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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 65)

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Posted: 19 September 2015 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Amazing story on Akash and Payal
Very Beautifully Written

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Posted: 19 September 2015 at 9:38am | IP Logged
WOW!! beautiful os dear...loved it
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Posted: 19 September 2015 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Its so sweet and awesome thank you for dedicating this part to me .I am really touched .Payash are my favorite couple after Arshi.it was so nice.Payal got allergy .Akash was a doc he insisted to her that why she uses kajal.her eyes are more precious and she used a expiry kajal which her cousin gifted her .Akash gave her injection and she felt effective.he gave her prescribed medicines.Akash told her that her eyes are more beautiful without kajal.she was stingy but she was so happy when her husband akash gave her a kajal.he applied kajal for her .it was sweet.Payash were married .He said that her eyes are her beauty and he even loves her without her kajal.
Payash are indeed my fav couple as they are really sweet and best paired and match each other .I am glad that you wrote on them and written it for me .thank you so much.i will surely write on your given couples also dear.


Edited by -Dellz- - 19 September 2015 at 9:47pm
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Posted: 20 September 2015 at 10:51am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb OS! Well written
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Posted: 20 September 2015 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Excellent work.
Love to see Aki and pa.
Lovely couple.
Shy and romantic.
Tf pm.
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Posted: 20 September 2015 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Not a cupid actually.Payal went to her husband Akash who is also a doctor when she had eye allergy


Originally posted by Jayeeta_06

lovely os...Thumbs Up...the kajal became the cupid for Akash and Payal...ClapClapClap...thank u 4 pm...Big smile...

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Posted: 20 September 2015 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
they were already married.Payal went to meet her husband Akash (Who is a doctor)only when she had eye allergy

Originally posted by newmoon18

Awsme one yr
They r married
Superb chemistry

Keep smiling
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Posted: 21 September 2015 at 12:08am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 34(NK-Lavanya)



NK Lavanya was never a jodi in IPKKND.They did not even meet each other.But the viewers wished to see them as a pair on the show.So in most of the ffs they were a pair.But still they never not a jodi on the show I did'nt think of writing an OS on them.But my friend Sydell requested me to write an OS on them.I could'nt refuse it.


What the gift made her realize...


NK:Hey Lavanya ...I have brought a gift for you.
Lavanya couldn't believe it:Gift?For me?
NK:Why are you so shocked?Do you think that I am not capable enough to gift you?
LAVANYA:No no...nothing like that NK.I am just excited.
NK:Really?Then open my gift and see.
He gave a wrapped gift.

With excitement Lavanya tried to open it.
NK was becoming impatient.
NK:Why are you taking so much of time?You are opening slowly as if the gift wrapper would feel pain.Give it to me.I will open it for you.
Lavanya murmered:The person who gave the gift itself is opening it.Very funny.
NK took it from her and tore it to open it.
Lavanya opened her mouth in 'o' shape.
LAVANYA:You tore it?
NK:So what?It's just a paper.Not the actual gift.
He took out the gift.
Lavanya couldn't believe her eyes.
They were tools to repair bike.

LAVANYA:What is this?
NK:How is my gift?You liked it?I am sure that you are impressed with my gift selection.When you have these tools you don't have to worry about your bike.
Lavanya suppressed her laughter.
She took it back from NK.
He smiled happily and confidently.
La:Usually men gift girlish items like ornaments,dresses and flowers to women.But you gifted me tools.Very funny.
NK was embarrassed.
La: Ok I am going.
NK:Bye.
Lavanya walked away.

While driving the bike she thought of the gift scene and laughed.
LAVANYA:This NK is so funny.Do anyone gift such tools to a girl?He is crazy.
Suddenly her bike got stopped.She tried to start it again.
LAVANYA:Oh!What happened to this bike?Now what will I do?
Suddenly Lavanya was reminded of the tools NK gifted her.
With a smile she took the tools and repaired the bike by herself.
LAVANYA:If I didn't have these tools with me now I would have suffered as there is no work shop near by.
Suddenly she remembered NK.She smiled.
LAVANYA:When NK gifted me these tools I made fun of him.I found him crazy.But actually his gift helped me today.You made my day today NK.I need to thank him now.
Lavanya drove to NK.
NK was stunned to see her back.
NK:You came back?Why?
LAVANYA:I had to come back.Because...
NK:Because...
LAVANYA:Because when I was on the way I realized that I had forgotten to say 'thank you' to you.Thank you NK.I really loved your gift.No one else can give me such a wonderful gift.
NK smiled feeling that he was on cloud 9.
LAVANYA: Today you gave me a gift;the price of which you are not aware of.
NK:I know it's price Lavanya.I only paid it's money.
LAVANYA:No NK.I didn't mean that.What I meant is...while giving me the gift you didn't know by gifting me what a big help you were doing to me and while receiving the gift I didn't know that I was receiving a priceless gift from you.

NK stared at her in confusion.
NK:I don't understand anything Lavanya.
Lavanya looked at him emotionally.
LAVANYA:What I meant is...today once again God made me realize that you are a priceless gift by him. Once again I realized that you are also a part of my life.An inevitable part.

NK was numb.He didn't know how to react.


Both of them looked at each other silently...A long silence...but their silence spoke a lot about their hidden affection towards each other.

LAVANYA:Ok NK.Bye.I am already late.
NK simply nodded as he was still in shock.
Lavanya walked away.NK kept looking at her silently. NK recollected the words she uttered to him...He got the flashes of more  hidden words he saw in her lovely eyes.Slowly a smile appeared on his face.
While driving the bike Lavanya blushed thinking of her moments with NK.

The End

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