Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva - Page 14

Posted: 8 years ago
Thank u so much...

Yeah,,
I like Anurag n Prerna a lot..
Ilike Ronit Roy a lot but I hated Mr,Bajaj..
I was never impressed by his repentance/redemption..

It was quite a nice OS..
Posted: 8 years ago
Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 11 (Robbie Kasturi,Shyam-Radha)
Love will find a way

I dedicate this to The_Imane ,Sydell,shumi,Meerab who love Robbie Kasturi.



It was a winter evening...
It was for his sweet heart Kasturi that Robbie brought her to the jungle.
Both hit a rock and fell down hurting their forehead.
Robbie looked at Kasturi and held her shoulder:Are you ok Kasturi?Is it painful?
Kas:No.And your condition?
She caressed his wound.
He smiled.
Robbie:No pain at all as your caressed my wound.
She smiled.
Robbie:But why were you so adamant about coming here Kasturi?See...we both got hurt.
KASTURI:Not a problem.It's a minor injury.This jungle remains close to my heart.It was during a winter season in this jungle that we met each for the first time and you made me your princess.
He smiled:You are the princess of my heart.


 

His dimpled smile costed even more than hundred million dollars.
She drowned in his smile as usual.

They found a hut for themselves.

Robbie sat waiting for his sweet heart.Kasturi came out of the hut.Her hair was wet as she took a cool bath.

 

La, la la la la la, la la la la la la la La, la la la la, la la la la la 

 
They sat together near the hearth.

 


Robbie could not take his eyes off her.

 

Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan

 

 

She blushed.
KASTURI:Robbie...You are staring at me.

O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah


Robbie rolled his eyes deeply on her.

Robbie:Even in the simplest outfit you are so beautiful Kasturi...more beautiful than this winter.




She blushed.

 

 La la la la la, la la la la la

 

 


She became naughty and went towards Robbie.She put her hair forward flashing the little water drops from her hair on his face.It aroused sensuous feelings in him.He put his arms on her shoulder.They both were lost in each other.

 
Main aawaaz hoon to tu hai geet mera - 2
Jahan se niraala manmeet mera
 

 

She closed her eyes when his fingers pampered her soft pinkish face.

 Mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah

 

 


Her heart beat fast drowning in him.

 


Phir ho na judaa,
haan yeh vaada raha
Tu tu hai vohi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza

The next morning...
They roamed around in the jungle.Seeing a lake,Kasturi could'nt control herself and she jumped into it.
ROBBIE:Kasturi...the water must be very cold.You will fall sick.Why did you jump into the water?
KASTURI:Robbie...you know that i can't control myself when I see water.
ROBBIE:Oh!
Suddenly Kasturi cried loudly:Robbie!
She was drowning...

 

 Robbie was shocked:What happened sweet heart?
KASTURI:It's very deep.
She sank.She disappeared.
Robbie was shattered:Kasturi!
He jumped into the water.
Suddenly she appeared in the water laughing.

ROBBIE was petrified:Kasturi..are you ok?
She kept laughing.
ROBBIE:You were fooling me?Do you know what i felt for a moment?

 
I thought i lost you.You are my breath Kasturi.If you had gone i would have died letting me drown in this water even though i know swimming.
Kasturi became upset:I am sorry Robbie.It was just a prank.
He cupped her face in his hands:Please don't do such pranks.It will kill me.

He was very emotional.
Kisi mod pe bhi na yeh saath toote
Mere haath se tera daaman na chhoote

She nodded her head emotionally.
Kasturi:I promise you Robbie.I will never do such pranks.
La la, la la la, la la la
Kabhi khwaab mein bhi tu mujhse na roothe
Mere pyaar ki koi khushiyaan na loote
 

 

 
They smiled.

He took her to the shore.
She was wiping her wet face.He was lost in her.She blushed.
ROBBIE:I can't control myself when I see you wet.
She blushed letting her wet hair's water drops fall on his face.
He carried her in his arms.
Mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha(Yeh Vada Raha ).
...

 

Robbie woke up from his sleep with a smile.

 

Robbie's sister Radha and her husband Shyam came.

Radha:Bhai...you look so happy today.

 

Robbie:Radha...I saw a dream.Kasturi is a prankster.

 

Hearing Kasturi's name itself Radha's face became gloomy.

 

B:Do you know what prank she played on me?In order to scare me she pretended to be drowning in the lake.I got scared.I thought I lost her.But thank God...I saved her.Then she laughed and told me that it was only a prank.Kasturi is so mischievous.

 

Radha lost her control.

 

Radha:Stop it Bhai.Don't say that it was a dream.It was reality.A real incident which happened 2 months back.

 

Robbie's face went dim.

Shyam held her hand in order to stop him.

Radha:No Shyam.Today you can't stop me.

Radha:And the truth is that Kasturi was not playing a prank on you.She really drowned.And you could'nt save her.

 

Radha's eyes got filled with tears.

 

Radha:And you lost Kasturi forever.

 

Robbie's heart was pricked by her words.

 

Radha:You know what the truth is.Still you are not willing to accept the truth.You are making a fool out of yourself by imagining that it was Kasturi's prank on you and you saved her.Purposefully you are trying to believe that your dream is true.No Bhai...Come back to your senses.What ever you imagine,the fact is that Kasturi is not there in this world anymore.Accept the fact and break the shell of your dream world.

 

Tears dwelled in Robbie's eyes.Radha was helpless as she knew that she would not be able to wipe her brother's endless tears as Kasturi was his life.

 

Robbie had lost himself.Tears rolled down his cheeks silently.Robbie knew that he had lost his Kasturi.Still he loved to believe that the tragedy which took place 2 months back was only a nightmare.Because he knew that without Kasturi...without her sweet memories he would not be able to live.

 

Radha was scared to see his numbness.

 

Her lips shivered:Bhai!

 

Suddenly Robbie burst into tears.

 

A sudden outburst...flow of tears...

 

He screamed loudly:Kasturiii!

 

His tears flowed like the water flow in the lake...the water flow which took his Kasturi to the world of death.

Radha got nervous seeing her brother's condition.

Radha:Bhai!

Shyam:Radha...Robbie was living in the world of illusion with his love Kasturi.He was happy there.But you broke his happiness.

Radha wept:I did that to bring him back to reality.

Shyam:But he is shattered completely.

Radha burst into tears:Bhai...

Shyam tried to console her:Radha...As a psychiatrist I assure you that he will recover.But it will take some time.But till then let him live happily with his memories.The only beautiful memories he has to live.His Kasturi...

Radha shed tears seeing Robbie crying loudly and roaming around madly without being able to accept the bitter truth.Radha hugged her brother.

Robbie:Did Kasturi...?
Jaaniye.. heeriye..
Jaaniye heeriye

Radha:No bhai.Kasturi's disappearance is only his prank.She will come back to you soon.

Like an innocent kid who has hopes of getting a d0ll he asked,

"My Kasturi will come.Right?"
Mere man yeh bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu


Radha nodded her head tearfully:Yes.

Robbie rested his head on her lap with a cute smile waiting for his Kasturi.
Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhoond raha hai tu
 
Again Robbie flew to his imaginary world where his Kasturi is alive.
 
Jo hai ankahee
Jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa..
Kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa..
Yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa(KANK).
 
Shyam:Love will find a way.Robbie has found to be in his imaginary world to be with his love.
 
The end
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful story. Thanks for pm me. 
Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely os

Loved it

Keep smiling
Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM.😊
It was So lovely OS.😊
The whole part was so Beautifully explained.😊
                                                                            PriyaCherry.   
Posted: 8 years ago
epi 10
lovely os
Anurag and Prerna both upset about their fight
liked how both were feeling bad for the other
n wanted to make the other happy again
 
epi 11
oh my god
started off as a lovely romance
with a couple returning to the place where they meet reliving their happy moments
but then the blow it was Robbies illusion
he had really lost his love Kasturi
n was living in a delusion to be with her
so sad
 
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
Edited by Heatsha8176 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
lovely os...👍🏼...Robbie and Kasturi's sweet moments were adorable...👏👏👏...but shocked to know that it was just a dream of him...😲...in reality Kasturi is dead and Robbie is living in the dreams of her......Radha is not able to see Robbie's condition but on Shyam's advice lets him live in fantasy...😔...so sad...😭...thank u 4 pm...😃...
Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Jasmine! as i promised here i am🤗...first of all thank you so much for the dedication😃..just read monsoon love story of Abhya and Pia ...enjoyed reading it. loved the concept and the narration. OMG! your writing style is very much improved it is too good too. keep writing dear.👏

 
Posted: 8 years ago

Aw! my ever favorite RoKa😛 ...and the  scene u picked were ever green scenes.loved reading it which brought back my  sweet old kasturi days.Thank you very much dear.keep rocking👏


Posted: 8 years ago
Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 12(Archana Manav)
I dedicate this to Zebali,zoya789,taahir004 who love Manav Archana.
 

 

 

 

 
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya
 
The lead actress of the serial Pavitra Bandhan's audition was conducted by the makers of the show.

The middle class girl Archana who wanted to make it big in the TV industry got a phone call from the production house.

"Miss Archana Deshmukh?You are selected as the heroine of our show Pavitra Bandhan'.

She jumped with excitement.

Arc:Thank you so much.

The popular actot Manav was already chosen as the lead actor of the show.

 

Location...
Archana comes out of the car in a black short top and jeans.Manav was surprised to see such a beautiful lady as the heroine.He had a special feeling towards her at the first sight itself.

The director introduced Archana to Manav.
"This is Archana".
Manav shook her hands:Hi Archana.
Archana was excited.
Arn:Manavji...I have seen your serials.I am a big fan of yours.
Manav smiled:I am happy that you are my fan.But don't call me Manavji.Call me Manav.
Archana smiled:You are so down to earth.
Manav smiled.
The director came and narrated the script to Manav.
"Manav...Archana will play your  on screen brother Anuj's love interest".
Manav was sad that Archana is not his heroine,but Ankush's heroine .Ankush plays Manav's onscreen brother Anuj's character.He was upset to call her bhabhi during the shoot.
After 2 months...
Then comes a big twist in the serial as well in his life.In the serial Archana becomes a widow and Manav marries her.

