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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 42(Vansh Iccha)



Dedicating this to sanghita0000 who loves Vansh Iccha

 Don't leave me...


Vansh realised the depth of his mistake now.He misunderstood his loving wife Iccha to be having an affair with his brother Veer.Now he understands Iccha's innocence.He felt prick of conscience when he realized that he punished a poor innocent girl by ignoring her love for a long time for no fault of her's.
Vansh was guilty.He went towards Iccha:I am sorry Iccha.I hurt you a lot.
She raised her eye brows and looked at him:It's ok.Anyone can make mistakes.
He was relieved.
But Iccha's next few words gave him a shock.
Iccha:Vansh...today you had asked me to leave this house..So now it's time for me to return home.
That moment only Vansh remembered that during his continous fights he had asked her to leave the house after holi.He could'nt look at Iccha's face.He did'nt want her to see him becoming weak hearing her exit.She looked at him to know how he reacts.

ICCHA:Why are you not saying anything Vansh?

VANSH:What should i say?There is nothing left.Right?

Iccha was broken.
She thought:Even if i go it does'nt matter for Vansh.
She tried to be strong by controlling her tears.


Iccha started packing her bag.
She touched her bosom.She felt her heart beating fast.
She remembered the Holi celebration which took place on the previous day.
Vansh was drunk.Her friend Tapasya made her drink bang forcefully.In the drunken state Vansh and Iccha reached each other.They coloured each other's cheek.


Vansh caressed her face.She closed her eyes.
Vansh:I love you Iccha.
Her face blossoms hearing his confession.
Vansh:Why don't you love me?
Iccha:Who said I don't love you.I love you a lot Vansh.
They shared an emotional eye lock.

Present...
Her mind said:Vansh,why don't you stop me from going?Why are your heart made of stone?During Holi under bang's effect you confessed that you love me.I remember it Vansh though you forgot it.
Vansh said in his mind:On holi,under bang's effect you yourself expressed your true feelings towards me.Still you are going back?
Vansh looked at Iccha packing her bag.
Vansh said in his mind:When you go away from me i find my life strange Iccha.
Vansh's eyes sang:Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee..

Vansh said in his mind:Without you i feel i have no identity.When I was destroying my life immersed in drugs you only saved me.What kind of a man am I?I am very bad.If i was good  i would not have hurt an innocent girl like Iccha.

VANSH:Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hoon, Kya Jaane Main Kaun Hoon
Koi Yeh Samjhaaye Mujhe, Kaise Main Yeh Gum Sahoon
Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hoon, Kya Jaane Main Kaun Hoon
Koi Yeh Samjhaaye Mujhe, Kaise Main Yeh Gum Sahoon
Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee

Vansh said in his mind:Without you my world is full of darkness.When my life was full of darkness you came up with light.With your exit light has gone forever.Again i can feel only darkness everywhere.
VANSH:Phirse Andhere Chhaa Gaye, Khoyee Ujaale Ki Kiran
Kal Raahon Mein Phool The, Ab Hai Kaanton Ki Chubhan
Phirse Andhere Chhaa Gaye, Khoyee Ujaale Ki Kiran
Kal Raahon Mein Phool The, Ab Hai Kaanton Ki Chubhan
Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee

Iccha looked at Vansh's face.Her eyes followed his eyes.She could feel pain in his eyes.
She said in her mind:Why do i feel that Vansh is very upset?Why do i feel that your pain is mine too?Ever since i saw you you have been there in my dreams also.Tell me Vansh.what bothers you?What makes you upset?

She moved towards Vansh and looked at his face.
Her eyes spoke to him in a musical tone:
Tum Hi Kaho Kya Baat Hai, Mujhko Lage Tum Apne Kyon
Jabse Dekha Hai Tumhe, Dekh Rahi Hoon Sapne Kyon
Tum Hi Kaho Kya Baat Hai, Mujhko Lage Tum Apne Kyon
Jabse Dekha Hai Tumhe, Dekh Rahi Hoon Sapne Kyon

She said in her mind:When i am away from you i find my life very strange.



