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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 109)

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The rampriya os is awesome
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Thanks for PM.Smile
It was Awesome OS.Smile
The Whole part was so nicely explained.Smile
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Wonder full.
Ram and prya.
Great os.
Hot and romantic one.
Just loved it.
Tf pm.
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 58(Kesar Gulal)

Dedicating to
Ayushii_Angel,nneeiill,mrym_rauf ,SilverBell,
and Incense who are true Kesar Gulal fans.

I accept you 

When Gulal was dressed up and brought to the drawing room Kesar's heart got wounded because the man who has come to see Gulal was not him.His family and he were just the guests invited to be present at the function.Kesar suppressed his silent love for Gulal.
Gulal looked at the man who came to see her.
G:Sorry,I can't marry you.
All were shocked.
He:What an insult!A widow like you rejected a guy like me?
He left.
Gulal's parents shouted at her.
"Why did you do this Gulal?Why did you insult us?
G:You both made me do this.I had told you both that no one should come to see me as I don't want marriage.
Her father Rishi:Then are you planning to sit here as a widow always?
Gulal was married before.On her wedding night on the way to her husband's house they met with an accident and her husband died on the spot itself.Gulal was saved though she was in the ventilator for a few days.
Her mother Abhaya:We don't want your life to be spoiled.You have to marry someone.
G:I have no plan to remain a widow.But please don't bring any random guy here.I refused to marry the guys who came here because I am in love with someone.
Rishi and Abhaya were surprised.Kesar was shocked.
Ab:You are lying to escape from marriage.
G:No,I am saying the truth.
R:If such a guy exists tell who he is.
Gulal stammered.Suddenly she saw Kesar.Immediately she said.Kesar.
All were shocked.
R:Kesar,is this true?
Kesar  looked at Gulal.She was tensed.
Kesar smiled:Yes.It's true that we  are in love.

R:Then why did you guys hid it ?Anyways we have no objection as we just want you to settle down.But Kesar's parents.
Kesar's father are my beat friend and Gulal is like our daughter.So if Kesar loves Gulal we have no problem.
Kesar's mother Meera:We don't care about Gulal's past or age as for us Kesar's happiness is most important.He had told us about his love for Gulal.But we could'nt do anything as you were bringing some other proposals for Gulal.
Gulal was shocked while her parents were surprised.
Kesar felt that he was living his dream where he got his Gulal in just one moment.
Gulal was dull.
G:But we want to marry only after Kesar finishes his studies and his career gets established.
R:We are willing to wait.
Gulal was relieved.
Everyone smiled.

Kesar came to see Gulal outside.
Gulal thought:I should ask him about what Meera aunty told about his love for me.Is it true or...?

K:Gulal,I am so surprised to know that you also love me.
G:What rubbish!You believed my lie?
K:Means?You told everyone that you love me.
G:Yes,but that was just a lie to escape from marriage.

My first marriage tragedy is so painful that I don't want to get married again.Now for 2-3 years there won't be any pressure for marriage.
Kesar was shocked.His eyes were wet.
K:How can you so selfish Gulal?For your need you played with my emotions?Also with our parents' emotions?
Gulal thought:Though he is younger to me he is so much matured than me.
K:But I really love you Gulal.
Gulal was shocked:What?
K:l have been loving you for years. since I came to know the meaning of the word love.
G:What nonsense!I am older than you.
K:But there is so age bar for love and I really love you. should erase these stupid thoughts from your mind.

K:Enough Gulal.Don't insult my love.My love is not a childish crush to forget you that fast.

Gulal was stunned:Kesar!
K:I will give you a week time.Next week is Holi.If yo accept me colour me.If you can't stay away from me.I will accept my fate.
His eyes were wet.
He walked away leaving her upset.

1 week gave both of them sleepless nights.Gulal was haunted by Kesar's confession.

Holi day...

Kesar was restless.He saw Gulal standing at a distance and looking at him.Seeing him look at her she turned off her face.Kesar lost all his hopes and decided to walk away even from the holi party.
He looked back only to see the glimpse of Gulal for one last time.But she was not there.
He thought:Guess she also left the party as she does'nt want to see my face.
He tried to walk off sadly.Sudeenly someone caught his hand.He turned back.He was surprised to see Gulal.

G:Are you leaving before getting coloured by me?
He was stunned.
K:Gulal...did you really accept me?
She cupped his face in her hands.

She smiled with full of tears in her eyes:Yes,that also with full heart.Because in few days you captured my heart.

He was very happy.She coloured his cheek.He coloured her back.Then they danced happily.

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 09 November 2015 at 11:45pm

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Indeed That Was A Lovely OS
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Kesar Gulal OS

Well Written OS
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Amzng story
Loved it

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