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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 57)

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 08 September 2015 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
actually i've seen only a few episodes of DMG.so I duno how to write on the serial.And as far as I know DMG is the story of AR.How can Armaan choose shilpa over riddhima?

Originally posted by sanghita0000

Originally posted by jasminerahul

i had written on arsh too.guess u read it also


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4369939&TPN=47

Originally posted by sanghita0000

WOW!! that was beautiful dear...loved the way Ridz waited for 12 yrs for armaan...Can u write on Armaan-Shilpa? I love this jodi & felt really bad when Shilpa was heartbroken...


Yeah , i read it...but I want something related to the show...Ridz-Armaan-Shilpa love triangle where in the end Armaan chooses Shilpa...Big smile

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Posted: 09 September 2015 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Armaan Riddhima love this couple alot
OS is wonderful
thanx for PM
if u write further on armaan riddhima please PM me
desire_nikki IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 09 September 2015 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
wow...I just loved it..
it was so emotional yet full of love...
good job yr..
do pm me ur work..:)
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Posted: 10 September 2015 at 12:12am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 29(Kunal Siddhi)



I dedicate this os to the SiNal lover Sarim.fatmi









Love at any age


Adv.Kunal was in a dream world.He is in his late 30's.He never felt like getting married as he never felt that connection with any girl.His colleague Adv.Richa loved him madly.Still he could'nt accept her though Adv.Richa was his best friend.Then his heart was struck by his junior Adv.Siddhi.He does'nt know why..Siddhi's simplicity,friendly sweet nature made him fall for her.He was drowned in his love for her.He expressed his love for Siddhi to his best friend Richa.But Richa's reaction was shocking.
R:Are you mad Kunal?I understand that you can't love me.But you did'nt get anyone else other than Siddhi?I mean she is so young.Do you think she will love you back?No way.If she comes to know what he feels for her she will get mad at you.She will make fun of you calling you a middle aged man.
Kunal became upset.
R:Look Kunal...you are doing a big mistake by loving a young girl like Siddhi.So forget the unnecessary thoughts which are going on in your mind.
Kunal became really upset.


Siddhi's presence made him feel very hard to hide his fee;ings for her.One day he burst out.
K:What is this Siddhi?You can't do any work properly?You are not capable of be a good lawyer.So I am firing you.
Siddhi was shocked.She pleaded:
Please don't fire me.I am doing my work with full sincerity.I don't know where I went wrong.Please give me one more chance Sir.

Kunal's heart pained.Hiding it he pretended to be angry:No.Adv.Kunal has only one decision.So get out.


Siddhi left painfully.Her tears caused wounds in Kunal's heart.But he had to hide his pain.



Siddhi is shattered.She spends days by crying.
Siddhi:How could Adv.Kunal do this to me?
She thinks about her lovely moments with him and cries.


Siddhi goes to Kunal's house.
He is shocked:Adv.Siddhi..you..here?
SIDDHI:Yes,Adv.Kunal...you did'nt allow me to talk to you in the court.You ignored me easily.So i thought if i want to meet you i have to come to your house.
KUNAL:Adv.Siddhi...why are you trying to talk to me?I don't want to talk to you.Please don't disturb me.
Siddhi's eyes become wet.
SIDDHI:So i am a disturbance to you?
Kunal becomes really upset seeing Siddhi's wet eyes.But he was helpless.
SIDDHI:You don't want to talk to me.But i want to talk to you.Without talking to you i won't leave this house Adv.Kunal.
KUNAL:Adv.Siddhi...it's night.You have to go home now.
SIDDHI:Adv.Kunal...i won't go without getting an explanation from you.

KUNAL:You come inside Siddhi.
She got inside.
SIDDHI:I want to know why you dismissed me?What mistake did i do?
Kunal kept silent.

Kunal:I told you.You were not doing your job properly.Very poor performance.
SIDDHI:I also believed your words.But then I realized that without even giving a warning Adv.Kunal does'nt dismiss anyone.Tell me Adv.Kunal..why are you keeping silent?Tell me.
He didn't open his mouth.
She raised her voice:I want an answer Adv.Kunal.What was my mistake?
Kunal lost his control:You did'nt do any mistake Siddhi.I dismissed you so that I won't continue doing  any mistake.You are forcing me to do a big mistake.
Siddhi could'nt understand anything.
S:What mistake?
K:I made a mistake by loving you.
Siddhi could'nt believe it.


Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kunal became emotional.
KUNAL: Siddhi...why are you so sweet?Why did you come to my life?Why did you lighten my dark life?Why did you teach me to smile through heart?You did a big mistake by entering my life.


Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera


SIDDHI: Kunal Sir!
KUNAL:If you don't go away from my life i may also do a big mistake by trying to get you.
Siddhi was stunned: Kunal Sir!


Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
KUNAL:You are teaching me to travel through the wrong path Siddhi.I won't allow you to do that.That is why i dismissed you.


Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zaraa
SIDDHI:How did i...?
KUNAL:You made me love you.
Kunal's tears rolled down his cheeks.
Siddhi was surprised.Slowly she smiled.


Ho o.. abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi

KUNAL: Siddhi...i am very much older than you.I don't suit you.So it's better to be away from each other.Otherwise I  will do mistakes.
SIDDHI:No Kunal Sir.If loving each other is a mistake we should do that mistake. Because I love that mistake.

Ho.. dhoop mein jalte huey tann ko
Chhaya perh ki mill gayee
Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise
Phuslaane se phir khill gayee

Kunal was shocked
KUNAL: Siddhi...
Siddhi: Sir...if loving me is a mistake I love that mistake of yours.Because I love being loved by you.

Kuchh aisa hi abb mehsoos dil ko ho rahaa hai
Barso'n ke purane zakhm pe marham laga sa hai

Kunal was stunned.
S:Don't say you are doing a mistake.Say that we are doing a mistake.Because I also love you.

Kuch aisa rahem, iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera

Kunal was shocked:Siddhi!
She kept her finger on his lips.
SIDDHI:Don't say anything more Kunal Sir.You admitted that you love me.It is the most beautiful moment of my life.I would like to enjoy it rather than arguing with you.

Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zara

Kunal was becoming weaker amd weaker in front of Siddhi.
K:Be practical.My age...
S:Loving in middle age is not a crime.Love can happen at any age.I don't care about your age.Because I believe that even in the career we should do things with out heart too.Then why not in love?Love can never be practical.It always comes through heart.
Kunal was numb.
S:I love you...


Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoo'n yaa jee loon zaraa

She rested her head on his shoulder.
He was too weak to resist her touch.
Siddhi smiled looking at his eyes.
Slowly he also smiled.He held her closer.

Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoo'n ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoo'n ya jee loon zara(Agneepath)



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Posted: 10 September 2015 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Nice one
Although I'm not their fan still I like ur writing

Entertaining

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 September 2015 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Nice os.
I like the os only because of ur writing dear.
Nice written.
I never watched the this soap.
But amazing written.
Tf pm.
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Posted: 10 September 2015 at 11:23am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific OS! well written
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Posted: 10 September 2015 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
lovely os...Thumbs Up...Kunal falls in love with Siddhi but due to his age is scared to confess her...Ouch...in order to hide his feelings he throws out Siddhi from his office...Shocked...when Siddhi goes to his house to find the reason behind his action he utters that he loves her...ClapClapClap...Siddhi too confesses her feelings...Dancing...loved it...HeartHeartHeart...thank u 4 pm...Big smile...

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