ICCHA:Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Kaise Main Tumse Yeh Kahoon, Jaan Ho Tum Aur Dil Bhi Tum..

VANSH:Iccha..?You want to say something to me?
She nodded her head.
He was eager to hear it:Then say...
ICCHA:If others see me leave  theyall will be very upset.If they come to know about our marriage's truth they will be shattered.If they see me go they will ask a lot of questions.I may not be able to answer their questions.I can't face them.So i am going without biding 'good-bye' to them.Before they come back from Kasi i am going.
Vansh who expected Iccha to tell him that she can't go away from him was shattered hearing this.He realised that the worst moment in his life has reached.
ICCHA:Bye Vansh.
For a moment he could'nt believe that she was going away from his life forever.He was numb.He wanted to tell her not to go.But his lips shivered.

He turned back as he did'nt have the courage to see her going.Iccha was really upset.
She said in her mind:I told him that i am going.Still Vansh did'nt stop me.

Iccha took her bag and left the room.Suddenly Vansh ran after her.She turned back only to see him once more.Her eyes was filled up with painful tears.Vansh had some hope.But his hope shattered when she turned back and put her foot forward to get out of the house.That moment he broke his ego and held her hand.
She turned back and looked at him with a shock.Her bag fell down.
They shared an emotional eye lock.
VANSH:Please don't go Iccha..please...
Iccha could'nt believe her ears.She stared at him unbelievingly.
ICCHA:Why?Why should i stay here?The duration of our marriage is over Vansh.I think you forgot the date.Holi was yesterday.after holi you asked me to leave.

VANSH:Let the duration get over.But please don't go away from me.Life will be dry if you go.I want you Iccha.

Tear drops fell down from her eyes.
Iccha said in her mind:Without you where can i go Vansh?How will i tell you that my life as well as my heart are only you.How will i make you understand you that for me everything is you.
She told him that she cannot go away from him though music:
Kaise Main Tumse Yeh Kahoon, Jaan Ho Tum Aur Dil Bhi Tum
Tum Bin Ab Jaaoon Kahan, Raah Bhi Tum Manzil Bhi Tum

He was relieved.
He uttered her name with surprise:Iccha!
She smiled with tears in her eyes.
VANSH:Iccha,you are my heart.You are my life.My heart is beating only because of your presence in my life.
She became emotional hearing his words filled with love for her.
He sang from the bottom of his heart for her:
Kaise Main Tumse Yeh Kahoon, Jaan Ho Tum Aur Dil Bhi Tum
Tum Bin Ab Jaaoon Kahan, Raah Bhi Tum Manzil Bhi Tum

They both looked at each other's eyes and sang.
ICCHA:Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi..
VANSH:Dhoop Bhi..
Vansh and Iccha together:
Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee...
VANSH:Chhaaon Bhi..
ICCHA:Dhoop Bhi..
Vansh and Iccha together:Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee..{Sailab}.
He extended his arms towards her.Forgetting everything else she ran to his arms.They wept embracing each other..


They forget everything else being with each other.
They put an end to their painful past and drowned in love and romance through out their life.

The end

 


Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome OS! well written!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful os
Loved it

Finally they r together and hppy
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Hi
The os is really beautifully pen down
though i haven't seen this serial but the way you have showed the love is really nice
So vaansh and Iccha though got egoes in their life 
but the pain of going away made them break all their anger and they became one 
I love it 

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Posted: 8 years ago
sweet but emotional story of jai bani..
both wer alone, one being orphan, one having relatives but not family...
jai thought he was older to bani so he wanted bani to b with pushkar.. but bani's true feelings, & her words touched him...
superb... thnks 4 writing on jai-bani...
very well written..
thnks 4 d pics...
thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
.WOW!! it was lovely...U wrote each and every emotions beautifully...it was perfect...how much I wish that cvs didn't with Ichchha between veer and vansh...and later veer between tappu and ichchha...total waste......but u justified the plot and ended it beautifully...Edited by sanghita0000 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely OS
thank god Vansh let go his pride n stopped her
otherwise both would've been miserable
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 43( Kunal Nimmo,Nihaal Suhaana,Sharad Sneha)



Dedicate this to SanKsgian who asked me to write on Sharad Sneha


Happy new year

Kunal is very happy that his brother Sharad is engaged to his love Sneha.Kunal's world is His brother Sharad and sister Suhaana after his parents passed away.Kunal's sister Suhaana is married to Nihaal.Kunal liked Sharad's choice Sneha.He is a perfect bhabhi according to him.He looks at the silly snaps he took with Sneha's family in his mobile.


His eyes strikes Nimmo.Yes,Kunal has feelings towards Sneha's sister Nimmo.But he has not revealed it yet.Because of ego he hides his love in his heart.

Kunal announced:I am arranging a New year party.
Kunal's sister Suhaana:Wow Kunal..that's a good idea.
 Nihaal:Yes Kunal.We will welcome new year with our happiness.
Suhaana:We all will be there for the party.What more happiness do we need?
Sharad:Yes.I am waiting for the new year party.The party will rock for sure.What's theme of the party?
Kunal:Nothing special.But everyone would wear western clothes for the party.
Nimmo was shocked:Western clothes?No way.
Kunal stares at her:That's the only way Nimmo.
Her face becomes dull:But even jiji won't wear western dress.
Sharad:Don't worry about Sneha Nimmo.I will buy one for her.I am sure that she cannot refuse to wear it.Right Sneha.
Sneha smiles silently.
Nimmo:I can't digest the theme.
Sneha:Come on Nimmo.It's only a party.We are not asked to wear western clothes through out our life.
Sharad:Ya..

Nimmo is still in a dilemma.
Kunal goes to another room.Nimmo follows him.
NIMMO:This is too much.We are Indians.You can't force us to wear western dress.
K:It is my party and I will decide what others should wear.
N:No...you can't be so stubborn.
K: Ok,then don't come for the party.
Nimmo is shocked.
N:Why are you so stubborn Kunal?

K:I know why you are hesitating to wear western dress.Because you can't carry it off properly.
Nimmo gets angry:What did you say Mr.Kunal?I can't carry off western dress?You think only high class girls can look good in western dress?Wait and watch.You will be surprised to see my make over.
Kunal smirks:Make over?You?Never!
NIMMO:You can't underestimate me.
She challenges him and goes away.

Suhaana comes out of the bathroom after taking bath.She is wiping her hair.Water drops fell on Nihaal.He holds her by her waist.
They share a sensuous eye lock.
Suhaana:What are you doing?
Nihaal:You are so beautiful Suhaana.

She blushes.
Nih:I can't wait to see you in the western outfit at the new year party.
Suh:What if I don't wear western dress?
Nih:No problem.Because in Indian attire also you are ravishing.
He caresses her wet face sensually.She closes her eyes drowning in his passionate love.












Sharad gifts a dress to Sneha.Sneha becomes uncomfortable seeing the western dress.
Sn:Sorry Sharad.I don't wear such clothes.
Sharad:Please Sneha..for my sake?
Finally she nods her head:Ok dear.I will wear it.


 He smiles.




December 31st night...
Suhaana wears a one strap black gown with diamond earrings.
Nihaal is flattered.
Nih:I can't control anymore Suhaana.
He goes to taste her skin.She pushes him laughing.
Suh:Nihaal...you are forgetting that we have to go for the party now.So stop getting naughty and let us leave for the party.
He smiles:Ok darling.But I won't leave you after the party.
She blushes.

Sneha wears the red gown which Sharad gifted her.Nimmo is surprised.
Nimmo:My God!Jiji in a western dress?I can't believe my eyes.Sharad jeeju will faint.
Sneha is shy.
Sneha:Stop it Nimmo.
They smile.
Nimmo:Ok jeeji.You go to jeeju.
Sneha:What about you?
Nimmo:Don't wait for me.If you wait for me you will get delayed.You will be late for the party.
Sneha:But Nimmo...
Nimmo:Go...Jeeju will be waiting for you.
Sharad comes to pick up Sneha.
Sharad is stunned to see Sneha in gown.
Sharad:Wa..Sneha..i did'nt expect this much.You look so pretty.
She is shy.He holds her closer.Nimmo smiles.
Shara:Please Nimmo...

