Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva - Page 38

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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples) episode 27 (Yash Aarti)



Dedicated to cuteariya and Suhaana who asked me specially to write on Aarya.


Bangles for you



Yash knew that Aarti was mad about bangles.
He wanted to take Aarti out to but bangles for her to wear for Lalit-Payal's (Aarti's sister and fiance who is Yash's cousin)wedding.

He did'nt know how to approach Aarti for that.But somehow he managed to go near her.

YASH:Aarti...I want to...


AARTI:You want to?


YASH:I would like to...

Aarti thought:He looks arrogant.But actually he does'nt even have the guts to look at my eyes and talk to me.

Then she saw Yash's brother PRATEEK coming.

She thought:Let me make fun of Yashji...

Aarti looked at PRATEEK:Prateek...did you know that auntiji sent a bangles man  for me?


PRATEEK:Really?

AARTI:Yes.Lots of bangles.

Yash was surprised.

AARTI:But I am confused which bangles to be worn for jeeji's wedding.Can you please help me to select the best bangles?

PRATEEK:Why not Aartiji?

Yash thought:What the!PRATEEK to select bangles for Aarti?Then it will be pathetic.Why is this Aarti seeking his help?

Aarti sat near the bangles seller and opened the bangle box .She took bangles looking at Yash.

AARTI:Prateeki...sit near me.

PRATEEK sat near Aarti.

Yash felt discomfort seeing them sitting together.She took a bangle from the bangle collection:How is this bangle?

PRATEEK:Good!

She wore another bangle:How is this bangle?Tell me no...


Yash stared at PRATEEK.Aarti smiled seeing Yash's facial expression.

PRATEEK:This is good.
She wore a another bangle:What about this one?


PRATEEK:Good...But...

He took another bangle.

PRATEEK:Aartiji...this will suit you more.You will look very pretty.


AARTI:Really?I also loved your selection Prateek...
Yash fumed with anger.

She wore the bangles he selected and shook her hand smiling.

AARTI:Am I looking pretty?

 
PRATEEK:Very beautiful Aartiji...
He took another bangle.
PRATEEK:You can try this one also.
AARTI:Thanks a lot Prateek...You are so sweet.I feel nice when you give me compliments.




PRATEEK:You are so sweet Aartiji.How can I not give you compliments?
Aarti:If you think it suits me please make me wear it Prateek.
P:What?
Aarti winked at him.
Prateek whispered:So you want to make bhai jealous?
Aarti smiled.With a naughty smile Prateek made her wear the bangle.
Aarti imagined Yash making her wear the bangle instead of Prateek.

When she awoke from her sweet imagination she looked at Yash.
Yash controlled himself.Suppressing his temper he stared at PRATEEK.Aarti felt like laughing seeing Yash fuming with jealousy.

Later...

PRATEEK:Aartiji,mumma  told me to take you out to buy glass bangles.So let us go.

AARTI:Sure.

Aarti went out with PRATEEK.Yash got angry.

YASH:Why always PRATEEK is coming between me and Aarti whenever we are alone.

He took his car out and searched for Aarti and PRATEEK.




On the way due to traffic jam his car got jammed in between the vehicles.That time he heard police men discussing.

"Pathetic accident.The girl died on the spot here and the boy I taken to the hospital".

Then Yash noticed a destructive car on the road which caused traffic block.

He got out of the car and went there.He was shocked to see some glass bangle pieces there.He took a glass piece.

YASH: PRATEEK and Aarti took taxi and went out.This is a taxi.Aarti must have bought glass bangles.Were they Aarti and PRATEEK?Then that means the girl is dead.Aarti...


Yash walked around like a mad man.He was restless and was panting very badly.Suddenly his eyes struck someone.
Yash saw Aarti standing on the road side.He was relieved.

He ran towards her.

YASH:Aarti...

Aarti was surprised:Yashji,you...here?

Yash cupped her face in his hands emotionally:Aarti,are you alright?I was scared..I doubted if you and PRATEEK met with an accident.


 She saw Yash sweating.
 Aarti thought:Thinking that I lost my life he behaves as if he lost his life.



They both feel their heart beating fast.



AARTI:Yashji,I am alright.

Yash came back to senses and realized that he was caressing Aarti's face.He moved backwards.
AARTI:Yashji...why did you get tensed so much for me?


Yash did'nt have words.

Aarti and Yash looked at each other silently.



Suddenly PRATEEK came:Hi bhai...how come you are here?


YASH:What are you guys doing here?

PRATEEK:Bhai..we bought bangles..but the taxi car had brake down.So I was looking for a taxi.Anyways don't worry.We both had a lot of fun shopping.Right Aartiji?


Yash got angry.He looked at Aarti's face.


He saw the vehcles moving on the road.

YASH:PRATEEK,you both come.I will take you both home.

PRATEEK:Yash..then you both go.I will catch up my friends and come.

YASH:Ok.

PRATEEK:Bye Aartiji.
AARTI:Bye
Yash stared at Aarti.


Yash and Aarti got inside the car.Yash looked at Aarti.


Aarti started wearing the new glass bangles with a lot of excitement.

AARTI:Prateek's selection is superb.Nice bangles.

Yash controlled his anger.But while wearing the bangles her hand got wounded.

AARTI:Ah!

YASH:Aarti...


He wiped the blood on her hand.

Then with his teeth he plucked the glass piece which was stuck upto her bleeding skin.



Aarti looked at him unbelievingly.Because she had never thought that Yash would even use his teeth to protect her.


YASH:Don't buy the bangles that stupid PRATEEK select for you.See...these are tight for you.

Aarti felt like laughing hearing Yash involving PRATEEK into this.

Yash drove to a shop.He left Aarti in the car and went inside the shop.Then came back.

AARTI:Where did you go Yashji?

He gave her the box:I bought bangles for you.I hope these bangles will suit you.

Aarti could'nt believe it.She thought:Yashji bought bangles for me?


After reaching back home Yash walked away.Aarti wore bangles.She caressed the bangles gifted by the person she loves silently.


 Aarti went near Yash.He was engrossed in some thoughts about Aarti.She shook his hands to make him hear the tinkle of bangles.

He looked back sensing Aarti's presense.
His eyes fell on her hands which were adorned by bangles.
AARTI:Yashji...i wore your bangles.



Slowly she smiled.


She looked at him seriously to know his reaction.His silence made her smile disappear.

He did'nt know how to react.Though he was very happy to see her wear the bangles he gifted her he was not a romantic person who was going to express it.
Aarti thought:Why can't he say something about how I look after wearing these bangles?
YASH:Thank you Aarti for accepting my gift.


AARTI:Why are you thanking me?I have heard that you never thank anyone.
YASH:Actually i don't buy gifts for anyone.For the first time i bought something like this.So I was tensed whether you will like it or not.

AARTI:I liked them a lot.Thanks for such lovely bangles.Without knowing my size you selected the right bangles for me.


They both smiled.



AARTI:Why did you buy bangles for me?Usually you don't buy such things for anyone.Right?
Yash's lips shivered.
Aarti said in her mind:Tell Yashji...open your heart and say...
He looked at her eyes deeply:I love you Aarti.

She was surprised.
Y:I hid my love for a long time.Not anymore.I fear that if I don't confess my love at least now I will lose you.
A:Because you fear if I accept Prateek if you don't confess your love.Right?
He was embarrassed.
A:Never Yashji.Because I too love you.
He was surprised.

He extended his arms.She ran into his arms happily.

The end





Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome OS jasmine..
thanks for dedication...

please correct some words.. in the OS