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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 40)

--Evil_Angel-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2015 at 1:18am | IP Logged
beautiful os...                           & emotional too...                   He doesnt lyk to express his love but he did food, rain, ear ring...                                    Well written.. !!

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Posted: 25 June 2015 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Sorry for late reply so truely awesome os on sujal n kashish like da way sujal propose kashish one of da best jodi on tv
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Old is gold(OS series on old Tv couples)Episode 21 (Sumit Kumkum)

I dedicate this to Sydell,neeru and Zebali who have chosen Sumit Kumkum as one of their favourite pairs.I dedicate this to
Nisha Kankaraj Preetha who expressed her liking towards Sumit Kumkum.
Dedicating to crazygul who is a huge Hussain fan.

Our eyes

Kumkum..her name was beautiful like the vermillion on the forehead.Her eyes  sang the songs of blissful married life.Anybody who looks at her eyes will fall for her.She has attractive eyes which is filled up with romantic music.The secret of her pretty eyes is Sumeet,her husband.Sumeet filled her heart,mind and eyes with love and music.He is a musician who made Kumkum fall in love.Music flowed from his heart to her eyes.Her eyes always sing romantic songs for him.
'Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi, kismat pe aaye na yakin
utar aayi jheel mein, jaise chaand utarata hai kabhi
houle haule, dheere se
gunguni dhup ki tarah se tarnnum main tum
chhuke mujhe gujari ho yu
dekhu tumhe, ya main sunu
tum ho sukun, tum ho junun
kyun pehle na aayi tum
kaise mujhe tum mil gayi, kismat pe aaye na yakin...{Ghajini}.

Karvachauth day..That was the most significant day in their love story.
That is when Sumeet proposed to her.Kumkum and Sumeet loved each other.But they never confessed to each other even though they were aware of each other's feelings.
The karvachauth night was in full swing.Sumeet and Kumkum fasted for each other even before they confessed their love to each other.Sumeet and Kumkum realized that the other person is fasting.
Kumkum asked Sumeet,
"Sumeet,why did'nt you eat anything?Are you fasting for anyone?".
He smiled quietly.
"Kumkum...first you tell me why did you fast?"
She blushed silently.
Sumit asked cutely,
"Kumkum...are you fasting for me".
Kumkum raised her eye brows and looked at him.
Sumeet smiled looking deeply at her eyes.
"Kumkum...I love you".
She blushed.She did'nt take much time to answer .
"I love you too Sumeet".
They both could not express their happiness due to over excitement.
Kumkum looked viewed the moon first

and then Sumeet's face through the sieve.

Sumeet fed her morsels.
Kumkum broke his fast too.
 Unexpectedly he pulled her towards him.
"Sumeet..what are you doing?People will see".
Kumkum was nervous.
"I'm not bothered.Let others see our look very ravishing in this traditional Indian dress.You look very pretty ".
She blushes.
Like she feared,everyone saw their open romance.They stared at them.But nothing stopped Sumeet.
"I love Kumkum.I want to marry her".
He did'nt hesitate to tell it openly.
Surprisingly things moved smooth.Nobody went against their wish.Everyone blessed them.Sumeet-Kumkum got married.
After marriage it is their first karvachauth. Sumeet showed the shiny moon to Kumkum.
"Kumkum..see the shiny bright moon.The moon is witnessing our love".
She smiles,"I also feel that the beautiful moon is watching our romance".
Sumeet looked deeply into her face.
"The moon is thinking how beautiful you are.You are beautiful like this moon".
She blushed.
Sumeet sang for her,
"Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,
Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,
Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai
Madhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai,
Haan Ye Sama, Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,
Han Han Han Chand Chupa..."{Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam}.
Kumkum is mesmerised by his sweet music.
They broke each other's fast.

They did'nt know that their dreams are going to shatter very easily.
After the Karvachauth function,Kumkum stepped out of the area only to put her life in danger.The fate stored something terrible for her.A lorry hit her car. But she remained in the ventilator.Sumeet's prayers and tears saved Kumkum's life.But their misery continued.Kumkum was not same anymore.She had lost her eye sight.The most attractive part of her has left her forever.Her glittering eyes lost life.
Sumeet's tears fell on her.She burst into tears.
"Sumeet...please go away.Don't shed tears for me.Don't waste your life for a blind girl".
Her heart was bleeding while saying this.
" could you think that i can leave you.I love you.I will love you forever.I can't leave you like that".
Kumkum's eyes seemed to be an ocean because of the tears.
"What are you saying Sumeet?I can't see anything.I have no eyes".
"Don't say like that.You have eyes.My eyes are for you.You have eyesight.You can see things through my eyes.I have no right on my eyes.My eyes are your eyes.Now onwards my eyes are not just my eyes,but our eyes".

Kumkum bursts into tears again.Sumeet caressed her.She rested her head on his chest.

 The end

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Renu_S IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 June 2015 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
One of my fav jodis Heart..thxs for this...Thumbs Up
--Janvie-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 June 2015 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
Ok I just got time to read...Sujal-Kashish one...And Man I love you for that...Muaah.!!HugAmazing Yaar.!!Mujhe puraane din yaad aa gaye.!!Cry Heart Cry
First of all,I loved how you used thoda sa pyaar hua hai on them,That adds to their touch,I forgot to request you last time to use this song also while writing on Sujal-Kashish...But you did it yourself.!!LOLThis song belongs to them.!!Heart
Their banter in that os was cute and realistic,just how they both would have fighted.!!LOLI mean It was so Kashish being mean and so Sujal being passionate and also getting her at place with his verbal vaar.!!Wink LOL LOLIt was so Sujal-Kashish.!!Clap Clap   Star StarI loved this OS sho much...Thanks alot for writing it...!!Hug Hug
--Janvie-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 June 2015 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
I know you wrote the Abhiya one...But Didn't got time to read it before...I only readed the Arjuhi one in excitement.!!LOL
Ok I loved it...The Abhiya OS is sho cute...Rain Rain Everywhere...Didn't they caught cold?!LOLI loved their first meeting too much.!!Day Dreaming Heart Embarrassed    HeartI don't remember any Abhiya scene in rainErmm being a mad fan of themEmbarrassedBut I loved this Rainy os too much.!!Muaah.!!Heart Embarrassed HeartThanks alot for writing on them.!!Hug

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suhaaana IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 June 2015 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
sumit and kumkum
ohh I loved them

awesome os
Nichuss IF-Addictz

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Posted: 25 June 2015 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
awww   beautiful lovestory...
romantic start to romantic tragedy...

i started watching kumkum frm sumit marrying kk...
i m still unaware hw sumit end up marrying kk...

frm then it was a new romantic world to start...
no one hv tried this befr... devar-bhabhi relation
to turn to most beautiful couples...

sumit-kk relation went thru lots f hurdles... which
made thr relation soo strong...

jasmine nice os n gud try... likedit... eyes sharing to kk

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