Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva - Page 53

 

I have already written on them.check out

 

 

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Can u please write on manyata and udayveer of Dekha Ek Khwaab 

k ty 

beautifully written 

thanks u changed it into happy ending

There are deceased lovers.Beautifully written

Unres

This was so awesome 

Nahar is fair person and Salon is dark.Nahar had proposed Saloni but she rejected it as she was dark and what would the locality think.She got married to the person who was like her but he made her sad by killing her baby inside her.She should be put behind bars for aborting a baby .its a crime .Just for a simple issue killing a baby. Nahar understood and gave her the happiness which she deserved .He put a diamond ring on her finger ,which he had proposed her before.they both got married 

And their baby is also dark and they both don't have a prob with that.

Nice to see Nahar chosed Sererat(ones inner beauty) that their khuboosurat face(fairness) .Beautifully penned down.

I just love your works jazz.you are.improving a lot 

Your writing is just amazing me a lot.

Keep up the good work.😳

so Saloni rejected Nahar because of her skin colour n couldn't see a future with him

but look how fate took a hand n made her realize love is all that counts

cant believe that first husband of hers forced her to kill their baby ...disgusting man

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin