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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 30)

PriyaSweety-Anu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Thanks for PM.Smile
It was Amazing Ending.Smile
The whole part was so Beautifully explained.Smile
Please write like this.Smile

cuteariya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
it was lovely update Heart
loll uday flat on manyata on first site LOL
uff manyata chatter box ROFL
happy ending Heart
cuteariya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
I love abhiya arjuhi manveer kavyanjali & pratham & gauri Heart Heart
they r my most favorite Jodi of TV Heart Heart
can u plz write on ariya virika & aarya? Day Dreaming Day Dreaming
im die hard fan of them also Big smile Big smile
--Janvie-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
I love Arjuhi...Heart Heart   Heart Heart HeartLoved the Arjuhi os...especially the pics you used were so beautiful.!!Day DreamingThe Rose theme was fantastic...And I simply loved and was blushing so hard when Arjun said We'll make the bed more beautiful.!!Wink ROFLYou are an Amazing Writer Man...Hopefully I'll read the Abhiya one soon...!!Embarrassed

Edited by --Janvie-- - 17 June 2015 at 4:38pm
--Janvie-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
Can you plz write one on Sujal-Kashish and KaSh also as in ArSh plz...?!Smile Embarrassed

Edited by --Janvie-- - 17 June 2015 at 5:41pm
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 June 2015 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 17(Prem Mukti)

 Dedicated to Jayeeta_06 and Sanjana4Rajeev who like Prem-Mukti


 Love with heart


Prem-Riddhima are the students in the same college.They fight and love each other.

A morning...

College class room...

Prem runs to Mukti:.He is sweating.
MUKTI:What happened Prem?Why are you sweating?
He is panting a lot.
PREM:I came running to give you an exciting news.A hot teacher has arrived.
She laughs.
MUKTI:You are crazy.You are telling your girlfriend about the new hot teacher?Disgusting.
PREM:Come on...take it easy.
MUKTI:No..i can't.Get lost...
PREM:Excuse me...why should i?This is my classroom also.
Mukt: is angry.She keeps silent.

The new teacher enters the class.All the guys are looking at her.
She is conscious of that.So she smiles:Why are you guys staring at me?You guys have no girlfriends?
The boys look down silently.
She:I'm sure that you have girlfriends.So look at your girlfriends and please don't look at me like this.I'm married.

Mukti smiles in a funny manner looking at Prem.He gets irritated.The guys are embarrassed.

Prem goes to Mukti:.She pretends to be studying.
PREM:To show off you are studying?I know that you can't study seriously like this.Otherwise you would'nt have failed in the last semester.
She is embarrassed.
PREM:Stop this fight and let's party.
MUKTI:Party?For what?To celebrate the arrival of the hot teacher.
Mukti is irritated and she is about to hit him.Prem runs away laughing.Mukti runs after him.

Prem and Mukti went to the dance club dancing to the song.
They dance together.
While dancing unknowingly they get intimate.
The shy Mukti moves away.
Prem goes and gets a drink for himself.

P:You want to take a sip?


Prem drinks it.

Prem is stares at her eyes.Mukti feels strange.He has'nt looked at her like this before.
MUKTI:Prem...why are you looking at me like this?

jane hai kesa devana pan
devana pan

Prem keeps his finger on  her lips:Don't say anything now...
He goes closer to her.

kabhi na sakun aya kabhi na karar aya jab se hai tum pe mujko pyar aya
Both of them forget themselves.They can't resist their emotions.They take a room and crossed all the limits there.

The next day...

Mukti can't concentrate on the lectures given in their class.Prem looks at her.She seems to be tired and gloomy.

Prem sees her sitting under a tree.
She cries and tries to walk away.He holds her hand.
PREM:Why are you crying?
MUKTI:You act as if you don't know anything.We both sinned yesterday...
Prem smiles:Still you are sad about yesterday's incident?That was our love.
MUKTI:No...that was a was a sin.
PREM:Why do you think so?Many lovers of our college have experienced it.
MUKTI:So what?I'm very conservative.I can't take it easy.It's my fault.I don't know how i surrendered to you.
She cries.
PREM:Anyways..we are getting married.So this so called sin will become a sweet truth.

