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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 68)

coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 24 September 2015 at 2:23am | IP Logged
armaan-riddhimaan os was just superb...
loved it...
armaan killing d goons coz they wer harrassing riddhima.. & got 12 yrs jail...
riddhima supporting armaan throughout... & waiting 4 him...
thnks 4 d pm..
sorry for late comment...

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Posted: 24 September 2015 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
lovely OS
sleeping beauty was always a favourite of mine from childhood
glad Rahul got back his milee
woke her up from her never ending sleep
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 September 2015 at 3:19am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 36(Rudra Kesar,Rishi Indira)

Dedicated to Sydell who wants me to write on Rudra Kesar and Rishi Indira.

Kesar was a traditional girl who did arranged marriage according to her family's wish.
Her husband Rudra married her obeying his dearest sister Indira.
On the wedding day he was impressed with Kesar's beauty.On the decorated bed when they sat together he asked her,
"Which was your subject in college?"
His question made her upset.His conversation in English made her more and more upset.
"I have not completed schooling.I was in hindi medium too".
The shocked Rudra moved away from her leaving her in distress.

That moment onwards there was a distance between them.

Rudra was a husband who failed to see his innocent wife Kesar's pure heart.He did'nt see her good side.For him she was only an uneducated girl.He had always dreamt of a modern wife who speaks good English.But in that aspect Kesar was a complete failure.His ange rtowards her broke her innocent heart and she burst into tears secretly.

She was always clad in traditional Indian attires and was never able to utter a word in English.But to save the family's  reputation he took the responsibility to teach her.He believed that it is a shame for his family to have an uneducated daughter in law.So he took the trouble to teach her.That brought them closer.During that process unknowingly he started feeling for her.He started loving her simplicity.He started loving her long hair plat,patiala salwars and long dangling earrings. 

But unfortunately before revealing his feelings to her,with a shock he realized that he has become too late in moving ahead with his married life.Because an accident snatched her from him.He could'nt even see her dead body.She fell off the cliff.Everyone in their family except Kesar was saved by God.
Days passed.Months passed.It's been one year..but still Kesar's memories have not been erased from his heart.But he suppressed his pain.

Once Rudra saw Indira and her husband Rishi romancing in rain.

Dhage tod lao chandanee se nur ke
Ghunghat hee bana lo roshanee se nur ke) - (2)  
 Sharm aa gayee toh aaghosh me lo
Ho sanson se ulajhee raahe meree saanse
Bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
Honth se halke halke, bol na halke (Jhoom Barabar Jhoom)   He was reminded of Kesar.He felt her absence and cried.
"When she was with me I did'nt give her any love.God punished me for that".

Indira arranged a party on her dearest brother's birthday.
Indira and her husband Rishi brought a cake.
Rudra was not interested.
"Indira...I have always fulfilled all your wishes.But this is too much.I am not in a mood to celebrate my birthday.The worst birthday of my life".
"Why bhai?Your biggest burden was Kesar bhabhi and she has gone forever.So you are supposed to be happy now by celebrating this birthday"Indira asked sarcastically.
Her words tore his heart.But before he could say anything
a modern girl entered their house with a sweet face.
"Happy Birthday Rudraji.."
Everyone looked at her with a shock.Rudra could not believe his eyes.He was really shocked.

That was Kesar.

 " can't be Kesar.Kesar can't wear such modern dresses even in her dreams.Kesar can't speak English with a good accent.But the way she called me...Rudraji..Oh!I'm confused".

