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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 54)

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Posted: 06 September 2015 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Krishna and Pratigya one was awesome .
Arushi and Pratigya sweet talk was nice 
Pratigya kept a fast for her dream man
She knew her dream man would surely break her fast.
But he didn't come.
The next morning a man arrives and saves her from fainting .That man fed her water and broke her fast .and she told him that he is the one who was his dream man .
He came to know that god has only made them together .
It reminded me of Arshi.
Luv the last part after one year
It was really sweet how you presented it .

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Posted: 06 September 2015 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Amazing OS 
yash jealous by arti's teasing 
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Posted: 06 September 2015 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
by the way thank u jasmine for Dedicated aarya for me
love u dear Hug
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Posted: 06 September 2015 at 6:37pm | IP Logged
Great OS.  Thank you.
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Posted: 06 September 2015 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
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It reminded me of Arnav khushi for Yash Aarti and so did Pratigya and Krishna .But seriously saying Arnav Khushi cannot match anyone .They are one particular Jodi .Which no one can recreate.

Coming to the story specially for you .
Its really nice .
Aarti was teasing Yash .
Hash was feeling jealous.
Out of jealousy he found a taxi with a couple dead he thought it was prateek and aarti .
Aarti was safe so was Prateek
He finally confessed his love .
Love the bangle scene
Her taxi was broken down .
Prateek was trying to help Yash say his feelings .
Aarti looks cute and adorable .

Dear a request .
Please don't try to recreate Arshi scenes with some other couple please use some other concept please .
It reminds me of Arnav Khushi.
In my FF as its about Arnav Khushi and its about Recreating and Continuing Arshi that's y recreated those moments.So dear please don't use Arshi scenes like this .
For Pratigya and Krishna it was not so much just a bit that was 2 falls of unconscious and making her sip water.But in this I truly felt it was Arnav Khushi



Edited by -Dellz- - 07 September 2015 at 7:44am
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Posted: 07 September 2015 at 2:30am | IP Logged
such a lovely OS
especially loved their confession at end
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 07 September 2015 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Wow amazing is.
Pix was great.
Their romance.
Nok jhok was beautiful.
Krish and prit was awesome couple.
They confessed their love for each other golde.
Tf pm.
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Posted: 07 September 2015 at 9:30am | IP Logged
awww...that was so cute...loved the os...
2 brothers is updated...Sorry I forgot to pm u yesterday...phir dimaag ki ghanti baji aaj...

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