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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva - Page 29

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Posted: 8 years ago
thanku for the pm dear😛
wats ur name?
m surbhi
u call me sue😉
sry li'll busy now...
will read it in 2 days😃
so ressy here...😳

unres😃
this one was


actually more than awesome😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow ...it's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, flawless and mind blowing update...Just loved it...Beautiful...marvelous..and thanks for the pm..and plss do write more on arsh i am a big fan of this couple...please wrte long story on arsh a ff and that to romantic or unhe alag mat krna
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Posted: 8 years ago
WOW!! what a beautiful story...Loved their last moments together...Armaan finally realised her worth...
Can u write a story on dil mil gaye track where Armaan-shilpa fell for each other & he chose Shilpa over Riddhima...I really hated how CV broke Shilpa's heart...
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DMG was one of my favourite serials on Star One ..

I liked all the three Ridhimas but I liked KSG n Shilpa the most..

U wrote such an emotional OS..
N made me cry..😭

Well-written Os 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
such a sad OS
although I love stories with Armaan n shilpa in
at least he fulfilled her last wishes b4 she died
n he has some sweet memories to remember her by
just now he is feeling guilty from all he said to her in anger in past
but his last acts let her die happy
so sad thinking about death
need happy OS next to cheer me up
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful os.
Thanks for the pm.
Keep on sending them.
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beautiful os...                           & emotional too...                   He doesnt lyk to express his love but he did food, rain, ear ring...                                    Well written.. !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for late reply so truely awesome os on sujal n kashish like da way sujal propose kashish one of da best jodi on tv
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Old is gold(OS series on old Tv couples)Episode 21 (Sumit Kumkum)



I dedicate this to Sydell,neeru and Zebali who have chosen Sumit Kumkum as one of their favourite pairs.I dedicate this to
Nisha Kankaraj Preetha who expressed her liking towards Sumit Kumkum.
Dedicating to crazygul who is a huge Hussain fan.





Our eyes



Kumkum..her name was beautiful like the vermillion on the forehead.Her eyes  sang the songs of blissful married life.Anybody who looks at her eyes will fall for her.She has attractive eyes which is filled up with romantic music.The secret of her pretty eyes is Sumeet,her husband.Sumeet filled her heart,mind and eyes with love and music.He is a musician who made Kumkum fall in love.Music flowed from his heart to her eyes.Her eyes always sing romantic songs for him.
'Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi, kismat pe aaye na yakin
utar aayi jheel mein, jaise chaand utarata hai kabhi
houle haule, dheere se
gunguni dhup ki tarah se tarnnum main tum
chhuke mujhe gujari ho yu
dekhu tumhe, ya main sunu
tum ho sukun, tum ho junun
kyun pehle na aayi tum
kaise mujhe tum mil gayi, kismat pe aaye na yakin...{Ghajini}.

Karvachauth day..That was the most significant day in their love story.
That is when Sumeet proposed to her.Kumkum and Sumeet loved each other.But they never confessed to each other even though they were aware of each other's feelings.
The karvachauth night was in full swing.Sumeet and Kumkum fasted for each other even before they confessed their love to each other.Sumeet and Kumkum realized that the other person is fasting.
Kumkum asked Sumeet,
"Sumeet,why did'nt you eat anything?Are you fasting for anyone?".
He smiled quietly.
"Kumkum...first you tell me why did you fast?"
She blushed silently.
Sumit asked cutely,
"Kumkum...are you fasting for me".
Kumkum raised her eye brows and looked at him.
Sumeet smiled looking deeply at her eyes.
"Kumkum...I love you".
She blushed.She did'nt take much time to answer .
"I love you too Sumeet".
They both could not express their happiness due to over excitement.
Kumkum looked viewed the moon first

and then Sumeet's face through the sieve.

Sumeet fed her morsels.
Kumkum broke his fast too.
 Unexpectedly he pulled her towards him.
"Sumeet..what are you doing?People will see".
Kumkum was nervous.
"I'm not bothered.Let others see our love.Well..you look very ravishing in this traditional Indian dress.You look very pretty ".
She blushes.
Like she feared,everyone saw their open romance.They stared at them.But nothing stopped Sumeet.
"I love Kumkum.I want to marry her".
He did'nt hesitate to tell it openly.
Surprisingly things moved smooth.Nobody went against their wish.Everyone blessed them.Sumeet-Kumkum got married.
After marriage it is their first karvachauth. Sumeet showed the shiny moon to Kumkum.
"Kumkum..see the shiny bright moon.The moon is witnessing our love".
She smiles,"I also feel that the beautiful moon is watching our romance".
Sumeet looked deeply into her face.
"The moon is thinking how beautiful you are.You are beautiful like this moon".
She blushed.
Sumeet sang for her,
"Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,
Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,
Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai
Madhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai,
Haan Ye Sama, Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,
Han Han Han Chand Chupa..."{Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam}.
Kumkum is mesmerised by his sweet music.
They broke each other's fast.


They did'nt know that their dreams are going to shatter very easily.
After the Karvachauth function,Kumkum stepped out of the area only to put her life in danger.The fate stored something terrible for her.A lorry hit her car. But she remained in the ventilator.Sumeet's prayers and tears saved Kumkum's life.But their misery continued.Kumkum was not same anymore.She had lost her eye sight.The most attractive part of her has left her forever.Her glittering eyes lost life.
Sumeet's tears fell on her.She burst into tears.
"Sumeet...please go away.Don't shed tears for me.Don't waste your life for a blind girl".
Her heart was bleeding while saying this.
"Kumkum...how could you think that i can leave you.I love you.I will love you forever.I can't leave you like that".
Kumkum's eyes seemed to be an ocean because of the tears.
"What are you saying Sumeet?I can't see anything.I have no eyes".
"Don't say like that.You have eyes.My eyes are for you.You have eyesight.You can see things through my eyes.I have no right on my eyes.My eyes are your eyes.Now onwards my eyes are not just my eyes,but our eyes".

Kumkum bursts into tears again.Sumeet caressed her.She rested her head on his chest.

 The end




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Posted: 8 years ago
One of my fav jodis ❤️..thxs for this...👍🏼