He wipes her tears.


Weeks pass...


Mukti goes to Prem:Prem..there is an important thing.
PREM:What's the matter Mukti:?You look so upset.
MUKTI:I think I'm pregnant.I missed my periods.
PREM:What?Oh!But how can you just confirm it just because your perioids did'nt start?May be it's depayed.

Muk:I am scared.

Prem:We will buy a pregnancy kit and test.

They buy a pregnancy kit and did testing.

It came positive.They are shattered.Mukti bursts into tears.

Prem:I never expected this.
MUKTI:What shall we do?
PREM:What a question you are asking me?Use your common sense... Abort the child.
Mukti is shocked:Prem!I'm carrying your baby.You are telling me to kill your own baby?
PREM:Mukti:...try to understand...we are studying...we can't think of marriage now.Then how can we produce a baby now?
MUKTI:But we are doing Post graduation.That means court will permit our marriage.We both are 22.

Prem:What rubbish Mukti!We need to build up our career first.If you are not career minded it is fine.But I want my career settled before I get married.So do abortion.

Muk:No Prem..I will not kill the baby.
PREM:If that is your decision,you don't expect me to be with you.
He is adamant.Riddhima is shocked.

Mukti thinks:No...i can't lose Prem.I will do anything to gain him.I will have an abortion.
She rings up Prem:I'm sorry Prem.I will do abortion soon.
He smiles.
MUKTI:I'm doing it only for you.I'm killing our baby only to win you.Because i can't live without you.I will die if i lose you.
He becomes upset.

Mukti is in the hospital for abortion. She is depressed.She touches her stomach and weeps.

Muk:Sorry baby,as your father does'nt want you your mumma is forced to be cruel to you.

Suddenly somebody touches her shoulder.She turns back.She is shocked.

It is Prem.

PREM:Yes...You are here for abortion.Right?
MUKTI says painfully:Yes...
PREM:No need of doing that.

Mukti can't believe it:What?
PREM:No need of doing something against your wish for me...I'm always there with you.You don't sin to win my heart.I want you and our baby.
kabhi na sakun aya
kabhi na karar aya
jab se hai tum pe
mujko pyar aya, pyar aya
Mukti weeps:Prem!

Prem:Till now I thought with brain.So the decision was wrong.Now I followed my heart and my decision is right now.Your pain taught me to love with heart.We will get married in a week.Our parents know our relationship and they will be happy if we get married soon.

tu tasuvur mein mere to hi baaton mein
tu afsane mein mere tu hi yaadon mein

Mukti can't believe it:Prem!Thank you so much.I love you.
She weeps.Prem is upset seeing her tears.
kabhi na sakun aya
kabhi na karar aya
jabse hai tumpe mjko pyar aya

Prem:Sorry for hurting you Mukti.I promise you that  I will never let your eyes wet again.

She smiles.He wipes her tears.
bekarari bhari kab kese yai dil na samaj na paye
badla badla lage yai alam anjana nasha chaye

tehri zamee tehara hai pal,
maan mein machi kyun halchal
sub kuch alag sa lagne laga
yai dard kesa jagne laga jagne laga
Prem:Let us go for the weddng shopping and we need to invite my college mates and even our hot teacher for our wedding.

Muk:What?You want the hot teacher to be there at the wedding also?So mean..

She gives him a kick and they both laugh.
kabhi na sakun aya kabhi na karar aya
jab se hai tumpe mjko pyar aya(Koi Aap Sa )

The End

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newmoon18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 June 2015 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Superb os
I'm not a prem mukhti fan bt the story was lovely
Beautifully written
Loved it
Keep smiling
Jayeeta_06 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 12 September 2013
Posts: 19260

Posted: 18 June 2015 at 6:51am | IP Logged
awesome os...StarStarStar...Prem Mukti love each other and in a party crossed all limits...ShockedEmbarrassed...Mukti became pregnant and Prrem said to abort their baby...Ouch...Mukti agreed as she din't want to lose him...Cry...finally Prem agreed and he asked Mukti not to abort it...ClapClapClap...loved it...HeartHeartHeart...thank u 4 pm...Big smile...thanks for dedicating it to me...Hug...

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