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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 19)

khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 11:14am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! well written

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Nice os
live it
thank u thank u so much for writting os on them
they are my most favourite jodi
miss anurag and prerana
once again thanx
pakpearl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 June 2015 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Thank u so much...

I like Anurag n Prerna a lot..
Ilike Ronit Roy a lot but I hated Mr,Bajaj..
I was never impressed by his repentance/redemption..

It was quite a nice OS..
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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 11 (Robbie Kasturi,Shyam-Radha)
Love will find a way

I dedicate this to The_Imane ,Sydell,shumi,Meerab who love Robbie Kasturi.

It was a winter evening...
It was for his sweet heart Kasturi that Robbie brought her to the jungle.
Both hit a rock and fell down hurting their forehead.
Robbie looked at Kasturi and held her shoulder:Are you ok Kasturi?Is it painful?
Kas:No.And your condition?
She caressed his wound.
He smiled.
Robbie:No pain at all as your caressed my wound.
She smiled.
Robbie:But why were you so adamant about coming here Kasturi?See...we both got hurt.
KASTURI:Not a problem.It's a minor injury.This jungle remains close to my heart.It was during a winter season in this jungle that we met each for the first time and you made me your princess.
He smiled:You are the princess of my heart.


His dimpled smile costed even more than hundred million dollars.
She drowned in his smile as usual.

They found a hut for themselves.

Robbie sat waiting for his sweet heart.Kasturi came out of the hut.Her hair was wet as she took a cool bath.


La, la la la la la, la la la la la la la La, la la la la, la la la la la 

They sat together near the hearth.


Robbie could not take his eyes off her.


Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan



She blushed.
KASTURI:Robbie...You are staring at me.

O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah

Robbie rolled his eyes deeply on her.

Robbie:Even in the simplest outfit you are so beautiful Kasturi...more beautiful than this winter.

She blushed.


 La la la la la, la la la la la



She became naughty and went towards Robbie.She put her hair forward flashing the little water drops from her hair on his face.It aroused sensuous feelings in him.He put his arms on her shoulder.They both were lost in each other.

Main aawaaz hoon to tu hai geet mera - 2
Jahan se niraala manmeet mera


She closed her eyes when his fingers pampered her soft pinkish face.

 Mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah



Her heart beat fast drowning in him.


Phir ho na judaa,
haan yeh vaada raha
Tu tu hai vohi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza

The next morning...
They roamed around in the jungle.Seeing a lake,Kasturi could'nt control herself and she jumped into it.
ROBBIE:Kasturi...the water must be very cold.You will fall sick.Why did you jump into the water? know that i can't control myself when I see water.
Suddenly Kasturi cried loudly:Robbie!
She was drowning...


 Robbie was shocked:What happened sweet heart?
KASTURI:It's very deep.
She sank.She disappeared.
Robbie was shattered:Kasturi!
He jumped into the water.
Suddenly she appeared in the water laughing.

ROBBIE was petrified:Kasturi..are you ok?
She kept laughing.
ROBBIE:You were fooling me?Do you know what i felt for a moment?

I thought i lost you.You are my breath Kasturi.If you had gone i would have died letting me drown in this water even though i know swimming.
Kasturi became upset:I am sorry Robbie.It was just a prank.
He cupped her face in his hands:Please don't do such pranks.It will kill me.

He was very emotional.
Kisi mod pe bhi na yeh saath toote
Mere haath se tera daaman na chhoote

She nodded her head emotionally.
Kasturi:I promise you Robbie.I will never do such pranks.
La la, la la la, la la la
Kabhi khwaab mein bhi tu mujhse na roothe
Mere pyaar ki koi khushiyaan na loote


They smiled.

He took her to the shore.
She was wiping her wet face.He was lost in her.She blushed.
ROBBIE:I can't control myself when I see you wet.
She blushed letting her wet hair's water drops fall on his face.
He carried her in his arms.
Mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha(Yeh Vada Raha ).


Robbie woke up from his sleep with a smile.


Robbie's sister Radha and her husband Shyam came. look so happy today.


Robbie:Radha...I saw a dream.Kasturi is a prankster.


Hearing Kasturi's name itself Radha's face became gloomy.


B:Do you know what prank she played on me?In order to scare me she pretended to be drowning in the lake.I got scared.I thought I lost her.But thank God...I saved her.Then she laughed and told me that it was only a prank.Kasturi is so mischievous.


Radha lost her control.


Radha:Stop it Bhai.Don't say that it was a dream.It was reality.A real incident which happened 2 months back.


Robbie's face went dim.

Shyam held her hand in order to stop him.

Radha:No Shyam.Today you can't stop me.

Radha:And the truth is that Kasturi was not playing a prank on you.She really drowned.And you could'nt save her.


Radha's eyes got filled with tears.


Radha:And you lost Kasturi forever.


Robbie's heart was pricked by her words.


Radha:You know what the truth is.Still you are not willing to accept the truth.You are making a fool out of yourself by imagining that it was Kasturi's prank on you and you saved her.Purposefully you are trying to believe that your dream is true.No Bhai...Come back to your senses.What ever you imagine,the fact is that Kasturi is not there in this world anymore.Accept the fact and break the shell of your dream world.


Tears dwelled in Robbie's eyes.Radha was helpless as she knew that she would not be able to wipe her brother's endless tears as Kasturi was his life.


Robbie had lost himself.Tears rolled down his cheeks silently.Robbie knew that he had lost his Kasturi.Still he loved to believe that the tragedy which took place 2 months back was only a nightmare.Because he knew that without Kasturi...without her sweet memories he would not be able to live.


Radha was scared to see his numbness.


Her lips shivered:Bhai!


Suddenly Robbie burst into tears.


A sudden outburst...flow of tears...


He screamed loudly:Kasturiii!


His tears flowed like the water flow in the lake...the water flow which took his Kasturi to the world of death.

Radha got nervous seeing her brother's condition.


Shyam:Radha...Robbie was living in the world of illusion with his love Kasturi.He was happy there.But you broke his happiness.

Radha wept:I did that to bring him back to reality.

Shyam:But he is shattered completely.

Radha burst into tears:Bhai...

Shyam tried to console her:Radha...As a psychiatrist I assure you that he will recover.But it will take some time.But till then let him live happily with his memories.The only beautiful memories he has to live.His Kasturi...

Radha shed tears seeing Robbie crying loudly and roaming around madly without being able to accept the bitter truth.Radha hugged her brother.

Robbie:Did Kasturi...?
Jaaniye.. heeriye..
Jaaniye heeriye

Radha:No bhai.Kasturi's disappearance is only his prank.She will come back to you soon.

Like an innocent kid who has hopes of getting a d0ll he asked,

"My Kasturi will come.Right?"
Mere man yeh bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu

Radha nodded her head tearfully:Yes.

Robbie rested his head on her lap with a cute smile waiting for his Kasturi.
Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhoond raha hai tu
Again Robbie flew to his imaginary world where his Kasturi is alive.
Jo hai ankahee
Jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa(KANK).
Shyam:Love will find a way.Robbie has found to be in his imaginary world to be with his love.
The end

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Posted: 06 June 2015 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Beautiful story. Thanks for pm me. 
heemasomani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 June 2015 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS 
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Posted: 06 June 2015 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Lovely os

Loved it

Keep smiling
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Posted: 06 June 2015 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Thanks for PM.Smile
It was So lovely OS.Smile
The whole part was so Beautifully explained.Smile

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