her.
"Angad!I'm sorry".
He is relived as well as surprised.
"I thought you will not talk to me".
"I don't want to lose a friend like you.I need you".
 
Angad is excited.
"Kripa needs me.Wow!I'm the most happiest person in this world".
He jumps with joy in the rain.
Kripa is bathed in pain.
"I need you..but as a friend".
Suddenly Angad feels that his heart has been hurt with a needle.
He hides his pain with a cute smile.
"It is okay.Atleast you are with me as a friend.That is more than important for me".
She smiles.

The next night was sensual with a lot of couples dancing in the rain.
It is a visual treat for Angad and Kripa.
"I wish Prithvi was here to dance with me in this beautiful rain.Angad...what would you have done if you had your beloved with you now?"
"Me?"
"Ya.."
He looks deeply into her eyes.
He holds her closer to the wall.He stands really close to her.She feels his heart beat and breath.
"I would have stood closer to her like this and..."
"And?"
"And...i would have looked into her eyes like this".
He looks deeply into her eyes.Kripa feels that his love is touching her heart.Her eyes are touching his eyes.His skin rubbed hers sensually.For a moment she gets lost.
He embraces her passionately.She forgets everything melting in his embrace.
Suddenly she becomes conscious of her own feelings.
"How did i feel Angad's love?It's a sin.How could i forget Prithvi even for a moment?"
Her mind asks her.
 


She feels guilty.She moves away.
Angad looks at her.
"I'm going.Bye".
"Kripa!"
Kripa does'nt mind him.
She runs away with tears.
Angad longs for her presence.

Angad waits for the next night to be with Kripa.
Kripa comes with a sweet smile.She looks cute like a child.
"You look very happy".
"Prithvi's letter came.He will come tonight".

Angad knows what real pain is.He is going to lose Kripa forever.He controls his tears.He smiles hiding his tears.
"So you are going to be a bride.You are going to be with your lover.Congrats Kripa".
Kripa blushes.

After some time...
Kripa hears Prithvi's footsteps.When she sees his face she runs to him.She wanted to hold his arm.But she did'nt see passion or love in his eyes.
"I came here to apologise to you for naking you wait".
"No need of your apology.Anyways you came.That is more than enough for me".
"I'm sorry Kripa.I can't take you with me.To conduct my sister's wedding i had to sacrifice you".
Kripa looks at him with anxiety.
"I had to marry the bride groom's sister to get my sister married to him".
Kripa's romantic world breaks into pieces in a moment.
"What?How easily you deserted me Prithvi!"
She cries.
"I'm sorry.Kripa...you are a nice girl.I will not be forgiven by God for breaking your heart.But i'm helpless.God will give you your true love".Prithvi moves away helplessly.
 

Kripa cries like anything.Angad places his hands on her shoulders with pain.
"You were right Angad.What i did was very foolish".
She rests her head on his shoulder and sheds tears.He caresses her to console her.

Nights pass.
Angad starts waiting for Kripa like she waited for Prithvi for one year.
He is restless since he has'nt seen her after she got rejected by her lover.He waits
for Kripa with hope.
After one year he sees Kripa coming.She has not changed a bit.She is beautiful  like before.
Angad runs to her.
"Kripa...you came.I have been waiting for you for the last one year.I knew that you will come".
"I knew that you were waiting for me.I waited for a man for one year.But he ditched me.I won't let you feel the pain i felt at that moment. That's why I came to you leaving my engagement in mid way".
Angad is shocked.
"You came leaving your engagement?"
"Yes.Because I can't cheat myself anymore".
"Means?"He asks.
"I regret ignoring your love.I can't ignore the fact anymore that I have feelings for you".
Angad becomes emotional.
"Kripa!"
"Angad...I regret making you wait for a long time.Now i'm grateful to Prithvi for deserting me.If he had'nt done that i would not have been lucky enough to be with you".
He smiles.

 
"Yes Angad...I love you".

She embraces him emotionally.He holds her closer with all his love.
"I love you too Kripa".
 
They look like two lovely doves who are madly in love with each other.
Near by them there are two cute doves showering love upon each other.
But Angad-Kripa are so engrossed in each other's warm embrace that their eyes fail to see the romantic doves which are like them.

 


 

The end


Edited by jasminerahul - 14 May 2015 at 1:34am

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Beautiful os
In my childhood I used to watch kaisa hair yrh pyaar a lot
I was a huge fan of angaad and kripa

Thanks for this amzng os



This one was really very different from the original stryline
I like angaad attitude in the serial
Hes a spoil brat
Alwz gets what he wants

And kripa sweet nd simple
Their fights

Nd when they fall in love they fought with the wrld to get together




This stry has the same essence
Angaad loves kripa so much
His love was so pure nd strong
That it bring back kripa to him


Loved it


Love u
Keep smiling

Edited by newmoon18 - 14 May 2015 at 2:07am

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