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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 69)

coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 26 September 2015 at 7:53am | IP Logged
awesome story of akash-payal...
loved their hospital scene..
akash knows his wifes habit so he already purchased new kaajal for her...
thnks 4 d pm...

coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 26 September 2015 at 8:02am | IP Logged
awesome nk-la scene..
seriously did khushi's brain enter into nk..
gifting tools to repair bike... though it is helpfull.. but to give it as gift can only b khushi's idea...
ncie scene..
finally la realized wat priceless gift nk is...
thnks 4  dpm..
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 September 2015 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 37(Indu Sanchi,Prashanth Poonam)

This OS is based on the the nurse who got gang raped in Salmania.
That incident inspired me to pen down this OS.
I dedicate this OS to Sydell who suggested me to write on Indu Sanchi.
Special thanks to rima4ever who helped me to save most of the Indu Sanchi pictures.

Usually I don't make banners for my OS series.But Sydell is so sweet that she took the intitiative to make banner for this OS.Thanks for the banner Sydell

One moment

 Indu took an auto and rushed to the hospital  to pick up his wife Sanchi.They were a newly wed couple.One month back only they got married.

Sanchi was waiting eagerly for her Indu.She waited on the road side alone.Indu was stuck in the  traffic block. Indu rang up and informed her.
INDU:Sorry Sanchi...I am late.
SANCHI:It's ok Indu.Concentrate on driving.I will wait.
Some young boys saw Sanchi standing alone.Seeing the way they looked at her she got scared.But she tried to  ignore them.They walked towards her.She tried to run away.But they caught her.She tried to scream.But one of them closed her mouth with hands.
They took her inside the car and sealed her mouth with a plaster and tied her hands together.
Each of them raped her terribly.
The poor girl could'nt even scream loudly.
After they got done they threw the unconscious Sanchi on the road side in another place.
Indu who reached there could'nt find Sanchi there.
Indu:Where is this Sanchi?
He tried contacting her.But the phone was switched off due to low battery.He was tensed.

Dr.Poonam,who was Sanchi's closest friend in the hospital had left the hospital driving the car outside. On the way she saw a body lying on the road.
P:A lady's body on the road?

Poonam stepped out of the car walking towards the body.She was shocked to see the body.It was Sanchi.
Poonam took her to the hospital.Indu who was still standing near the hospital failed to see Sanchi as she was in Poonam's car.
Poonam wept.Dr.Prashanth who is Poonam's husband went near her.
Prash:Sanchi is brutally raped by a gang.
Poonam was shocked:What?

After some time Sanchi regained consciousness,but she was numb.
Poonam dialed Indu's number shivering.
P:Hello...Is this Sanchi's husband Indu?
P:I am Dr.Poonam.
I:Hello Dr.Poonam...
P:Indu...please come to our hospital.
I:Why?I am already near the hospital.Sanchi was waiting for me here.But when I reached here I did'nt find her.I am waiting for her here.Is she there inside?
Indu was relieved:Thanks a lot.I was worried for Sanchi.
Poonam burst into tears cutting the call.Prashant tried to console her.
Prash:Poonam...we need to give them strength now.But you are crying?
P:Sanchi was not just a nurse for me.I have always treated her like my own friend.
Prashanth became upset.
Indu reached inside.
Indu:Dr.Poonam...Dr.Prashanth...where is Sanchi?
P:Inside room no.23.
Indu went there.
He saw Sanchi there.
Seeing her physical state Indu's heart beat fast.
His lips shivered:Sanchi...
Sanchi got nervous to face Indu.
I:What happened to you?
Indu tried to ignore him.
He held her:Tell me Sanchi.Any accident?
I:Tell Sanchi.
Sanchi burst out:If it was a terrible accident also I could have tolerated.But this is...
I:What happened?
She cried:I have been raped Indu.
He was shocked.
She explained everything.
Seeing her tears he also cried.He embraced Sanchi.
I:Don't cry Sanchi.I can't bear it.Forget those dark moments.
S:How can I forget everything Indu?I am a woman.For a woman it's impossible to forget such things.I don't deserve to live in this world.I want to die.
I:What are you saying Sanchi?
S:Please don't force me to live.I can't live anymore.
I:Then I will also die.
They shared an emotional eye lock.

After a day Sanchi got discharged.Sanchi and Indu left the hospital.

Prashanth showed a nuptial chain to Poonam.
Pra:I got this from Sanchi's bed.
P:Prashanth...this is Sanchi's chain.We will go and return it to her now.
They went to Sanchi's room.
The door was open.
P:They are so careless.They did'nt even close their door.It's so dangerous.Any disgusting people can come inside.
Prashanth and Poonam got inside.

Sanchi to Indu:Indu...I made poisonous tea.
Indu:Let us drink together Sanchi.I want to die along with you.
San:Let us escape from this ugly world.
They took the cup of tea.Prashanth and Poonam were watching it with shock.
 Prash:Poonam...they are doing a foolish thing.We should stop them.
 Suddenly they snatched the cups from them and threw them down.
Indu-Sanchi were shocked.
Poonam:Just because of someone else's crime you both are committing suicide? was not your fault.You deserve to live in this world.
Prashanth:Indu...instead of giving strength to Sanchi you are supporting her decision to commit suicide?
Indu and Sanchi cried helplessly.
Poon:Those men do not deserve to live.They need to be punished.
Prashanth:Yes.They should get the worst punishment.You both should live for that.
Their words gave some strength to Indu and Sanchi.They looked at each other with determination.
Indu:Sorry...and thanks to both of you for make us understand.From now onwards our intention will be to take revenge on those rapists.
San:Dr.Poonam...I promise that we won't think of suicide again.
Prashanth-Poonam smiled.

They called Police men.
Inspector:Can you identify them?"
Sanchi:Yes,I can identify those beasts.

Finally with Sanchi's help the Police men traced the rapists and they were arrested.
But the proofs were against Sanchi as there was no witness to this incident.So
the court decided to leave them simply.Indu,Sanchi,Poonam and Prashanth were shocked.
Unexpectedly Indu took out a gun from his pocket and shot all of them.
Sanchi screamed:Induuu!
INDU:They tortured my Sanchi.But I could not do anything to protect my Sanchi.The court and laws could not do anything against them.But I can't leave them alone.So I killed them.At least that much I should do for my Sanchi.Right?
Indu cried.Sanchi who was there cried loudly.
Indu wiped his tears suppressing his depression.
INDU:I am willing to accept the punishment the court decides for me.
The Police men took Indu with them.Indu looked at the crying Sanchi.
Indu was carried away by the police men.
Sanchi cried:Induuu!
Poonam and Prashanth tried to pacify Sanchi.
Indu was given 12  years of imprisonment which led Sanchi to depression.But she waited for her Indu's arrival from the jail.
Poonam:Just one moment changed Indu and Sanchi's life.
Prashanth:Pathetic fate for a sweet couple.

The End

In the real life the nurse and her husband committed suicide because of the rape incident.

Edited by jasminerahul - 26 September 2015 at 2:13pm

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zebali IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 September 2015 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
It's amazing os.
Loved it.
Whole work is splanded dear.
Tf pm.
zebali IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2942

Posted: 26 September 2015 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Superb os.
Ind and sanchipoor souls.
But loved the courage they r gonna try to commit a suside.
Very bad sanchi life less spend 12 year.
Ind is back beautiful .
Tf pm.
newmoon18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 September 2015 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Yr u penned it beautiful
Rape is a henious crime
Those b****** should hang to death
Bt in our law nothing hppns
Very few get justice

Bt I loved this one
U really rocked it

Keep smiling
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Posted: 27 September 2015 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Unresed Rahul and Millee part on page 80

Edited by -Dellz- - 27 September 2015 at 12:46am
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Posted: 27 September 2015 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Its really nice
Thanks for the dedication. Kesar couldn't speak English and she was not modern hutted Rudra he kept distance from pained kesar.he tried teaching her English so that she doesn't become a shame to their family. Indira brought Kesar as Rudra's wife.loved Indira and Rishi romance .loved that Rudra realized Kesar's importance in his life,but before expressing itself she fell from the cliff.he was missing her presence.Indira brought a changed Kesar,Rudra liked her new avatar but he likes her old appearance better than her new look as she won his heart before.Kesar is happy that he accepted her.They lived a happy marriage life.

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