Manav was very happy with the track.Because of the track he could play Archana's husband's character.But still thoughts about the future gave him tension.
He asked the director:How long will i be Aradhana's(Archana's on screen character) husband?I doubt whether like we usually see in other soaps,the dead husband will come back and Aradhana will go back to him.
The director laughed:Being the hero of our show,you should not see it as a normal stupid serial.Our show will be a pure love story of Veer and Aradhana.Aradhana will always be there with Veer.
Manav was really thrilled.But he was a bit upset about not having romantic scenes with Archana eventhough she is his wife.Because in the show Aradhana has not accepted Veer as her husband as she has not forgotten her ex-husband.
Months passed without no love.Manav was fed up.
But later  they decided to make Aradhana fall in love with Manav .Because of the public demand.they plan to shoot their consummation scene.Manav was very happy.Manav was dreaming about it.But unfortuntely Archana refused to do it.The director forced her to do it,since its essential for the story.
Finally Archana said: I will do it..but  only if all the people except the director ,Manav and camera man go out of the room.
The director agreed.Manav became happy.
Archana was very nervous.
M:Archana...don't worry.I won't make you uncomfortable.
She smiled.
They started shooting the consummation scene.Manav touched her softly..Archana did'nt feel bad.In fact unknowingly she got lost in him.
 
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar

She thought:What is happening to me?Why I feel nice when I do romantic scene with Manav?
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar
 
After the take,the director clapped:Awesome...you guys have amazing chemistry.
Manav-Archana smiled.
Manav:I hope I didn't make you feel uncomfortable.
Arc:I should thank you Manav.Usually heroines feel uncomfortable with love scenes because of their co-stars.But you are different.Working with you is really comfortable.
Manav was very happy.
Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar

Manav-Archana pair became popular..They become very good friends too.
 
They sh0t for an intimate rain scene.
Both of them were living that sensuous rain scene.
Itni mohababt saha na sakunga..
Sach mani zinda raha na sakunga..
After reaching home Archana sat  thinking about Manav's soft touch.

Archana's birthday party took place.
Man:Happy birthday Archana.You look stunning.
She blushed:Thank you Manav.
He couldn't take his eyes off her.

Manav came with a beautiful pendant for her.
Archana with a surprise:Thank you so much.
She wore it.
M:You look really beautiful now.
Archana blushed.

Tujko samloo ye mera zimma
Main hu to kya hai jane tamanna

Archana gives the first cake piece to Manav. He fed her back.

Ab jeena marana mera janam tere hath hai..
Maine kaha na sanam ..ab tu mere sath hai..

She thought:Manav has all the qualities of my dream hubby.He cares for me,he treats me like a princess though he is the Prince of TV.

To phir samhal..le me chala .. Jana kaha ..aa dil me aa

Star plus decided to shoot a Jodi special episode ...
Manav-Archana reached.

All the jodies of Star plus stood in a raw.
The men were asked to drap saree on their partner's body.Archana was shy when Manav draped saree for her.Archana felt a special sensation passing through her body.
The jodies were asked to sing a song for each other.They sang looking at each other. They were very happy singing for each other.
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(2)
Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar
Manav-Archana came together for the star parivar award show.
 

All the fans surrounded them for autograph.Manav-Archana won the favourite jodi award at the star parivaar award function.They received award together.
M:Thank you Archana for being my best on screen partner.
She was very happy because though Manav acted with many actresses he admitted that she is his best heroine.
Dil ke chaman ka hasna to dekha Jagi nazar ka sapna to dekha..
Ese bane hum ek jaan ek dil tu hai ke main hu Kahena ho mushkil..
 
Arc:Thank you Manav.If you were not my hero,Veer-Aradhana's chemistry would not have been so great.
He smiled.
Chota basanti hai tu ..tan hai gulabi mera..
Do rang milen ke baad hote nahi hai juda..
Manav-Archana did a romantic dance at the function on the hit  romantic track which is used in their show.People were jumping with joy when they were performing on the on the stage.
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(2)
Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar.(2)

After the function...
M:Archana...will you come with me for a dinner date?
She blushed:Sure.
 
To phir samhal..le me chala .. Jana kaha ..aa dil me aa
 
That night they both went to a restaurant for dinner.The whole hall  was reserved for them as they needed privacy.
Manav :Archana,we are close friends.People have accepted us as a great couple.On zoom channel,they conducted a poll regarding which on screen Jodi the viewers want to be a real couple.We got 91 percent votes supporting our marriage and i also feel that we rock on screen.Why can't we rock offscreen too? I'm sure that we will make a good couple like Veer-Aradhana.Archana,will you marry me?

Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(

Archana was surprised.She never expected it though she wanted it to be like this.
 
 
She couldn't control her happiness.
A:Manav,i was waiting for this moment.I love you too Manav.

Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar

He was very happy.
They melted in each other's arms.
 
La..lla..lasathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kaha..(Love).
 

 
 
The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago

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