Nimmo:I understand that you guys need privacy.I am going.
Sharad pulls Sneha closer.
A romantic eye lock.
He takes out a necklace from his pocket and places it around her neck.She is surprised:Beautiful!
He smiles.
Sharad:Now I need to change.
Sneh:Means you are not dressed yet?
Sharad:No...I thought we both will dress up together.
Sne:You naughty.
Sharad:Close your eyes.Let me dress up.
Sneha pushes him to a room and closes the door.
Sneh:Don't change in front of me.Change there.
Sharad:Why?If I change in front of you will you lose your control?
Sneha giggles:Stop your stupid jokes.
He smiles.
He comes out dressed up.
Sneha smiles:Very handsome.
He goes closer to her:Really?
She smiles nodding her head.
He holds her hand.
Sharad:Shall we go for the party?
She nods her head.
They both go for the party.

Kunal is still at the house.
Kunal:Where is this Nimmo?Why is she not coming?I think she decided not to come for the party as she is not confident to wear western dress.
Suddenly he hears a voice:Nimmo is never diffident.She is always confident.
He turns back.
He can't believe his eyes.
Nimmo is sitting on the sofa like a Queen.She looks hot in her black gown.

Kunal:Nimmo!

Nimmo:Kunal...am i looking hot?

Kunal can't admit it openly.
Nimmo:Ya...ok...
She goes towards him:Just ok?
Kunal is becoming weak by her killing look.
She dances in a seductive manner to the sensuous song
"Raat Ka Nasha Abhi
Aankh Se Gaya Nahin...
Tera Nashila Badan
Baahon Ne Chhoda Nahin
Aankhen To Kholi Magar
Sapna Woh Toda Nahin
Haan Wohi Woh Wohi
Saason Pe Rakha Hua Tere Hoton Ka
Sapna Abhi Hai Wahi
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi
Aankh Se Gaya Nahin..."
Kunal loses his control and pulls her towards him.
She is shocked as she never expected him to do so.She danced only to tease him.
Kunal:I accept failure.You won.You look extremely beautiful.

They share a romantic eye lock.
Nimmo becomes shy and breaks the eye lock.
Kunal leans towards her lips.


The shy Nimmo moves away from him.
Nimmo:What are you doing Kunal?
Kunal:I am sorry Nimmo if you did'nt like it.But I don't regret doing it.Because I love you.
Nimmo is very happy.
Kunal:It's just that my manly ego did'nt allow me to confess my love to you.But I can't hide my feelings anymore.
Kunal is tensed about Nimmo's reaction.Nimmo goes near him and embraces him.Kunal smiles happily holding her closer.
Nimmo:Kunal...I think we should leave for the party.
Kunal:Yes.We will go for the party.

They both reach the destination.
Sharad and Sneha are busy dancing to the soft violin music.

Kunal holds her hand to dance.She does'nt resist.They start dancing intimately.

Sneha thinks:Nimmo?Has she reached?





Sharad:Chill Sneha.Look back.
She looks back and gets surprised to see Kunal Nimmo dancing together.
Sharad:Another love story in the making.
Sharad-Sneha smile.
Suddenly they hear a loud noise..a burst...
Glittering powder is thrown on them.
They hear the voice of the anchor:Happy new year.
Kunal and Nimmo look at each other and wish:Happy new year!
 Nihaal Suhaana come towards them.

Nihaal:Don't worry Kunal.We are  not here to disturb you.We just came to wish 'Happy new year'.
Nimmo smiles:Happy New year jeejaji and Suhaana di.
Suhaana smiles:Happy new year my dear bhai Kunal and Nimmo.Ok carry on..
Kunal:What?
Suhaana:Your romance.
Nihaal smiles in a naughty way.
They are embarrassed as Suhaana and Nihaal caught them red handed.
They go  away and continue their dance.
Slowly Kunal and Nimmo look at each other and smile.

The end

 
Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Omg you remember this request on sharad and sneha
Even I forgot
N u dedicate it to me
Eeeopppooo
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love this one
Love it to bits
Even the pics are amazing