Kesar kept smiling at him.
"That innocent smile belongs to only Kesar".Rudra is sure about that.
Indira spoke,"Don't be confused bhai.She is Kesar only".
Rudra is shocked,"Indira?"
Indira revealed the truth,"Yes bhai.Kesar bhabhi is not dead.She is alive.We thought that she is no more.But later i got an information that she was not dead.She was deeply injured and unconscious.You all thought that Rishi and I went to Switzerland for one month.Actually for one month we were with Kesar bhabhi.We stayed there with her through her treatment..She was cured completely".
Rudra was surprised.
Indira said,
"I chose Kesar bhabhi for my bhai as I felt that though she was not educated and stylish like the high class girls we see daily she has a golden heart which can give a lot of love to my bhai.But my bhai did'nt see her heart.My bhai refused to accept her with heart just because she was not stylish and good at English".
Rudra felt guilty.
Indira continued,
"So i felt that before she comes back she should be prepared enough to be your wife.So i entrusted some trustworthy people to give her a make over.That is how she became modern and learnt spoken English.Now i'm sure that you like her.She has become someone you desire for".
Rudra looked at Kesar.She looked emotional.She was waiting to know his reaction about her change.
"Yes,i liked your new look Kesar.You are looking lovely.I'm happy to hear you speak English".
Everyone including Kesar was very happy.Tears dwelled in Kesar's eyes due to happiness.Finally her Rudraji has accepted her.
Rudra looked at Indira and said,"Indira..i never thought that you will fail to understand me.You thought i will accept Kesar only if changes herself?"
Indira was confused.
He continued,"You know..even if she had'nt changed herself also i would have accepted her".
Kesar,Rishi and Indira could'nt believe it.
"I don't know when and how..i had fallen in love with Kesar.But before i could confess my love to her,she met with the accident and..."
They were surprised.Kesar was even more happier to know that Rudra has accepted her as she is.

 He went closer to her.He cupped her face in his hands.
" don't have to change yourself to win my heart.You are good as you are.I'm totally attracted to your personality.You don't have to hide your real identity to get loved by me.Because you have already won my heart".
Kesar did not know how to express her happiness.She felt that she was in a beautuful dream world.
Indira and Rishi were very happy.
"Now it is time to start the celebration.Rudra..come and cut the cake".
Rishi said.
Rudra cut the cake and gave the first piece to Indira.
"This is for you Indira.You are the best.Because you gave me the most wonderful birthday gift..Kesar.."
Indira smiled.
He took the second piece and stood steady for a moment.
Rishi smiled," what your heart says".
Slowly he smiled and moved towards Kesar.Her face glowed.He fed her the cake.
"Thank you Kesar for making my birthday so special".
She smiled,"Actually it is Indiraji who made this occasion special.She only brought me here".
Rudra smiled.
She looked at Indira with wet eyes.Indira hugged Rudra and Kesar.
Rishi hugged Rudra.
Rishi said,
" only you became a real man.The man who sees beauty in his wife's defects and loving her is the real man".
Rudra replied,
"Traditional appearance and not able to speak English are not my Kesar's defects.I realized that".
Rishi smiled.
Rishi and Indira wished them,"We wish you all a happy married life".

 Rudra and Kesar smiled.

The end

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newmoon18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 September 2015 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Beautiful yr
True loves don't need any makeover and language
Very well written
Jayeeta_06 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 September 2015 at 6:54am | IP Logged
awesome os...StarStarStar...Rudra wanted Kesar to change into a modern woman but he fell in love with her...Tongue...but soon lost her...Shocked...Rudra was shattered...Ouch...Indira brought Kesar back to Rudra's life in a new modern avatar...Wink...but Rudra accepted her the way she is...ClapClapClap...loved it...HeartHeartHeart...thank u 4 pm...Big smile...
PriyaSweety-Anu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 September 2015 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Thanks for PM.Smile
It was Amazing Os.Smile
The Whole Os was so Beautifully explained.Smile
Please Write like this.Smile

khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posted: 25 September 2015 at 10:54am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome OS! Well written! Rudra didn't like Kesar initially as she was not modern! bt he fell 4 her! B4 he cld confess she died! Rudra shattered! a year has passed! Rudra lives with her memories bt on his bday she is back in a modern avatar! Rudra says he loves as she was!
coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 26 September 2015 at 7:50am | IP Logged
awesome anant navya story...
holi special...
both had arranged marriage & wer afraid abt others reaction...
finally holi did its magic...
loved anant's confession...
thnks 4 d lovely story...
awesome banner..ClapClap
thnks 4 d pm...

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